Date: Jan 03, 2015 05:31 pm Title: Chapter 108
A Halloween theme for the wedding? Not seen that before
Poor Mandy really feel for her
Can't wait for more
Date: Jan 01, 2015 11:16 am Title: Chapter 107
Loved it how they handled Steve
Maybe Will find something close to the ranch and Will and Jess can live close to Mandy and Michael raising their family's together
So glad the baby is Michaels
[Report This]Date: Jan 01, 2015 11:12 am Title: Chapter 107
Awesome update, I can see the misunderstanding listening in. Shoot If I have been Mandy I who have though the same thing. I'm so proud of Michael for not drinking he is getting much stronger when it comes to difficult situations. I believe deep down there is an insecurity in Mandy about how she looks maybe she should get at least a consultation about possibly removing the scars. We know for sure Michael adores her just the way she is.
Is official it is a baby JACKSON in the oven. Steve is such a b*stard. I gotta say when he drop that C word I was ready to jump in the story and whoop his *ss myself he is the ultimate definition of *SSHOLE. I strongly dislike the C word.
I do feel sorry for Will being dismissed from the clinic. At least they let him leave quietly and it doesn't affect his license. I'm positive he will find something better. Maybe after his wedding & honeymoon with the help of Michael he can open his own practice. With Michael's influence in the entertainment world he may get a few VIP patients. (Just an suggestion) Looking forward next update. Is all for L.O.V.E.....Lummi <33.
[Report This]Date: Jan 01, 2015 01:38 am Title: Chapter 107
loved this chapter im glad to truly know that michael is the father of mandy's baby at least now they can enjoy the baby with out doubts in their head loved this chapter keep up the amazing writing im looking forward to the next chapter
Date: Dec 31, 2014 08:49 pm Title: Chapter 107
Wow! All I can say is poor Mandy and Michael. Thank goodness he didn't drink and Jess was able to make Mandy go to him!! Finally they never have to deal with Steve again...he is such a ?!@!!$&@ and now Will and Jess can be together
[Report This]Date: Dec 29, 2014 02:22 am Title: Chapter 106
loved this chapter but i truly thought mandy would be more pissed off at michael for recording them having sex together lol i cant wait to see the wedding of will and jess thats gonna be a very beautiful chapter i look forward to reading more of this truly amazing beautiful loving story keep up the beautiful writing that you do very well
[Report This]Date: Dec 28, 2014 11:27 pm Title: Chapter 106
Whooo, that was hotness. I knew that Mandy would be upset at 1st but, the more she watched; that she would get into it. Instead of pleasuring herself she did it to Michael. Yep those two have some freakiness in them and I loved it.
Just an idea for the wedding how about by Lake Neverland. Maybe during Sunrise and then have a brunch, like a whole day celebration with the family, rides, animals the whole magic of Neverland :). Just a suggestion.
I looking forward to Karma Day and see what fate holds that J*rk Steve. Let the future be kind to Mandy & Michael they both suffered enough.
Looking forward to the next update. All for L.O.V.E... Lummi <3.
Date: Dec 28, 2014 05:24 am Title: Chapter 106
Lol next time Mandy in charge taping them lol that could be interesting
Those two are so in love its wonderful
Can't wait to see how they handle Steve
Im glad Jess and Will are getting married on the range
[Report This]Date: Dec 27, 2014 11:09 pm Title: Chapter 105
beautiful ending to this chapter i cant wait to read more i look forward to reading the new story in the new year keep up your great writing
Date: Dec 25, 2014 08:12 pm Title: Chapter 105
Most definately will read new story. Sounds great! She is gonna be ticked at Michael but I like the idea of watching the kids video and then ...bam...here comes Michaels movie!!
steve ...I hope...is finally gonna get busted
[Report This]Date: Dec 25, 2014 05:56 pm Title: Chapter 105
Great update. This is a great way to spend christmas day this was spicy. The sexy & raunchy talk from Michael was very HOTT.
This plan has to work, no ifs and buts about it. Michael is such a awesome man he would adopt the child no questions ask, now that's a REAL MAN. Steve is a major *sshole. I don't believe if wishing bad towards any one but, I believe in karma and Steve has some major Karma coming his way. Please let this baby be Michael's this is a token of the miracle of having Mandy back. Pretty please maybe a little girl. ;).
As far the naughty video, I still say Mandy will mad at 1st but, as she watches she'll get into it. I hope the way it comes about Michael shows her the video of the kids and the naughtiness begins to play, just an idea ;)).
Your new story, I like the sneak peak. The story seems so fresh go for it. I will be reading it and reviewing ;)... Is all for L.O.V.E. Lummi <33 Merry Christmas Michael <33
Tinker 13 - Merry Christmas/Feliz Navidad, may you have a wonderful day with your love ones and may god continues to bless you and your talented writing skills :)
Merry Christmas to all my friends in my MJ Family.... I L.O.V.E. All Lummi
Author's Response:
Darn you girl..you are reading my mind again..you'll find out why I say that soon enough.
merry Christmas to you and your family.
Date: Dec 25, 2014 02:10 pm Title: Chapter 105
Mandy will be so mad at him once she finds out
Hopefully their plan to get the truth out of Steve works
The new story sounds amazing can't wait to read it
Ps merry Christmas
Author's Response:
Thanks merry Christmas to you too!!
Date: Dec 23, 2014 12:38 am Title: Chapter 104
Get the truth out of Steve just to have peace at mind and he no longer can haunt the moments of joy
Happy for Mandy being pregnant and able to drive
Love little CJ
Can't wait to see Jess being pregnant she deserves it
Can't there be a way they live closer? Would love to see that
Author's Response:
We will see how Mike will get the truth out of Steve...could be interesting
thanks for reviewing
Date: Dec 22, 2014 08:00 pm Title: Chapter 104
Mandy really is moving along...good for her. Love the drs appt...lol...Steve needs to be gone.... I don't like that mean man
Author's Response:
Well Mike might have a plan to shut him up