Date: Jun 26, 2014 04:12 pm Title: Jealousy
Is it bad that Jayden actually made me angry in this chapter. I understand her angEd and jealousy, but maybe the level was a bit much.
Author's Response:
I don't know? It's always so interesting to hear what you all think of the characters and what happens. I'll defend Jayden till my death, but she might have been a little too much with the jealousy, I don't know. She's like my baby, I can't help but always take her site X'D
Date: Jun 26, 2014 03:58 pm Title: The blow up
Wow michael seriously?! He's not even trying to hear her, and how's he going to defend Diana like that. Smh
Date: Jun 26, 2014 03:39 pm Title: Passionate souls
Dang that damn vitiligo. I wonder what's gonna do down at this party.
Date: Jun 26, 2014 10:39 am Title: Embrace in the storm
YEEESSS!!!!! Finally Mike is doing something!!!! I feel so sad for Jayden, I hope Michael never leaves her. Ima just wait until they are happy again!! #Justwaitonit.
Author's Response:
Haha, I'll update soon, so you'll see what happens! <3
Date: Jun 26, 2014 06:50 am Title: Embrace in the storm
Bout damn time they speak to each other
Author's Response:
Yea, they should have done that a year ago...
thank you for reviewing, it means a lot to me!





Date: Jun 26, 2014 04:39 am Title: Embrace in the storm
Hey girl, another awesome powerful scene and i loved it. This is EXACTLY what she needed!!! I was so sad that she was so sad, it was so painful to hear and read. But im glad Michael finally stepped up its about time! PS this story is fucking great, probably cant live without it, so addicted to it lol! Love ya! Update soon! <3
Author's Response:
Awwwwwww, I'm really glad you think so! Girl I love you too, you're my most supportive reader right now! Always the first to comment, it's wonderful! I really really appreciate it!





Date: Jun 25, 2014 05:28 pm Title: Unanswered prayers
Today was a very, very sad Remembrance Day for me (June 25, 2009 :'() and this made it just a little more sad. Our great king of pop died on this horrible day, we lost the little bit of heaven on this earth... It's so hard, even tho I don't know him on a personal level, to live without him. :'( but anyway, very nice chapter, I wanna hear a convo between just him and jayden tho honestly. But the way it's going is very good! :) I'm sorry I'm not in the best of moods today, but very good job! Update soon please?!
Author's Response:
I'll update today :) I have something tonight anyway... <3





Date: Jun 25, 2014 04:50 am Title: Foul heartbeat
I freaking love these few chapters, so much intensity.... But they need closure and they need to be together and provide love for one another, i dont really think her mom was trying to say those things in a bad way to jayden, just like i really cant bring her back im sorry kind of deal, but showing her the baby was probably the worst idea especially now ...... <3 update soon!
Author's Response:
Well...You can say her mind is playing tricks. Is all coming from her own head, it's hallucinations. She makes her mother look like the bad guy in a way, becase she needs someone to blame. She's in denial and she's refusing to let go of what used to be. It's not because she blames her mother in any way :)
I love your reviews :) It's always interesting when people comment on what's going on in the story and not just writes 'update'. It's interesting for me to learn how my readers sees the different situations that I write! :)
Thank you, and I'll update soon! :)





Date: Jun 24, 2014 07:45 pm Title: Voices
Oh God, this is so sad!! I hope Michael can get through to her. Their falling apart without each other!
Author's Response:
I know ....:/
Date: Jun 24, 2014 10:59 am Title: Voices
WOW!!!! Somebody please save Jayden; Mike needs to step up and help her. That was intense.
Awesome chapters!!!! Can't wait for the next one.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I might update later tonight, I'm not sure yet...
Date: Jun 23, 2014 04:15 pm Title: The end
When are you gonna be writing the next part?
Author's Response:
Tonight :) I'm starting tonight <3
Date: Jun 23, 2014 11:00 am Title: The end
I loved this story, and I can't wait for the second book. You did an incredible job!!!!
Author's Response:
I won't make a new book, just so you know. I'll continue this one :)
But thank you! <3





Date: Jun 23, 2014 10:45 am Title: The end
Awww...thanks! :)
Can't wait for the next part to start!!
Author's Response:
I won't make a new book, just so you know. I'll continue this one :)
But thank you! <3
Date: Jun 23, 2014 10:14 am Title: Innocent giggles
Kayla's just that friend, that crazy ccool friend everyone needs. Ya know although her uncle is a nice man and what not in comparison to her real parents, why do I feel like not so nice things are going to happen while she's living with him. Lets just hope I'm being crazy.
Author's Response:
She is cool :) And you'll see! <3
Date: Jun 23, 2014 09:57 am Title: Fear of the closest
When the boys fired him, even I felt really bad. I mean imagine all that a man does to get his kids to the top, but any means neccessary, and he's not a nice father figure, but he loved his kids ya know. And then they up and fire him. That must have been like a shot to the heart for him.
Ooooooh Michael, that cheeky boy.
Author's Response:
I feel ya.. :/