Date: Jul 21, 2014 08:17 am Title: Cold hugs and kisses
I can't do this? How could you take ally though? Why? How did... I'm done. I can't.
[Report This]Date: Jul 21, 2014 08:14 am Title: The missing purpose
Oh my god, I'm crying... Why?! Why?!
[Report This]Date: Jul 21, 2014 08:07 am Title: A deeper meaning?
Why am I jealous of fictional characters, their friendship... Man. Their love, man oh man. I guess I'm just reiterating everything I always say, but you should know, you've created such a wonderful thing between them. But why is it I'm still freaking out like something terribly awful is about to happen. :O
[Report This]Date: Jul 21, 2014 07:57 am Title: Excited for the future
This chapter was sooooo much cuteness, I was cheesing hard the whole time. That bang is so wonderfully perfect. You've written ally to the T. Bravo. Bravo. And their relationship is the most sweetest thing, cartoons and pizza, gosh... I hope nothing terrible happens to ruin this, I read a couple reviews by some other people and I'm actually really scared to keep reading. But here I go....
[Report This]Date: Jul 19, 2014 06:05 pm Title: A celebration of love
I am so in love with Ally, she's adorable. I wanna hold her lol.
[Report This]Date: Jul 19, 2014 04:15 pm Title: Fear of falling
where are you girl i miss you!
Author's Response:
I'm on vacation. McD right now. I'll have wifi soon... Hopefully <3
[Report This]Date: Jul 09, 2014 05:21 pm Title: Fear of falling
I think having Kayla back in Jaydens life will help her so much!
I just hope Michael and Jayden can begin to admit they want to be together. Technically they are, they just aren't calling it anything.
Awesome chapter girl, keep it going! :)
Author's Response:
You're right, they almost behave like a married couple ...
Thank you! I will update as soon as I can! <3
Date: Jul 09, 2014 01:15 pm Title: Broken promises
Love the story, can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you! And thank your for commenting, it means the world to me! <3
[Report This]Date: Jul 08, 2014 08:16 pm Title: Broken promises Waxing? OUCH!!! Lol
Lovinv the bonding going on between Jayden and Janet!
Enjoy your vacation! :)
Author's Response:
I do it myself, soo :) it's really not that bad.
And thank you so much! I'll try to post as much as I can though!
[Report This]Date: Jul 08, 2014 08:14 pm Title: Marks for life
Of course, Joseph just has to ruin everything! I was so hoping they would kiss!
The part where Michael and Katgerine hit Randy upside the head was so funny! XD
Michael touching her hip, they both want each other, but are still so scared to move forward.
Date: Jul 07, 2014 12:39 am Title: To believe or not to believe
I'm happy that Jayden is gradually getting her life back; I wish I could just jump into this story and hug her. I want to see her smile geniunely and happily. I love her relationship with Janet; it's so adorable and sweet. I'm glad she's healthy too.
I'm still waiting on the good times to roll through again; my heart will jump for joy when that happens. #Jutwaitonit. LOL
Awesome chapter!!!! I love this story so much
Author's Response:
She'll get better soon. Thank you so much for reading and sharing your thoughts! <3
[Report This]Date: Jul 06, 2014 08:59 pm Title: To believe or not to believe
Sometimes talking to a stranger is all the therapy you need. I'm glad she was able to open up and let some of that out.
She and Michael are so blind to what's in front of them, don't the see they need each other? They seemed miles apart in this chapter, I hope they grow closer.
Author's Response:
You're right... They were really far apart in this chapter, but it'll get better, promise :)
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing <3
[Report This]Date: Jul 05, 2014 10:57 am Title: Luck and confrontations
I'm glad Jayden is there for Janet. I love how they have a sister relationship.
Jayden is very lucky that she is physically alright. I wonder what was up with Michael and the doctor though...
That's going to bug me now, lol :) I have few guesses going around in my head.
Great update girly!
Author's Response:
They do, I always include Janet in my stories. She's one of my idols, and I love her.
You'll find out about the doctor soon. Thank you for reviewing! <3
Date: Jul 05, 2014 10:30 am Title: Luck and confrontations
Great chapter! I totally forgot they were engaged
Author's Response:
Yea... thank you! <3