Date: Jul 07, 2015 04:01 pm Title: The Audition
Are u going to update





Date: May 04, 2015 11:24 pm Title: Another Part of Me
awesome chapteri cant wait to read a lot more of this story keep the amazing writing coming
Date: Apr 10, 2015 02:15 am Title: Another Part of Me
omg! I miss this story like crazy!





Date: Feb 06, 2015 08:16 am Title: I Will Be Victorious
Michael will win the war





Date: Feb 06, 2015 04:13 am Title: The Real Michael Jackson
Oh my gosh dat was so funny





Date: Sep 25, 2014 07:42 pm Title: Another Part of Me
First of all, feels weird saying goodbye to my EO. Like, I can write a damn essay about what Captain EO meant to my black ass as a child. First of all, he was black and a captain. Second of all, him and the crew were known as losers. Third of all, he was adorable, Fourth of all, Michael Joseph Jackson, my idol, was a freaking superhero pretty much. So yeah, I love me some EO. That spoke to me as a kid.
Anyway, we're moving into Bad. Bad era MJ is what I strive to be every day of my life. I can't finish this review. I have to go now. I'm thinking about Bad era and just ugh
I can't





Date: Sep 23, 2014 05:19 pm Title: Another Part of Me
plzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue aaliyah got some balls to do that!!! ciara panties are wet cuz of...Michael. cant believe its the last day... they gonna get freaky?? lol that braclet is very beautiful:):):):):):)





Date: Sep 23, 2014 05:19 pm Title: Another Part of Me
plzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue aaliyah got some balls to do that!!! ciara panties are wet cuz of...Michael. cant believe its the last day... they gonna get freaky?? lol that braclet is very beautiful:):):):):):)





Date: Sep 22, 2014 03:59 pm Title: Another Part of Me
Mike is known for being and undercover freak. He just nasty lowkey. Lol. I really can't wait for him and ciara to get together soon. They just gotta take things slow but I feel it's time. If not, I guess I can hold out a few more chapters.
That was very sweet what Chris got Liyah. The braclet absolutely gorgeous.
Great chapter girl! Scantily for some drama to unfurl.





Date: Sep 22, 2014 02:27 pm Title: Another Part of Me
yay for drama lol im so ready for their relationship to happen





Date: Sep 22, 2014 04:46 am Title: Another Part of Me
Oh I'm so relieved! I saw the stuff about filming being almost over and I panicked! I thought you'd end it there and we'd never really find out what happened! I'm breathing again now. It's all okay.
Author's Response:
LOL i wouldn't leave yall hangin like that. There is a lot more to come Kola.
This story is far from over. You can relax your nerves. LOL
Thanks for reviewing!!!!!





Date: Sep 20, 2014 11:24 am Title: I Will Be Victorious
Lmaoo they really are going to kill each other. They need to stop! I'm so glad you updated. I came to check and yes I was very pleased.
But damn, Mike needs a new team!
Author's Response:
I aim to please, LOL like Michael!!!
Yep, everyone just up and left him in the dust; but that's not gonna stop him.
Thanks for reviewing Teddy Bear!!!!
Date: Sep 20, 2014 09:17 am Title: I Will Be Victorious
Thank You Hunn ^_^! I'll make sure to tag you in my next story..
But Michael is going to win this war hands down!!
Author's Response:
Thanks honey!!!!!
Mike is a genius, he has a lot of tricks in mind, but Ciara is lethal; she has a few good ideas too. We'll see what happens.
Thanks for reviewing!!!!!





Date: Sep 19, 2014 10:07 pm Title: I Will Be Victorious
Ciara and Mike are just plain ruthless, I tell.ya. but I can't wait til he make cici his girl.tho even.tho it will.be a while for that to happen. It's about damn time he realized his feelings for her and shit. I thought I was gonna have to wait 20 damn years, lol.
Great chapter girl!!!
Author's Response:
LOL it didn't take him that long, but for Ciara it's a different story. She'll be one tough cookie.
It will be epic when they get together, i already have the idea planned out.
Thanks for reviewing Bre!!!!!





Date: Sep 19, 2014 08:59 pm Title: I Will Be Victorious
Neece is officially the fucking QUEEN of this game they have. I wish they asses will hurry up and get together damn it. But I love them. They have had me laughing my ass off. Especially in the chapter where cicis outfit ripped and then when michaels personality and attitude had completely changed. I was like DAMN , DAMN , DAAAAMN. He was like and if youll excuse me ill go jack off now I was like WHAT THA FUCK. I died laughing and I was at school. God I dont regret rereading this story. Youre doing a great job girl. I love it so much. 10 stars .
Author's Response:
Patience my Brandy, it will happen. I'm glad they make you laugh. You were taking about Ciara being the queen right, because I'm not in the story.
Thanks for the love, i really appreciate it. Mike will be bold, blunt, and beautiful. This roller coaster ain't over yet.
Thanks for reviewing!!!