[Report This]Date: Jun 23, 2014 09:36 am Title: The end
Awe Helene your so sweet! It was a pleasure to read this fabulous book, i love it and i love you and ur style of writing, its fantastic! I m so excited ur gonna continue!!! I was really sad when i saw the end but now im so excited!!!!!!! Lmao ur amazing, i hope u never stop, this is ur god given talent. Wish god blessed me like he did you with the amazing talent of being a great writer! Update soon i miss ya already! <3 thank u for the shout out too :)
Author's Response:
You have no idea how much your words touch me, I think I'm about to cry. I never really thought much about my writing, I only do it because I love it. It's my biggest hobby. You're really an amazing writer, I love all of your reviews.
Just so you know, the next part will be in here too, I won't make a new book. There's been a lot of confusion about that, so I just wanted to let you know.
Thank you very much <3
[Report This]Date: Jun 23, 2014 08:28 am Title: The end
Oh girl don't leave us hanging! I want to know what happens!
I have a feeling the next book will pick up years from where you left the last story. Ugh, I hate sad endings, I hope Michael and Jayden find their way back to each other.
Thank you for the shout out, you are a wonderful writer girl and I can't wait to find out what happens next.
Author's Response:
It'll be the same book, I just split it in two :)
And I'll probably post soon, it won't be long <3 Thank you <3
[Report This]Date: Jun 23, 2014 05:07 am Title: Suffocating tears
OMG in this moment she needs someone who loves her. Someone she loves back, like Michael and kayla and kathrine. She needs people around her to heal her. Michael needs to get his head out of the clouds and help his lady. She took off the ring for gods sake!! And she attempted suicide!!! She needs someone with her. This is too much for her, i hope soon that they can find peace soon together :( this chapter made me cry im so upset
Author's Response:
I completely agree with you, they should stick together. I might post a chapter tonight depending on how much feedback I get on "Suffocating tears" and "the end". Thank you for reviewing, I love honest feedback! <3
[Report This]Date: Jun 23, 2014 04:43 am Title: Suffocating tears
Oh Lord this is sad! :'(
I had a feeling she was going to attempt suicide. I'm so glad she stopped but now she's leaving?
Michael needs to stop her! I will never understand why partners push each other away when they loose a child.
I really hope they can grieve together and heal together.
Author's Response:
I get that it's hard to understand... When I wrote it, I just knew that this would break the both of them. I think the reason behind, is that none of them know how to deal with anything.
I might post later depending on how much feedback I get, thank you!<3
Date: Jun 22, 2014 08:43 pm Title: Cold hugs and kisses
Oh please do write soon! Much love!
Author's Response:
I'll update now :)
[Report This]Date: Jun 22, 2014 11:27 am Title: Cold hugs and kisses
God, this is so sad! :'( Poor Jayden, she's falling apart! I really hope she and Michael don't push away from each other. :(
Author's Response:
You'll see soon. Thank you for your support, I really appreciate it!<3
[Report This]Date: Jun 22, 2014 11:25 am Title: Cold hugs and kisses
Oh my goodness Helene you brought tears to my eyes, i really wish that jayden can somehow someday be better, losing ur child is a long long grieving process and she loved tht little bundle of joy so much... Its such a sin that that poor little baby died :( i am such a fan of you and this story is amazing, but it was a very good twist on it with these last few chapters... So upsetting. I hope Michael and jayden and the rest of the family can come close to one another and be there, thats what they really need :/
Author's Response:
I'm glad that you still love the story! I was really nervous about this whole thing, but to be honest it was the plan from the very beginning. I wanted to make a story about two people and their endless love. I wanted to see their relationship transform as they went through the hardest thing anyone can go through. Losing a child.
I might update again later, I honestly didn't know. I didn't mean to update this much, but everyone's been giving so much feedback, I simply couldn't hold the chapters back <3
Date: Jun 22, 2014 10:53 am Title: Cold hugs and kisses
I can't believe they lost their baby; that is so sad and it's unexpected. I'm shocked.
That was a great way to twist the story Helene, great job.
I hope they'll be okay, especially Jayden.
Author's Response:
Thank you, I appreciate the support! I will be updating again soon!
Date: Jun 22, 2014 08:59 am Title: The missing purpose
Oh my! Please let this be a dream!
Date: Jun 22, 2014 08:25 am Title: The missing purpose
Wow, that was brave of you to go there. Excellent...now the questions is is she dead or was it a dream?
Author's Response:
You'll know soon, I'm posting the next chapter now
[Report This]Date: Jun 22, 2014 08:18 am Title: The missing purpose
No no no!!! There has to be more!! This left me crying!! Poor jayden!!!!!!! Wheres michael?!?!?! OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG please!!!!!!!! :'''''''
[Report This]Date: Jun 22, 2014 07:34 am Title: Empty
Omg.... My heart broke in two... Im so sad for both of them, Michael must be beyond heartbroken beyond belief... His little girl, gone. What does jayden mean when she said im done?! What is she going to do?!
[Report This]Date: Jun 22, 2014 07:16 am Title: Empty
NNNNNNOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!! Ally no! OMG...why? My eyes teared up on this chapter. Whyyyy? :'(
[Report This]Date: Jun 22, 2014 05:31 am Title: The beginning
OMG this left me completely heartbroken im shattered... How did this even happen?! What is she going to do when she says shes done?! Wheres Michael? Wheres the rest of the family?! Oh my god.....</3
Author's Response:
You'll find out soon. I'll post the next chapter later today! <3
[Report This]Date: Jun 22, 2014 04:31 am Title: Empty
No, no, no!! OMG! Not the baby! I'm crying over here! Poor Jayden, I can't even imagine, God poor Michael! This is so sad! I hope to God they don't pull away from each other, they need one and other now more then ever. I'm still shocked, not poor little Ally, this is horrible! :(
Author's Response:
I am truly sorry... I'll post the next chapter in a few hours...