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Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 29, 2014 12:09 am Title: Chapter 88

That's what you call a wedding night lol 

Can't wait for more 

Reviewer: BluJayWay Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 28, 2014 06:08 pm Title: Chapter 88

You are VERY detailed and I love it! Even if the next chapter is gonna be a sad one, I look forward to reading more. 



Author's Response:

Thanks.  I honestly loathe writing sex scenes.  There's only so much you can write over and over again. Mits hard to keep it fresh.

 

thanks for your review

Reviewer: MommaE Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 28, 2014 05:55 pm Title: Chapter 88

Ash is loving her husband right...lol....Abby is gonna have such a hard time ....gonna be a sad time



Author's Response:

She's a horny girl in the late stages of pregnancy.  Poor Mike couldn't keep up with her.

Reviewer: BluJayWay Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 22, 2014 09:15 pm Title: Chapter 87

I literally cried when I read this. This may be the best wedding ever. 

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 22, 2014 08:46 am Title: Chapter 87

Sometimes the simplest things are the most beautiful things (wow that's deep ) 

Reviewer: MJsAngel98 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 22, 2014 04:29 am Title: Chapter 87

Hi! I'm a new and I had read your whole story. It only took me a few days,almost a week. I'm loving it!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading. Mom glad you enjoyed it.  Thank you for reviewing.  Feel free to read fear of flying next.  It's my favorite

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 22, 2014 01:45 am Title: Chapter 87

That was the most beautiful wedding ever so sweet 

Loved it 



Author's Response:

Thank you.  I kind of kept this one simple

Reviewer: Love of sexy michaels life Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 21, 2014 11:00 pm Title: Chapter 82

That's true

Author's Response:

You're almost caught up

Reviewer: lummilovesmichael Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 21, 2014 09:05 pm Title: Chapter 87

I can only say that I loved it.  Is was so creative, sweet and romantic.  You didn't disappoint.  The moment the blindfold was remove and Michael begins to speak, the water works started for me. 

You are an amazing writer.  Thank you for the update.  Looking forward to next one, hopefully soon....... love Lummi <3



Author's Response:

Thanks, I tired to veer away from the normal wedding scene and be different.  Hopefully it made sense and worked.

Reviewer: Love of sexy michaels life Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 21, 2014 06:31 pm Title: Chapter 82

That's true

Reviewer: Love of sexy michaels life Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 21, 2014 03:52 pm Title: Chapter 75

I hope so

Reviewer: BluJayWay Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 21, 2014 08:35 am Title: Chapter 86

I adore this! You write so well; I'm so taken by how this story is developing. Looking forward to the wedding :-)



Author's Response:

Thank you.   You're too kind.  I'm not the best writer but I do try to be different and creative.

thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: Love of sexy michaels life Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 21, 2014 06:11 am Title: Chapter 72

Very funny hardlin?

Reviewer: Love of sexy michaels life Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 21, 2014 05:43 am Title: Chapter 71

U are right

Reviewer: BabyGirl123 Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 21, 2014 01:25 am Title: Chapter 86

So sweet 

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