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Reviewer: RavenFeather Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 15, 2014 01:05 pm Title: Revealed

Yay! So happy!

Reviewer: tinker13 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 15, 2014 03:32 am Title: Revealed

Yea!!!!  Finally

Reviewer: Itshumannature03 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 15, 2014 01:46 am Title: Revealed

Heeey, I'm a new reader and this story is just amaaazzing. keep it up :D 

Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 14, 2014 10:00 pm Title: Revealed

A lot of people seem to lose their stories that way :( I wish someone had saved them! I'm excited that you already have another one in the works!

I love how you had her sneak in the "I love you". I hope htis ends his drinking. SMH. Now, he had better not get too angry at her for coming on stage....I know he doesn't like on air surprises, but damn, it was a sweet one. Still, his first reaction does not make me feel hopeful....

That Jhené is thirsty for attention

Reviewer: RavenFeather Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 14, 2014 08:08 pm Title: Sexual Tensions on the Rise

Ooh! Sounds like things are REALLY going to start heating up!

Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 13, 2014 11:28 pm Title: Sexual Tensions on the Rise

Thank goodness he ate a lot of fruits.

lol

Another great chapter.  I love Michael's sudden assertiveness!  His thirst was real. 6 months is a long time...

Have you written any other fan fics? I like this one a lot and would love to read any others you have written :)

Reviewer: femalien Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 13, 2014 11:23 pm Title: Sexual Tensions on the Rise

Nina may claim to the moon and back that she doesn't have those feelings for Michael, but you don't randomly give head to a guy you're just "friends" with. I guess she is afraid to commit, but those girls are coming out fast and waiting around isn't gonna be an option....

Reviewer: RavenFeather Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 12, 2014 04:55 pm Title: Decisions

I love  your story, I can't wait for the next chapter,  you're doing a fantastic job with the storyline. Its definitely one of those that a person can get hooked on!

Reviewer: MJ_s K1ss and Tell Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 12, 2014 04:15 pm Title: Decisions

Awww! That's soo cute!!!!

Reviewer: tinker13 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 12, 2014 02:14 pm Title: Decisions

Phew..she didn't let him go.

Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 12, 2014 12:51 pm Title: Decisions

I want to know more dirt about what had Michael sleeping late. I get a bad feeling about those women..... would Michael risk it?

I'm glad she is moving in with him. Now the fun begins, huh?

This was such a sweet chapter!

Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 11, 2014 08:02 am Title: Bad Habits and Old Flames

Well, I'm now super appreciative of uneventful office jobs :)

The start: blushing

asdfjk Michael needs to step up his game and keep it consistent. Once a week visits (at best) leave a lot to be desired...I hope she moves in with him soon!

Reviewer: tinker13 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jul 11, 2014 04:40 am Title: Bad Habits and Old Flames

Noooooooo....

Reviewer: shellymjbean1989 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 11, 2014 01:43 am Title: Bad Habits and Old Flames

wanna read more please update 

Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jul 09, 2014 11:27 pm Title: Setting Some Things Straight

"Thank you, Thank you, Thank you"

^---thank you For the consistent and speedy updates that certainly do not lack in quality. I'm guessing you wrote this in advance, because I have a hard time imagining anyone writing this well, this consistently, this quickly!

"That's fine. In due time, if you and I go exclusive I don't mind revealing my identity to the public. It's a price I'd pay to be with you."squeal

This story just gets better and better.

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