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Reviewer: Christine1234 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 09, 2014 08:45 pm Title: Setting Some Things Straight

I am loving every update you post and this story just keeps getting better and better! Thank you so much for being a fast updater!! Can't wait to see what happens next! 

Reviewer: tinker13 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 09, 2014 07:45 pm Title: Setting Some Things Straight

Yea, they are getting closer.

Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 09, 2014 09:05 am Title: Settling in Santa Barbara

Great chapter!

"So, I can say it when he's not around?"

snort

I hope he figures out a way to sneak Nina out! They've been a little too open about this confidential agreement....

Reviewer: Sabrinamjjlove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 09, 2014 04:17 am Title: Desperate Times call for Desperate Measures

I just wanted to review to say I've not caught up on this story, but damn I CAN'T WAIT TILL I'M ABLE TO! I've been too busy to be able to read frequently however by the summary I couldnt help but read the first chapter, and lawd was it a good decision. XD

This weekend I'm certainly slotting in a reading time in which I can catch up! What I've read so far is superb, well done. :)

<3

Reviewer: tinker13 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 09, 2014 03:12 am Title: Settling in Santa Barbara

Looks like they are making progress ;)

Reviewer: MJ_s K1ss and Tell Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 08, 2014 11:14 pm Title: Settling in Santa Barbara

Oh no! Here we fucking go! Why Mikey gotta be dogged by they bullshit?!

Reviewer: MJ_s K1ss and Tell Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 08, 2014 12:26 am Title: Trick or Treat

D'awwww! So cute! I just wanna pinch Michael's cheeks and squish his face up like old ladies do!

Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 07, 2014 09:26 pm Title: Trick or Treat

Longer chapter? :D

Him showing up at her door was such an "awww" moment. Then the tickets? Girl was tough on him about the lie. I'd be upset too, but she has more balls than I do. Then again, she knows he's going to come back as she's carrying 2 very important girls.

This was such an aww chapter. I can't wait to read the next!

 

Reviewer: Annies_NOTokmj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 07, 2014 03:20 pm Title: Good Intentions

Aww man! These two want to be with each other but are both stubborn as hell. Twin girls...phew, Mike has his work cut out for him! Michael shouldn't have lied about that scheming famewhore! She knew damn well what she was doing by trying to tape her and Michael having sex, but good thing he noticed something wasn't right about that skeezer. Now, Nina needs to slap the hell out of MJ and tell him to get with it or gtfoh. This ain't the time to play games, especially since they'll always be tied to each other through those twins.

Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 06, 2014 05:22 pm Title: Good Intentions

oh no

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Date: Jul 06, 2014 05:11 pm Title: The One and Only

I'm glad that horrible date is over with. Now Michael and Nina need to have some extended time together....how long until she moves into Neverland? hinthint

Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 06, 2014 04:39 pm Title: Bed Rest

Woah, that was one intense chapter! I think you navigated it very naturally and made it dramatic while remaining realistic.

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Date: Jul 06, 2014 04:27 pm Title: Unfortunate Emergency

YES. Okay, he is being a jerk and could be handling this better, but he if he was any more right, he'd be doing a U-turn. She should have let him know first. These are his babies, NOT hers.

I love how the story is developing!

Reviewer: Redone Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 06, 2014 04:07 pm Title: A Little Too Happy Birthday

Awwwww! What a cute chapter

Reviewer: MJ_s K1ss and Tell Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 06, 2014 03:50 pm Title: Good Intentions

Fuck! Dammit! What is wrong with you?! Why you do this?!

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