Date: Jun 18, 2014 04:39 am Title: The beginning
Diana is a whorebag she needs to stay away from him.
Author's Response:
I agree X''D
Thank you for reading, and thank you for making me smile <3
Date: Jun 18, 2014 04:36 am Title: Jealousy
Holy crap this is freaking amazing... Better and better every chapter in! I hope this story goes on for a while!!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I really appreciate it! <3
Date: Jun 17, 2014 10:44 pm Title: I need you
Girl my apologies. Soon as I get a decent break from life, your review place is going to get broken by incessant responses. Just hold on for me. Sorry for the delay.
Author's Response:
Thank you :) <3 You know I love you girl, it's an honor to have you read my story!
[Report This]Date: Jun 17, 2014 09:35 pm Title: The blow up
Damn, that all went to shit really fast!
Michael shouldn't let Diana flirt with him like that. He needs to stand up to her and he needs to stand up for Jayden and Ally.
I get he's hurt but he needs to listen what she's say and start kissing ass big time.
I can't wait to see what happens next! :D
Author's Response:
You'll know soon, thank you for reading! <3
Date: Jun 17, 2014 04:49 pm Title: The blow up
Haha no problem girly and lets just say ur keepin me busy during finals and im lovin every second of it!!
Date: Jun 17, 2014 04:34 pm Title: The blow up
Oh my goodness im so excited!!!! Yes doll post more often this is keeping me on the edge of my seat! And i mean it u are an amazing writer never let anyone get u down!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you! You have me smiling so hard, it's hurting my cheeks! X'D I'll post as soon as I can!
[Report This]Date: Jun 17, 2014 04:03 pm Title: The blow up
I am so freaking addicted to ur story u do an amazing job at descriptions each time and this story is beyond awesome... I couldnt keep my mouth closed this chapter WHY WAS MICHAEL SO STUPID TO DO THIS?!?!?! Please please please tell me ur gonna post another one soon u need to i might die within the next 24 hours without knowing how this goes omfg. Ur a fantastic writer and ally sounds amazingly adorable, i just feel really bad with her in the middle of their fight.. They love eachother so much that they fight and its horrible but Michael needs to embrace his woman.. Or hes gonna lose her
Author's Response:
You have no idea how much all that means to me, oh my god! Thank you so much! I'm really honored that you like my writing, because I truly spend a lot of time on this. Like I'm talking hours every single day. It's readers like you that makes it feel worth it! It's extremely motivating, you have no idea!
About Michael you'll see very soon. I normally update every second day or so, but lately I have been updating a lot more than usual. The next chapter will be up tomorrow, because it's late here. lol.
Thank you! Thank you so much!<3
[Report This]Date: Jun 17, 2014 02:56 pm Title: The blow up
Woah!!! Did not see that coming.
I hope they make up. They were doing so well...
Great chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: Jun 17, 2014 12:46 pm Title: The blow up
What does Michael expect? If he refuses to claim his woman, stuff like this will continue to happen. Jayden didn't do anything to that guy to make him kiss her, yet Michael ignored her in favor of flirting with Diana. Michael should be ashamed of himself and his behavior.
Author's Response:
That was quick! I completely agree with you :) Thank you for honest feedback! <3
Date: Jun 16, 2014 01:52 pm Title: Passionate souls
They are so cute! I would have loved to have a water fight with Michael! Lol
Soaking wet, backed Michael...my God! I can just imagine that! He was always so sexy!
I have a feeling the party won't go over very well.
Author's Response:
You'll know how the party goes by tomorrow night.:) Thank you for your support! <3
Date: Jun 16, 2014 12:05 pm Title: Innocent giggles
I think the lack of feedback is universal...no one is reviewing anything...it's not just you...very frustrating..I've got three stories I update and get hundreds of reads a day and two reviews...
Author's Response:
I never usually complain or anything, I just think it's strange because I usually DO get feedback. I also post on Wattpad, and I haven't gotten any feedback on there either on the last 3 chapters. ...
Date: Jun 16, 2014 11:13 am Title: Innocent giggles
Great story!
Author's Response:
Thank you! <3
[Report This]Date: Jun 16, 2014 10:03 am Title: Innocent giggles
I so sorry I haven't gotten to review! This story is so good! Baby Ally is so sweet and cute!! :D Michael is so wonderful with her! I love it! :)
Author's Response:
Thank you! You have no idea how much I appreciate it! ♥
[Report This]Date: Jun 15, 2014 02:54 pm Title: Simply Jayden and Michael?
They are so sweet. I am enjoying this story.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you like it! <3
[Report This]Date: Jun 15, 2014 02:48 pm Title: The meaning of a true family
Oh wow she sure gave it to Michael. I sure hope he listens to her. Nice chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you! <3