[Report This]Date: Jul 24, 2014 09:39 pm Title: Valentine's Day
"Mommy how did they get in there?"
Well, son, see the doctor stuck a tube up my... whilest Michael watched in fascination. LOL
UGH. Chris has me wanting to smack a man. I wouldn't want to be Michael in the beginning of the next chapter!
Date: Jul 24, 2014 08:55 pm Title: Valentine's Day
Oh no........
[Report This]Date: Jul 24, 2014 08:42 pm Title: Valentine's Day
Damn it to hell! Here these two go again, just when Michael was doing so well. Welp. That's his own fault here, can't blame Chris, as Mike's a grown man. Just hope Nina doesn't act rash.I say, she kick his ass out of his own house into the guest cottage. See how he likes that.
[Report This]Date: Jul 23, 2014 06:42 pm Title: Dismissals and Proposals
A sequel = 
Jenassa's sniveling exit was exactly what I'd expect from her. No class, emotionally reactive, and caught up in her own wants.
That was one grand proposal! I was surprised that he was nervous...tells me how much he cared about her saying yes! He seemed pretty confident, though, having all the fans in wait.
Uh oh. Are the babies coming very early?! *worried*
Date: Jul 23, 2014 05:44 pm Title: Dismissals and Proposals
Beautiful purposal. Excellent job.
[Report This]Date: Jul 23, 2014 05:37 pm Title: Dismissals and Proposals
Yes, yes, yes!!! I'm so happy for them. Janessa better sit back somewhere. Aww...seems like the little divas have perfect timing! They obviously want to make a big, grand debute and what better day than their parents wedding day...aww.
[Report This]Date: Jul 23, 2014 04:55 pm Title: Celebrating the Princesses
Since this story is getting ready to come to an end, I'm sad and begging you to do a SEQUEL...Please!? I want to see these four interact as a family and how they deal with Marcus relationship with his son.
[Report This]Date: Jul 23, 2014 06:37 am Title: Celebrating the Princesses
Gosh you had me gushing all throughout this chapter! :')
I've got to hand it to you, usually when a couple gets together in a mj story it all becomes too lovey dovey and the conversations are too *yawn*, unfortunately along with that sometimes the plots become tedious but with your writing I don't think it's possible! You've a real talent ;)
The one negative of this chapter is this cow Jenassa, I can't wait for Michael to fire her or if he wimps out I'm all for Nina killing her, if she requires assistance bear in mind I'm always here ;) haha
You have me addicted to this, needless to say you're my fave author of the moment!
P.S the banner for your upcoming story looks gorgeous and judging by the title it sounds promising! For sure I'll be sticking around for it :P
Can't wait for the update :D <3
Date: Jul 23, 2014 03:45 am Title: Celebrating the Princesses
Great chapter..can't wait for the next one. I love that they are finally getting along...I was waiting for the photo where he was asked to stand behind her and hold her breasts
[Report This]Date: Jul 22, 2014 09:18 pm Title: Celebrating the Princesses
Jenassa- I just.. 
. I know you are going to throw some kind of wrench into her dismissal...but, what will it be?!
You have me antsy over when this proposal is going to happen. I thought it would happen on her birthday...then during the photoshoot...Hopefully, the event? Maybe they'll finally seal the deal on their wedding night?
7 more chapters and there is so much I want to happen! You've got me looking on here each night for your updates! <3
[Report This]Date: Jul 22, 2014 08:42 pm Title: Celebrating the Princesses
Yep, he's WHIPPED, Lol!! Aww...I bet that nursery is gorgeous! I love the relationship MJ has with Ninas mother-could only be a good thing when he needs an ally after those two princesses arrive, cause Lord, he and Maddox will be outnumbered. I see Nina has awakened the freak in Michael. Look at him talking about he'll feed her something sweeter-get it y'all! Let's hope Nina accepts his proposal and they make it happen before the girls arrive. He's trying, just like she asked, which tells her he's a good man.
Please keep your updates coming, as I absolutely love your story! Will be checking out your other one you mentioned also.
[Report This]Date: Jul 22, 2014 08:25 pm Title: Celebrating the Princesses
How you gonna do it? Say 'fuck off, hoe!!'
[Report This]Date: Jul 20, 2014 01:04 pm Title: Conversations over Lunch
Bad diet, hmm let's see... Tasted like junk food?
[Report This]Date: Jul 20, 2014 11:57 am Title: Conversations over Lunch
I had a pleasant surprise seeing this updated as I was reviewing! I love you omg :3
But YES thank the lord they finally got stuff out in the open and talked, things were getting too awkward lol. I hope Nina does follow through with telling Marcus to move on with his life. Her giving him that false hope wasnt going to be good for anyone... And I pray Michael stops drinking... I don't think I could possibly take anymore drama lmao
I read earlier that this story will only have 30 chapters which is saddening! D; However I do sort of dislike when stories drag on for so long which sometimes kills them ;o but I don't think that could happen with you writing this lol your storylines are too entertaining
Oh and I second Redone's hint of a sequel ;)
I love this story and I can't wait for the update. XD You're an outstanding writer.
<3
[Report This]Date: Jul 20, 2014 11:35 am Title: Out of Control
I couldnt believe when Michael put his hands on her in this chapter! :O I know he snapped and was worked up n all but damn Michael, you don't ever resort to that especially since she's pregnant! Stay away from the bottles and get yourself sorted you're going to become a father -_- I wish he'd never hung out with Chris tucker lol
I'm glad things have calmed down between the two but serious matters need to be raised and discussed during lunch at the restaurant.