Date: Jul 04, 2014 09:52 am Title: Hold on, we're going home
Beautifully written. Thank you for explaining things more...I was confused and now it's clearer.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm glad you're not confused anymore. If anything, you can always ask!:) xx
[Report This]Date: Jul 04, 2014 08:00 am Title: Hold on, we're going home
I'm really happy she's living with Michael. I hope overtime she will allow herself to be happy.
Date: Jul 03, 2014 11:08 pm Title: Temptation
I guess I've been one of those "silent readers" :) but anyways pleeassee don't even think about not writing!!!! I love this story, I've laughed cried and felt the emotions, probably easier than I've ever felt during any story :) I love this story sooooo much, thank you for writing it!!! And I hope you continue it <3
Author's Response:
Thank you! You have no idea what that means to me! And I will continue, next chapter is coming tonight! <3
Date: Jul 03, 2014 02:27 pm Title: Temptation
I found the twist you made in the story interesting but I was confused at times. Take your time writing and don't rush to get something published. That's just my suggestion. Otherwise keep up the good work. It's hard being a writer and people don't review. I can relate
Author's Response:
I know I shouldn't stress, I just really like posting every night. I love writing this story, and I simply prefer posting short chapters often instead of posting long chapters once a week for example.
I'm really thankful for your support, it means a lot! <3
[Report This]Date: Jul 03, 2014 01:29 pm Title: Temptation
The test was a great idea! She was able to prove to them and herself that she is strong enough to resist the addiction. Awesome! I am so glad she's getting out!
I hope she goes with Michael and they begin to work on getting close again. They need to be together because even though Jayden is leaving their work isn't over.
This is awesome, I love it! :)
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm really glad you like it!
And yes, Jayden's far from great, but she's stable. Her and Michael still have a lot of bonding to do. I'm looking forward to write it, so I couldn't be more happy that you're looking forward to read it! <3
[Report This]Date: Jul 02, 2014 06:42 pm Title: Love and friendship
I'm glad she finally yelled and let out her anger toward Michael.
I understand why Michael was hurt by Jayden sleeping with three other people, but I also get that they weren't together and she wasn't herself.
They really need to take things slow together, I think inside they know what they are to one and other but it seems like they have to learn all over again how to connect and open up on a intimate level and not just physically but emotionally.
This is getting really good girl, keep up the wonderful work! I can't wait for another update! :) xoxo
Date: Jun 30, 2014 11:13 pm Title: Final goodbye - Facing the truth
Team Mike and Jayden all day everyday!!!!!!! That's all I have to say.
Author's Response:
Thank you, your support means a lot! <3
[Report This]Date: Jun 30, 2014 07:30 pm Title: Final goodbye - Facing the truth
I really think she needed that. As hard as it is to let go, I'm speaking from experience because I've lost people very dear to me, being there at their grave and saying goodbye brings so much closure.
Cora needs to back off, damn. That woman is driving me crazy.
I'm so happy Jayden and Michael are finding their way back to each other.
Author's Response:
It's hard because a funeral is the "final goodbye" and Jayden never had that. Instead she went a year trying to ignore the fact that Ally was actually gone.
Thank you for reviewing, it means a lot to me! <3
[Report This]Date: Jun 30, 2014 07:14 pm Title: Missing improvement
Ok, I cried reading this one. Wow, poor Jayden, and Michael. Gosh, I can't even imagine that pain. So sad! :(
Date: Jun 30, 2014 06:17 pm Title: Traditions
Awwww, I appreciate Katherine being so lenient with Janet, you know Christmas is the most magical time for kids.
Author's Response:
It really is. I feel so sorry for all the children who doesn't get to experience it :(
Date: Jun 30, 2014 04:58 pm Title: Heated whispers
Well damn, what a freaky scene. Golly, michaels shyness is just the sweetest thing. I love how they are together. And I'm so so glad she let it go and they made up, because that little episode could have turned hella ugly and fast.
Author's Response:
You're right, she did the right thing, Thank you <3
[Report This]Date: Jun 28, 2014 11:15 am Title: Screams of anger
Beautiful chapter , you could tell jayden needed that. Anger isnt best when built up
great job i love it! And thank you for the dedication! <3
Author's Response:
Ur welcome girl!
[Report This]Date: Jun 28, 2014 07:42 am Title: Screams of anger
Cora is a damn hypocrite! Seriously? She yells at Jayden for getting pregnant as a teen but she did the same damn thing! At least Jayden took responsibility and kept the child unlike Cora who killed her baby. Wow! That's really fucked up!
Jayden needs to just scream and yell and hit somthing. It's great she's finally letting out some of her anger vocally but she really needs to just yell it out and hit something. I really think she meds to just hit something.
Michael needs to explain why he didn't come after her, why the drifted from each other.
Author's Response:
You're probably right, Jayden needs a real fight to get rid of her anger...
Thank you for reviewing <3
[Report This]Date: Jun 27, 2014 12:24 pm Title: Breaths of fresh air
They all need counceling, Jayden needs it the most, but they all need to talk about it. They all loved Ally and they are all grieving. Jayden needs to let that anger out and everything she wants to say because it's eating her alive. I'm Michael and Jayden are together, that's the only way they'll get through this and get back to each other.
Author's Response:
You're so so right ... But yea Jayden really do need it the most.
I'm so happy you like my story xx <3
[Report This]Date: Jun 27, 2014 12:21 pm Title: Embrace in the storm
Thank God Michael stopped her! I am so glad he didn't leave and stayed with her! They both need to help one and other.