[Report This]Date: Dec 22, 2014 06:52 pm Title: Chapter 104
beautiful end to this chapter mandy got to get behind the wheel again and now she has over came her fears i truly hope the baby is michaels and not steve's loved this chapter i look foward to reading more from you
Author's Response:
Another hurdle jumpped for mandy.
thanks for reviewing
[Report This]Date: Dec 20, 2014 02:15 pm Title: Chapter 103
mandy is so going to be pissed at michael for the homemade sex tape i cant wait to see that fight lol i would love to see jess get pregnant before the wedding great chapter please keep up the awesome writing of this story
[Report This]Date: Dec 20, 2014 02:07 pm Title: Chapter 103
Yesssssss, squirm lol; I love it Paris is so funny & sassy. CJ said Ma MA to Mandy ahhhh :)).
I still suggest evening wedding at the ranch with those small lanterns you stick to the ground lighting the aisle and a beautiful gazebo lit up with candles. The heavens clear and the stars shinning.
I really DON'T prefer that both sisters get pregnant at the same time. Jess gets to the bride and newlywed. Mandy gets to be pregnant and continues her recovery. I want all hormones, horniness, cravings and just any shenanigans with the pregnancy to be between Mandy & Michael. Jess & Will will get their moment hopefully much later.
As far the video, I think Mandy will be mad at 1st, but she will watch it and she will get super turn ON!!!!!!!! Who wouldn't I mean picture it: Michael doing his Billie Jean dance naked, every hip thrust going inside me I mean Mandy lol (sorry had moment **blushing** ;).
Looking forward to next chapter..Is all for L.O.V.E....Lummi <33 {Billie Jean not my lover, still having naughty images in my mind ;) }
Date: Dec 20, 2014 12:51 am Title: Chapter 103
Oh no he didn't Mandy is going to kill him
Paris she's great love the kid logical
Loved the chapter
Yes it's a great idea if they both are pregnant around the same time and raise the kids together
Date: Dec 19, 2014 09:06 am Title: Chapter 102
I hope Mandy is pregnant
Jess and Will marrying at the ranch would also be a great idea
Byw read somewhere you can get pregnant as soon as you quit with birth control pills
Can't wait for more
[Report This]Date: Dec 18, 2014 09:25 pm Title: Chapter 102
i really think will and jess should have a beach wedding at sunset i truly hope mandy is pregnant again because michael and her deserve it after the struggles they have faced i loved this chapter i cant wait to read more ever since i have been reading this story it has gotten more beautiful keep up the amazing writing
Date: Dec 18, 2014 07:59 pm Title: Chapter 102
Wow....Will is HOT!!! So glad they are engaged....time for wedding and a baby!! I love them together. Yes! Once again Mandy is pregnant!!!
[Report This]Date: Dec 18, 2014 07:48 pm Title: Chapter 102
Whoop - Whoop, Jess & Will sitting in a tree K.I.S.S.I.N.G, they already in love, they soon getting married ( I suggest at the ranch nighttime, candles lighting the aisle, a beautiful gazebo with candles a cristal clear nite full of stars) then comes Will with a baby carriage. ;)... No right away though lol
Also It would be cute, that Paris did or say something at the wedding like Uncle Will are you going to give squirm to aunt Jessy like Daddy did to mommy to have a baby. Lol
I prayed that Mandy is pregnant I know that's what they both want. Michael is so cute he is so excited and is not confirm yet. I need more love making scenes between Michael & Mandy. Jess & Will are stealing all the sexy moments. (Yes I'm team M&M all the way <33).
Very Excited about the next chapter: Is Michael a DA DA again??.... Is all for L.O.V.E... Lummi <3
[Report This]Date: Dec 16, 2014 06:05 pm Title: Chapter 96
Better late than never. I thank you, for so sweetly taken my suggestion on the setting of Jess & Will 1st time is was hot & sexy.
Your a very talented writer and you have the gift of transporting the reader and make her (in my case), feel the emotions of each character. Keep up the great work and thank so much for letting be even in a smallest way a part of your story telling. With the L.O.V.E. Lummi. <3
[Report This]Date: Dec 12, 2014 07:09 am Title: Chapter 101
beautiful chapter for a beautiful story i cant wait to read more of this great story
Date: Dec 12, 2014 04:17 am Title: Chapter 101
Loved the chapter .good thing no kids walked in this time
Date: Dec 12, 2014 04:17 am Title: Chapter 101
Can you say.....Will almost got killed by sneaking up on Jess! Crazy! I'm sure Mandy was embarrassed but oh we'll...lol....great chapter
Date: Dec 11, 2014 10:44 pm Title: Chapter 101
Well, all I can say is at least they didn't have to explain the birds and bees to a 4 year old again!
[Report This]Date: Dec 03, 2014 06:41 pm Title: Chapter 100
I just LOVE, LOVE, LOVE both couples. You do a great job updating all the time... Some writers only update occasionally but you don't leave us hanging for long. Kudos to you and your amazing mind.
Author's Response:
Thanks it really means a lot my friend
Date: Dec 03, 2014 03:56 am Title: Chapter 100
I'm actually pretty amazed! Not many writers here can pull off a dual plot like yours!!
Author's Response:
Thanks..its a lot of work but they will probably merge for a little bit now that Will and Jess get home