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Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 13, 2014 04:13 am Title: Chapter 85

That's so sweet

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Date: Oct 13, 2014 03:50 am Title: Chapter 26 the meaning of making love

Lovely

Reviewer: HeleneJacksonxx Signed

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Date: Oct 13, 2014 01:49 am Title: Chapter 85

That painting was so sweet!

Reviewer: MommaE Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 12, 2014 05:28 pm Title: Chapter 85

Awe ...what a way to make her feel beautiful. So sweet

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Date: Oct 12, 2014 03:13 am Title: Chapter 23 fulfilling dreams 2

That was so funny

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Date: Oct 11, 2014 04:38 pm Title: Chapter 21 New York City

Hmmmmm hot

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Date: Oct 11, 2014 03:15 pm Title: Chapter 18 Billy and Jean

Billy and jean nice

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Date: Oct 11, 2014 02:54 pm Title: Chapter 17 confessions

Michael the winner

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Date: Oct 11, 2014 02:41 pm Title: Chapter 16. Hurt feelings

She really did hurt him

Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing all the chapters..lim glad you are liking it. Enjoy!!!

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Date: Oct 11, 2014 02:26 pm Title: Chapter 15 date night do over

Wow in public bad Michael and Ash

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Date: Oct 11, 2014 02:15 pm Title: Chapter 14 cold feet

I feel her fears I would be scared too if it was me

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Date: Oct 11, 2014 01:46 pm Title: Chapter 13. Are we a couple?

Its getting hot in her u girl are so good

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Date: Oct 11, 2014 01:24 pm Title: Chapter 12 number fourteen

I want a number fourteen like hers

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Date: Oct 11, 2014 12:55 pm Title: Chapter 11 making peace

Michael is very caring u pictured him well

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Date: Oct 11, 2014 12:13 pm Title: Chapter 10 what are your dreams?

Wow that was hot

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