[Report This]Date: Mar 22, 2013 08:44 pm Title: Chapter 91
I'm still baffled by this guy pretty much flirting with a pregnant married woman. Hopefully he gets the hint and backs off. She had a point about him singing fast, because he surely did. Especially when he was rapping on 'Shout', feels like your listenin' to Busta Rhymes, lol. Great chapter!
Author's Response:
'Shout' was gangsta as shiiit!
Jacksonese be sounding like Busta Rhymes hahaha!
And yeah, theres no need for him to flirt with her. Its innapporpriate and she needs to tell Michael ASAP.
Thank youuu xxx ;p
Author's Response:
'Shout' was gangsta as shiiit!
Jacksonese be sounding like Busta Rhymes hahaha!
And yeah, theres no need for him to flirt with her. Its innapporpriate and she needs to tell Michael ASAP.
Thank youuu xxx ;p
[Report This]Date: Mar 22, 2013 08:26 pm Title: Chapter 92
Remi you better tell him before he starts getting suspicious!
Author's Response:
Exactly! he's getting suspicious, and even if he is or isn't she better tell him anyway. I'm even tired of her bullshit, its a matter of saftey!
Date: Mar 22, 2013 06:17 pm Title: Chapter 92
Oh lawd. Why is Remi lying? Now she's finna piss me off. Bitch, this man could've hurt you or anything! You are PREGNANT!!! Michael needs to know everything that Evan's thirsty ass has been doing. She needs to cut the bullshit and tell him NOW!
Author's Response:
GURL LET ME TELL YOU!
I am sick of Remi's bullshit sometimes!
She's pregnant and she thinks she can handle her own, BITCH this man is a stalker! he clearly is one, yet she's denying it and thinking she can handle everything. She better tell Michael whats going on to be honest!
And LOOOOOOOOL! about Evan and his thirsty ass
[Report This]Date: Mar 21, 2013 08:11 pm Title: Chapter 91
She need to get a restraining order ASAP. She also needs to tell Michael. That's her husband, her problems are his problems and vice versa. It ain't got nothing to do with her being a grown woman. Anywho, I like how you're incorporating Michael's lesser known songs. I got some new music now :D
Author's Response:
I agree with you a lot. She's playing with her safety and life by letting Evan do this. He's a weird guy, who knows what he'll do next? She needs to open her eyes and see the signs!!
And yeah about what you said with their problems being eachothers and vise versa, I think Remi's forgotten that because there's a time and place when she can handle everything on her own. Same with Michael, but with a situation like this? I'm surprised she hasn't told him?! and I'm writting the damn thing lmfao! But I'm loving it because it gives me creative freedom to take on such a sensitive part in Michael's life.
And thank you! And that feeling of fresh music on your playlist is perfect! I'm glad you're liking them, just as I did when I found out his rare/unreleased songs too. AMAZZZZZZZING!! ;p xxx
[Report This]Date: Mar 21, 2013 07:55 pm Title: Chapter 90
Aw shit...I don't trust Evan's sneaky ass. Both Remi and Michael need to watch it
Author's Response:
Hahaha oh yeah! They need to be careful with this guy!
[Report This]Date: Mar 21, 2013 07:19 pm Title: Chapter 90
I just knew Evan was gonna bring up that film stuff with Michael. Can't believe he's flirting with another man's wife and questioning their love... in their house! What kind of mess is that? Lol, that was a pretty nice cover question. Remi should really tell Michael what's going on though, before it gets any worse. They have a baby coming any day now and they really don't need any extra drama. Great chapter, can't wait for the next update.
Author's Response:
Like seriously?
You can't just up and come in another man's house when he's away, flirt with his wife and just leave. I agree, he has NO right whatsoever to question Remi about her love for Michael. foolery these days. I swear Michael needs to regulate him and put him in check. He cant do that and get away with it.
Remi needs to tell Michael as soon as, least before the baby comes. Evan's stalkering ways need to stop!
And thank youuu! next chapters up ;o xxx
[Report This]Date: Mar 21, 2013 06:06 pm Title: Chapter 91
Jacksonese.
Finally, the world has a word for just WHAT the fuck he's talking about in all his songs.
it's like JamesBrownese. it's in a language of its own.
Author's Response:
Hahaha! he has a special language in his own. Jacksonese!! It goes to show he's highly influenced by James Brown, half the time you don't even know what Michael's saying :/
Just gotta whip out the old 'lyrics' page on Google loool ;p xxx
Date: Mar 21, 2013 04:50 pm Title: Chapter 91
She should've been more firm with his ass. He's lost his damn mind. She's happily married and pregnant with her HUSBAND'S Child. Michael needs to start checkin some shit in and moonwalk on somebody's ass!!!! Evan has went too far. He will never have Remi so sending gifts and being a weird stalker won't do a damn thing for him but get him arrested. If this shit continues she needs to go off on his ass and get a restraining order.
Author's Response:
THANK YOU! She should've been more firmer with it. Having a stalker can be a very dangerous thing and she's taking the situation lightly and being funny with it. Its not funny, whether or not the guy knows Michael. She's pregnant and fully inlove with her husband!
Evan needs to get the picture and I'm actually feeling worried for Remu's saftey actually. She needs to tell Michael ASAP about whats going on!
[Report This]Date: Mar 18, 2013 08:24 pm Title: Chapter 89
Evan is sketchy, don't like him at all. Did he really reach out and touch her stomach like he's family or something, without asking? The hell is wrong with him. Here's to hoping she won't have to see much more of him for a while.
Author's Response:
Pahahaha! about "Evan is sketchy." Of course!! Evan is one weird sketchy guy.
"Did he really reach out and touch her stomach like he's family or something, without asking? the hell is wrong with him."
^^ I was eating cereal when reading your review and I dropped my spoon and started laughing. LMFAOOOO!! exactly! why is he doing that? He don't know her like thaaaaaat.
[Report This]Date: Mar 18, 2013 08:21 pm Title: Chapter 88B
That's a nice picture, glad they were able to come to an agreement on it.
Author's Response:
Thank youuuuu!! and yeah I'm glad Michael was easy on that one. He's always picky with his pictures and photo's which is understandable, but sometimes he just really needs to let go and accept his beauty, no matter what age ;p xxx
[Report This]Date: Mar 15, 2013 10:13 pm Title: Chapter 89
Please don't let that thing happen, I hate reading about it, it always makes me feel awkward -.-" good chapter, I can't wait until the baby is born!
Author's Response:
God, I know what you mean. Its hard to read sometimes, but its interesting. Its gonna be Michael's darkest days, but he has a wife in this one and a soon to be baby so...we'll just have to see how it'll be played out. ;p xxx
Date: Mar 15, 2013 04:51 pm Title: Chapter 88B
Nvm, I see now lol
Author's Response:
Hahaha, its okay lol. I was worried it'll get confusing :(
[Report This]Date: Mar 15, 2013 04:50 pm Title: Chapter 88B
Ok I'm confused what happened at this party?
Author's Response:
If you read the first chapter of my co-story 'Whatzupwitu' then I explain everything lol, but its okay I'll just round it up here :)
Basically, the gang went to a club to celebrate Remi's assistant Robyn's birthday. They were enjoying themselves yadayadayada, and some guy felt on her ass or something. She got angry and Calvin confronted the dude with TJ trying to calm everything down. Somebody threw a bottle and the whole place got trashed, leaving them to pay a huge sum for damages etc, effecting Michael and Remi's image negativly.
:)
And thats what pretty much happened lol.
So thats why Michael calls a meeting on them to discuss what happened and how to resolve it etc. I wanted to show the professional side of him in this chapter and how he deals with situations, out of himself. :)
[Report This]Date: Mar 14, 2013 10:51 pm Title: Chapter 88
Loved the interaction between Michael and Janet here. Fillers are awesome too!
Author's Response:
Thank you! Its so hard writting filller chapters because I have so many ideas that I wanna write about, but theyre not until the characters are a few months forward. Its so frustrating sometimes lol, but I guess fillers are okay :D I tried to make the interaction as 'sibling' as possible ;)
[Report This]Date: Mar 12, 2013 09:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
It's alright :) Your story is still amazing, great job!
Author's Response:
Thank you :') I really do mean that. I'm really glad you like them :')
