Date: Jun 19, 2014 05:13 pm Title: Chapter 3
Okay, I think what you should do, is do like a flashback to when Michael and Angela were together, and then follow it through up till now. It will give us a better of an idea of what went wrong in there relationship. At least, it would help me in not being so confused.
Author's Response:
I will do a flashback soon after the next two updates i pretty much prewrote a couple of chapters and im still thinking of ways to tie in my ideas so please bare with me love and i will be sure to check out your story & stay tuned more to come 😘😌👏👏
Date: Jun 19, 2014 05:10 pm Title: Chapter 4
I love this so far... Update soon (if you can of course :) ) !!! :D
Date: Jun 19, 2014 05:04 pm Title: Chapter 2
Oh boy, this is bad. Just, bad!!!!! Michael, get your ass over here and save Angela!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: Jun 18, 2014 09:48 pm Title: Chapter 3
I love this story!!!! You're a fantastic writer. I love Stay as well.
Author's Response:
thank you sooo much that means alot to me thank you
Author's Response:
thank you sooo much that means alot to me thank you
Date: Jun 18, 2014 06:59 pm Title: Chapter 3
Michael is such a wonderful father. He's going to be playing dress up with his daughter. How cuuuute. But I do understand where Jasmine is coming from. She wants to tell the kids but I guess it's hard for Mike to just let it out to them cause they're gonna ask questions about their mother or if their dad was still married to her. Idk. But it's a real shock to see Angela pop up on the steps of her old home. And Mike just don't know what to do. I hope he let her stay for the night instead of having her out on the streets. And now Jasmine' s asking questions. Lawd! Please continue Bri. Love ya.
Author's Response:
thabk youuu and i love you mooore , exactly i cant really be mad at Jasmine because i mean come on yall are getting married soon , poor Angie stay tuned boo
Date: Jun 18, 2014 06:36 pm Title: Chapter 3
i love the kids they are so cute jasmine & michael relationship is so beautiful i dnt know if i want to accept Angela yet but Michael dnt have to b rude tht is the mother of his kids asshole
Date: Jun 18, 2014 04:23 pm Title: Chapter 3
awwh Yari is so adorable little daddy's girl I love the way you had Michael interact with his kids they are so beautiful. Jasmine I like you girl so dont do no shit that will make me change my mind about you but I understand where she coming from if I been around for this long you should have let them know about me. Michael need to stop treating Angela like that I know you probably hurt by the whole thing but gahlee I see that he stills has a soft spot for her he was giving in at the end until Jasmine came along. Angela is so lost Imma just need for Michael to hold her and never let her go and come back to Jasmine I dont even know who team Im on dammit Bri you are talented more please
Date: Jun 18, 2014 03:41 pm Title: Chapter 3
I feel sad for Angela. The addiction has the best of her right now, and Michael's cold towards her because he doesn't want to get his and the kids hopes up, only for it to be dashed.
Now, his fiance seems to be more pushy for her to take on Angela's role in her kid's life. I understand you're the fiance, but to try and push the man to tell his kids, when clearly he is not ready and thinks the kid's aren't either makes me side-eye her.
Author's Response:
Jasmine is a bit confused she just dont understand why Michael is hiding her from them i mean wouldnt you? lol side eye her lawd Jassy making enemies already geesh thanks for the review love and stay tuned more to come
Date: Jun 18, 2014 03:33 pm Title: Chapter 2
It's nice that MJ has moved on for himself and his kids. I just wish their mother can pull herself together and be their mother, because know matter what, she is their mother and raised them well until her addiction took over. I understand Mike's choices, I just wish people would understand, that you never give up hope that the addicted can turn their lives around. If they have a small glimmer, having someone behind them can give them that push and something to hold onto to.
Date: Jun 17, 2014 08:42 am Title: Chapter 2
Omg Michael is getting married Jasmine is beautiful I love her character until she does something crazy and I start not to like her lol. I really love your stories they are so relateable I cant wait to see how this ends up
Date: Jun 16, 2014 07:42 pm Title: Chapter 2
I cant wait to find about Ang's background like what the hell happend to her she got two kids and a loving husband well HAD those things now Jasmine done scooped him up wow this story is good update soon
Date: Jun 16, 2014 07:38 pm Title: Chapter 2
omg Michael is engaged? Jasmine is tf beautiful and Angie is in town awwwwhhh shit i feel like some shit is about to hit the fan and fast i hope Angie dont still think Michael want her he got Jasmine i think i love her already cause Ang is crazy its been 2 years why u aint just let it go more please i love it
Date: Jun 16, 2014 07:16 pm Title: Chapter 1
Love this soo much please continue and dont stop
Author's Response:
Cant stop I wont stop lol this gif was hilarious thank you so much love more is to come promise
Date: Jun 16, 2014 07:16 pm Title: Chapter 2
Awww I'm so happy for Mike and the kids. He's engaged again to a beauty and the kids must adore her. They need a mother figure in their life cause their real one is just so strung out on drugs. I feel sorry for Mike and the kids for what they had to go through with Angie. I just pray Angie gets some real help or something so that she can be w with her kids. At least she can do it for her kids. But great chapter girl. I love it!
Date: Jun 16, 2014 03:16 pm Title: Chapter 1
Im addicted already yes I love it