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Reviewer: Michaelsbaby Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 02, 2014 01:48 am Title: Moving on to a New Chapter

Aww that was a great story. I can't wait for the sequel 

Reviewer: Sabrinamjjlove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 10, 2014 01:28 pm Title: Desperate Times call for Desperate Measures

Damn this is finished?! I hope I get some time from the craziness that is my life to read this and your other storyyyy *__* Dude I'm having withdrawal symptoms here lol no but seriously )x

I pray I get time this Wednesday or else I'm ditching work lmao :P

Reviewer: RavenFeather Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 08, 2014 10:37 am Title: Moving on to a New Chapter

Loved it! Cant wait for the next story!

Reviewer: RavenFeather Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 08, 2014 10:37 am Title: Moving on to a New Chapter

Loved it! Cant wait for the next story!

Reviewer: RavenFeather Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 08, 2014 10:36 am Title: Moving on to a New Chapter

Loved it! Cant wait for the next story!

Reviewer: tinker13 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 08, 2014 03:40 am Title: Moving on to a New Chapter

Nice...the sexual should be interesting.  Great way to end it.  I've loved this story from day one

Reviewer: MJ_s K1ss and Tell Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Aug 07, 2014 11:37 pm Title: Moving on to a New Chapter

Yay! I as gonna kill you, but you're planning a sequel, that makes it okay."

Reviewer: RavenFeather Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 07, 2014 10:26 pm Title: Moving on to a New Chapter

Loved it! Cant wait for the next story!

Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 07, 2014 10:07 pm Title: Moving on to a New Chapter

Lol at Michael's  Hopefully she doesn't ask me to stand. I can't believe you snuck that in!

Damn. She let him get it in with such little effort. The power of the Force. This chapter had such a happy spin to it. It was so great to read that after their trying times. It added some balance back in there...all with a rather comical spin. I love it. Thank youuuuuu!

I can't wait until you start the sequel!

Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 06, 2014 05:38 am Title: This is the last time

omfgNina Nina Nina. Girl is letting those hormone really get to her. As if they settle after 1 month. This is one reactive woman!

Janet is just ....ugh. Sometimes your younger sister is wiser than you, MJ! She and Nina's mom seem to have the best words of wisdom...

Can't wait for the next chapter!

 

Reviewer: tinker13 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 06, 2014 05:24 am Title: This is the last time

Damn. They gotta fix all of this and stop being so stubborn

Reviewer: Annies_NOTokmj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 02, 2014 09:09 pm Title: Doubts and Disconnections

Yass!! They finally did IT! And...it was GOOD. Short, but good, with more to come every TWO hours...man, that thang gonna be sore when he's done.He gonna be hurting and dehydrated too, but I ain't mad at em'! Lol.

On a serious note, it's sad to see how they're STILL not communicating effectively. Katherine was wrong in her delivery, but that may be just the kick Michael needed to get off his damn hands and TALK to his WIFE. He had all but pushed Nina to the side after the birth, and that hurt. She felt like he was just going through the motions with her. Now, BOTH of them need to get their stuff together. They're a family now, and it's time they STOP acting like two lustful, stubborn children, for freaks sake. If they would TALK luke two mature adults, they wouldn't be having all these issues of doubt and disconnect.

I'm sad because we're at the end almost, lol.

Reviewer: shellymjbean1989 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 02, 2014 03:54 pm Title: Doubts and Disconnections

very nice chapter cant wait to read more

Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 02, 2014 02:14 pm Title: Doubts and Disconnections

smdh. THIS is exactly why they needed better communication before. I get that a lot changes when babies are born, but MJ dropped the ball by not showing her more love after seeing what she went through.

I'm glad that Janet, Katherine, and Latoya were able to wake that man up. Communication and sweet gestures go a loooong way towards making a relationship work.  I'd have thought he'd be so thirsty at that point that he'd be counting down the days until he could get some, and doing everything in his power to make her want that day to come.

(and now that I've finished the chapter lol) FINALLY! 9 friggin months.

Reviewer: RavenFeather Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 02, 2014 02:11 pm Title: Doubts and Disconnections

I hope things work out for them! I love the  story so far and would hate for them not to last!

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