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Reviewer: shellymjbean1989 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 18, 2015 11:14 pm Title: Chapter 111

i truly hope jess is pregnant michaels spying was down right cute as hell and CJ is truly the cutest baby ever i pray that will gets the job  im looking forward to another amazing chapter of this truly amazing story of a beautiful family keep the amazing writing coming 

Reviewer: MommaE Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 18, 2015 06:30 pm Title: Chapter 111

Looks like someone is PREGNANT!! Oh I hope so and then if Will gets the job things will finally all be for the better! Hurry to the store!!! What a surprise for Will if he comes home and she tells him .... We're pregnant!! And Will say.... I got the job!!!

Reviewer: MJfreak23 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 18, 2015 06:15 pm Title: Chapter 111

She's pregnant! I know she is! Yay for Jess and Will! Michael is too cute, keeping an eye on his pregnant wife. 

Reviewer: shellymjbean1989 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 15, 2015 08:36 am Title: Chapter 110

damn that was hot looking forward to reading more of this story keep up the great writing 

Reviewer: MommaE Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 13, 2015 04:32 pm Title: Chapter 1

We'll I have thoroughly enjoyed this story and hate to see you winding it down but I know you will have more stories to come. Keep up the wonderful work. Love how that you are one author who ALWAYS updates the stories on a regular basis. It is so aggravating to get into a story and then it just STOPS!

Reviewer: lummilovesmichael Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 13, 2015 01:33 pm Title: Chapter 110

Oh Yeah, that was SUPER HOT.  Yes Mandy ride that BIG stallion.  So funny he just walks in and gives baby CJ to Grace and tells her suddenly something came up. Indeed Thriller (borrow this from Blinded by Love) is UP and ready to attack.  Go Hormones!!!!  Awww don't go yet. Mandy & Michael 4 ever.

Is all for L.O.V.E ......Lummi 😉💞💞💞💞PS: I need to splash some cold water in my face. 😊😊😊

 

Reviewer: Crazyme62 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 13, 2015 11:23 am Title: Chapter 110

Super great chapter.

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 13, 2015 10:52 am Title: Chapter 110

One of the hottest chapters ever 

 

Reviewer: janina1974 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 13, 2015 09:43 am Title: Chapter 110

wow, Tarzan and Jane - I really enjoyed this chapter

Reviewer: MJfreak23 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 13, 2015 09:36 am Title: Chapter 110

whew!! That was sexy! Mandy has most deifinitely got her groove back! lol

Reviewer: MommaE Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 09, 2015 04:23 am Title: Chapter 109

What a gift!!! I want to go to Bora Bora!!  So glad that Will and Jess finally tied the knot.... Baby time...lol



Author's Response:

Me too..just don't want to fly the 20 hrs to get there

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 09, 2015 02:52 am Title: Chapter 109

Simple or not it was a beautiful wedding 

That's a beautiful wedding gift 



Author's Response:

Thanks..I'm burnt out on writing weddings..this is like my 5th

Reviewer: shellymjbean1989 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 09, 2015 12:08 am Title: Chapter 109

beautiful chapter the wait was worth it the wedding gift from michael and mandy was a beautiful gesture im looking forward to the next chapter keep up your great writing 



Author's Response:

ThNks Shelly I appreciate it

Reviewer: VickiJ Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 08, 2015 09:25 pm Title: Chapter 109

Not that I don't like Mandy's parents but why is Michael's family not mentioned in the story anymore? The last we heard about them was the concert in New York where they parted on bad terms. But I would think that at least his mother and Janet would have tried to contact him to meet his new son. They weren't even there for him when he thought Mandy was dead which is sad. Cause even though the Jackson's have problems they come together when one loses a love one or has drug alcohol problem like Michael did. 

Another question I have is about Michael's security. What happen to Bill and the rest of them?  



Author's Response:

I chose to focus more on the other relationships in this story unlike the other stories when michael and Ashleigh had a close relationship with his mother and especially janet.

 

Bill still shows up at times when mj needs him he will drive him.

Reviewer: shellymjbean1989 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 04, 2015 04:30 am Title: Chapter 108

great chapter i look forward to reading more 

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