Date: May 12, 2014 02:46 pm Title: Roaring thunder
This story is generally a very fast paced story, but I like the way you pull it off, because you don't slow down parts and then do other parts quick paced. You're a good writer. You do a pretty awesome job on every chapter. I'm sorry I don't comment on every single one, but just know I am reading.
This story is very cute, I love Jayden and Michaels friendship/relationship. It's so beautiful. I can't wait to see how this whole pregnancy fiasco plays out.
Joseph as usual is being a ratchet douche, but considering the situation, I can understand it. He's an ass and on top of that his son got a girl pregnant, no one would be happy with that circumstance lurking around in their house. He could have more tact though, instead of calling her a slut. She wasn't the only one involved in the production of the child.
Anyway, you did a great job. You've got yourself a faithful fan. I also have some stories if you wanna check em out and let me know what you think. I would totally love that.
Until next time.
-Kunda
Author's Response:
Wow, thank you so much. I'm almost speechless.
It's great knowing someone really appreciates all the work I put into this, because it does take most of my time. But I do it because I love it, and about the pace. It's actually because this is the first part of the book, and I wrote the second part first. This is all what goes on before what was planned from the beginning. That's why I guess it can seem a bit rushed, but I actually don't think it is concidering how many years they've been close already.
About your stories, I will definetely check them out as soon as I have the time. I'll go to bed now, but thank you so much! xx
Date: May 12, 2014 01:56 pm Title: Roaring thunder
Good chapter. I thought Joseph was going to smack her around and she would lose the baby or something.
Author's Response:
No thankfully :) Thank you for reading!<3
[Report This]Date: May 12, 2014 07:24 am Title: Road to hell. Disagreements, love, and promises
I don't like the fact that Michael's family and Cora is trying to keep it a secret and keeping him away from her. They're treating her like a leper or something but what about his role in all of this? It was his dick that went inside her and shot out the sperm.
That poor girl needs more support, and he needs to be more involved. It's not like he doesn't have the money, so time for Michael to man up and take care of his woman and child.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much for reading and commenting, it means a lot to me. :)
[Report This]Date: May 12, 2014 05:59 am Title: Road to hell. Disagreements, love, and promises
I L.O.V.E. it ....please another update 😄. OH..btw...I am a new reader!! 👍. I love what u have done with Jayden & Michael..with their relationship & all.
Keep it up..it is remarkably done
Author's Response:
Wow thank you so much! I'm really glad you like it! And i will Update tonight!d84;a039;
Date: May 09, 2014 09:33 pm Title: Fireworks
I love this story! 🙌👏👌
Author's Response:
Thank you!<3
Date: May 09, 2014 12:29 pm Title: Fireworks
Aww I love them together I hope they NEVER break up
Author's Response:
Well...you'll just have to wait and see about that <3
Date: May 09, 2014 11:44 am Title: Fireworks
Cora work my damn nerve ohhh my gosh. But I guess I can understand why she'd be such a b.
michael and her are so cute.
Author's Response:
Thank yooouuu, <3
[Report This]Date: May 07, 2014 01:53 pm Title: Boiling feelings
Oh and of course I wanna know the sex of the baby :)
[Report This]Date: May 07, 2014 01:52 pm Title: Boiling feelings
Poor Babies having a baby. I hope that once Katherine lets it sink in she reacts better than Cora did. It's a bit too late to be casting judgement now, it doesn't change anything. They are going to need plenty of love and support going forward irregardless of what they decide to do.
Author's Response:
Exactly, just what I was thinking writing it!:) <3
Date: May 07, 2014 10:33 am Title: Boiling feelings
Dang...That all went down hill...
Date: May 07, 2014 07:48 am Title: Boiling feelings
That was sad :(
Date: May 04, 2014 03:12 pm Title: The girl in the suitcase
What are they going to do..Pregnant at 17? I hope Michael doesn't push her away
Date: May 04, 2014 02:32 pm Title: Simply Jayden and Michael?
I started reading this on Wattpad and I like this a lot
Author's Response:
Thank you, I'm glad you do!<3
Author's Response:
Thank you, I'm glad you do!<3
Date: May 03, 2014 05:35 am Title: Clueless
Great story. Can't wait for the results..I hope it's negative. I want to see Michael squirm when he needs to buy condoms
Author's Response:
hahaha X'D I'm glad you like it!xx
Date: May 03, 2014 02:01 am Title: Clueless
OMG, I can't wait for the next chapter. I'm loving this so far!