[Report This]Date: Jun 29, 2014 02:41 pm Title: The Doctor's Surprising News
Hmmm, lots of conflicting emotions and scarred pasts involved. This will be interesting to watch!
[Report This]Date: Jun 29, 2014 02:02 pm Title: Desperate Times call for Desperate Measures
That's good, keep going! I like Nina, she feels like a real person.
Date: Jun 29, 2014 11:56 am Title: The Doctor's Surprising News
Excellent chapter. You write really well. I can't wait for more.
Date: Jun 29, 2014 07:42 am Title: Heat
I love the tension between them..it always builds for a great story
Date: Jun 28, 2014 06:13 pm Title: A Mother's Advice
OHMYGOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I can't believe she just did that!!!! And poor Maddox!!! Didn't he get scaird too?
Date: Jun 28, 2014 05:42 pm Title: Planting the Seed
Daaaaaamn!!!!!
I have only one word for Nienna, bratty!!!! She is!!! She really can be a down right brat. It makes me mad just reading how mean she is to Michael, but then again, Michael keeps pissing her off, so he needs to check himself.
Date: Jun 27, 2014 07:32 am Title: Desperate Times call for Desperate Measures
Great start. I can't wait to read more.
Date: Jun 25, 2014 02:34 pm Title: Planting the Seed
This sounds like a great story and I'm excited to see what happens next so please update soon!
[Report This]Date: Jun 25, 2014 06:23 am Title: Planting the Seed
Nina needs to stop actin so damn mean! Great update tho, please update soon!
[Report This]Date: Jun 24, 2014 11:51 pm Title: Planting the Seed
Great chapter. Michael is too funny pestering her like that. He's too cute. Sophia is acting like he ignores the hell out of her now but soon she will be giving into him lol....I mean with that face how can she not?
I am really Lovin this so far. You are splendid. I'm itchin to read more! :)
Date: Jun 24, 2014 08:34 am Title: Desperate Times call for Desperate Measures
This is really great, and I am a new member as well and I've posted a few things on here, but it's fun so keep going!!! You have a really great start to a really good story!!!!
I hope you update soon!!!!
[Report This]Date: Jun 23, 2014 09:29 pm Title: Desperate Times call for Desperate Measures
Helllllloooo and welcome to MJ Fiction! :)
I like this! This plot seems very intriguing! Btw, You have a lovely writing style.
Im excited to see what will transpire between these two....please continue!
[Report This]Date: Jun 23, 2014 08:54 pm Title: Desperate Times call for Desperate Measures
Heyyyy, this is nice! I like it :D