[Report This]Date: Jun 15, 2014 02:46 pm Title: Moving to California
Michael and Jayden are so silly. I can see then together as they grow.
[Report This]Date: Jun 15, 2014 02:45 pm Title: The beginning
Really nice story I like it alot.
Author's Response:
Thank you! <3 It's nice to hear your opinion! <3
Date: Jun 15, 2014 11:27 am Title: Fear of the closest
I do t know why you don't have more reviews. Your story is very good. It's very frustrating. I can relate
Author's Response:
Thank you <3 And yea...it's frustrating.... but I'm thankful for the ones of you who does review!<3
[Report This]Date: Jun 14, 2014 12:53 am Title: Purpose in life
Yay! Michael made it just in time!! :) update soon. b25;
Author's Response:
I will update tonight! <3
Date: Jun 13, 2014 12:16 pm Title: Purpose in life
New reviewer here. I love this story!!! The love between Michael and Jayden is incredible. You are a wonderful writer.
I took a big sigh of relief when Michael showed up before she gave birth; I was about to have a heart attack.
This is a wonderful story!!!! Please keep going!!!!
Author's Response:
Awww wow, thank you! I'm really glad you like this, thank you so much for reviewing, it means a lot to me!
Date: Jun 13, 2014 10:43 am Title: Purpose in life
Beautifully written
Author's Response:
Thank you! <3
[Report This]Date: Jun 12, 2014 03:55 pm Title: I need you
I'm at the edge of my seat!!!!
Author's Response:
I'll update soon :) <3 Thank you for your support!
Date: Jun 12, 2014 03:36 pm Title: I need you
Great chapter and good job on the cliffhanger....will he make it or not???...lol
Author's Response:
Thank you. You'll see :) <3
[Report This]Date: Jun 11, 2014 10:59 pm Title: Everything happens for a reason
This chapter :>
just the way michael talks to the belly baby.... I could die, it's soo cute. I really truly and wholeheartedly love this story. The way you write is so perfect. It's like a mini episode. Michael and Jay are the sweetest couple known to me right now and I love them and their adorable relationship. They're so forever.
Janet is too much, nine and knowing stuff... Love her.
I hope on all things holy and unholy that this baby comes out perfect and healthy. All this drama for no baby would just kill me. She's got to have it please D:
Author's Response:
I know Michael's adorable :) <3 Thank you for it all, I'm really happy that you like my story this much!
And about Janet, I have younger sisters, and I kinda corrupted them so I thought...being little sister to that many Jacksons must mean she's heard a lot as a child X''D
About the rest you'll just have to see :) I'll probably update tonight <3
[Report This]Date: Jun 10, 2014 08:50 am Title: Forever and always
Ah, that was so beautiful and romantic! Loved this chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you <3 I appreciate your positive feedback! <3
Date: Jun 10, 2014 01:23 am Title: The beginning
I always get excited when you update! Are you planning to make sequels after the baby is born or continue? Like later in life when Michael is in his other eras?
Author's Response:
No, the story will continue as it is. Meaning I won't start a new, it'll be the same :) Y'all just have to wait and see what happens <3
Date: Jun 09, 2014 10:54 pm Title: Forever and always
So so so beautiful!
im so excited, there's so many positive things going on. And their relationship is so sweet. I love them together and in ecstatic about their future together and the baby. Yes. That proposal was too much cute.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I really appreciate all the positive feedback from you! It helps motivating me! <3
[Report This]Date: Jun 05, 2014 06:02 am Title: Flushed cheeks
Ohhhhh this situation with her friend. I don't see it working out positively.
Author's Response:
I know, she's a littel crazy <3
[Report This]Date: Jun 02, 2014 05:54 pm Title: No rich and poor
Wow I'm all the more saddened by the death of her parents. Oh my gosh, they were perfect. Especially her dad. I wish I had a father like that. :'( it's so unfortunate she had to loose them.
Author's Response:
I know right! :) <3
[Report This]Date: May 30, 2014 12:58 pm Title: Lies and apologies
Oh no he didn't!!!!!!!!!! Damn Michael was being an ass in this chapter. Glad he set the record straight but what was he thinking? I'm surprised his mother didn't smack him upside the head.
Author's Response:
Me too O.O
I'm glad you like the story! <3