[Report This]Date: Aug 22, 2014 12:45 pm Title: Banished blood
Man that Cora is a real Bitch I'm so glad Jaden slapped the shit out of her.
Author's Response:
I know, she's terrible...
[Report This]Date: Aug 22, 2014 12:00 pm Title: Banished blood
I can't believe her 'family' came back like that OR that Michael didn't chance after her. Well, I bet it left her raw enough for that scene to turn out well. Can't wait to see what happens next :)
Author's Response:
I'll try to have the next update ready within the the next couple of days. Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Date: Aug 13, 2014 03:03 pm Title: Stolen kisses
Update whenever you can honey. Im not complaining. Do what you gotta do!!!
They went from a sad couple to horny teenagers. LOL. I love it. I also saw that no protection was used hmmm? I wonder what that means.
Awesome chapter!!!!
Date: Aug 13, 2014 01:32 pm Title: Stolen kisses
Ohh writers block. It sucks big time. I hate it when you know where you want to go but can't make a bridge to get that. I like what you've done in you block. I like the times they are now together.
Date: Aug 13, 2014 12:22 pm Title: Stolen kisses
Sounds like you might be pushing yourself to hard. I love to write, I love it so much, but when I'm not feeling it I don't write. That means it could take me a week, two, three, a month before I finish a chapter. I don't push myself because then I just end up writing shit and it feel rushed which hurts the story and gives the reader a crappy chapter. If I were you I'd take a break and let yourself breathe. :)
[Report This]Date: Aug 13, 2014 11:54 am Title: Stolen kisses
Girl, as a writer I understand what you are going through. Don't push yourslef to produce if you're not feeling it. Take a break, and relax. Let your mind quiet down and over time it will come back to you. I find reading help break writers block. Take your time girl, and know we will be waiting. :)
Now, as for this chapter, I loved it! I love the romantic giddy stuff. lol They are so sweet and so in love! It's wonderful seeing them so close!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I really appreciate it.
But I don't know what's wrong with me? I don't have the energy to start reading a new story, but I constantly want to read. It's strange. I already have several, but I need them to be updated before I can read em. Hehe...
Thank you for your support.
[Report This]Date: Aug 13, 2014 11:42 am Title: My salvation
Finally! lol Some serious make sex needed to be going on. lol They both love each other so much and were pulling so far away from each other. They need to give in to their love and start comunicating better.
One other thing...protection, hmm, I wonder what's going to happen. lol
Author's Response:
Gril you fast, haha... you'll see soon
[Report This]Date: Aug 13, 2014 11:40 am Title: Misunderstandings
Glad to see you back! :)
Diana, again, really? Ugh, she is so annoying!
It's good to see Michael fianlly starting to stand by Jay, if he loves her he needs to support her.
Author's Response:
You're absolutely right. And yes, I had to bring Diana in one more time. I needed Michael to finally take Jayden's side and be ale to put Diana away so that she wouldn't cause them any trouble.
Date: Aug 10, 2014 02:10 am Title: My salvation
That was one of the best love making scenes I've ever read. You described it so well, I could feel the passion in it. That was beautiful; when I read it, it didn't feel like just an erotic scene to me, it was two people who truly love each other and they showed that physically.
Beautiful chapter!!!!! Bravo!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I tried my best to make it exactly that way. I wanted it to be a reuniting <3
[Report This]Date: Aug 10, 2014 01:54 am Title: My salvation
And I heard an angels chorus singing Handels Messiah: HALLELUJAH! HALLELUJAH! And a loud voice from heaven above shouting: THIS IS THE CHAPTER YOU'VE BEEN WAITING FOR! AND IT HAS COME!
Brilliant I tell ya. The love in this, the healing, I could practically feel their unity, their oneness, their souls uniting per say.
Author's Response:
Thank youuu haha!
[Report This]Date: Aug 10, 2014 01:39 am Title: Misunderstandings
I love it! Jays sass against Diana's ratchetness... Love it! And I have a sneaking suspicion about this William character.
[Report This]Date: Aug 10, 2014 01:26 am Title: Two broken souls
First steps yay, they're becoming those lovey youths again. How refreshing. :D
[Report This]Date: Aug 10, 2014 01:16 am Title: Killing me softly
Jaydens sadness is so raw. Damn. It's gonna take a damn near miracle for her to heal, but I'm rooting ffor my girl.
[Report This]Date: Aug 10, 2014 01:07 am Title: A hopeless mess
Aww... This chapter. What I wouldn't do to be able to go bback and tell Michael how absolutely beautiful he is. This really touched my heart.
Author's Response:
I feel that way all the time. It's a shame he couldn't see himself through our eyes. He was so beautiful, it hurt to look at.