Date: May 27, 2011 06:05 pm Title: Chapter 15
WTH??!!! And Michael?! After what jerky Ray tried to do to her, they act like nothing happened! I don't care for Ray's excuses! He deserves wha he got now, he should learn to keep his big ugly mouth shut. And what about she'll always be his?? HELL NO! DDid she forget the situation she could have been in if Michael hadn't been here? Dakota needs to be with him!! Mike is THE nice guy, he just doesn't like ppl to disrespect him like that.
Girl you can't do that to us and to Michael!! Anyway nice chappy (except for the Ray part and his s*** excuses I don't believe, not after what he tried to do) update soon!
Author's Response:
That was what I was aiming for lol let's just say Dakota is under Ray's "spell" I don't like him either and I have a VERY bad feeling he's going to hurt Dakota emotionally D: Thanks for reviewing! MJ Fiction is finally working for me hooray!
Date: May 25, 2011 04:41 pm Title: Chapter 15
i love it i love it
Author's Response:
Haha thanks dude :) I'm trying to make up for all those days I didn't post up so maybe two or three chapters today :)
Date: May 22, 2011 06:33 pm Title: Just A Note
OMG that Ray is a mega jerk!! I hope Dakota will get through this, she needs a hero right now lol! MIKE C'MON!!
Update soon pleeeeeeeaz
Author's Response:
Haha thanks :) but my computer isn't letting me on the internet and it's making me angry >:( I don't think I'll be able to upload until maybe a couple of weeks? Maybe a month? And Michael's supposed to be the bad one! lol I think it's Michael's turn to be bad ;) tell me what you want him to do ;)
Date: May 20, 2011 01:20 pm Title: Trouble
Oh gosh...
Date: May 20, 2011 05:27 am Title: Bluestar
OMG....this story is soooooo ODD. Lol.
Author's Response:
Thank you I like it to be odd :)
Date: May 20, 2011 05:17 am Title: Chapter 4
This story is so weird....I'll keep reading though....
Date: May 20, 2011 05:12 am Title: Chapter 3
Oh woooooowwwww.....
Date: May 12, 2011 01:09 pm Title: Bluestar
Ouch that was not the best thing to say now!lol I'm curious, how MJ did MJ know her real name... and why everbody is treating him like a criminal if he's not? He's got to be in a gang or smthg. Maybe him and Dakota have alreday met in a long-time past and she can't remember. Well, this is a nice story! Keep it up;-)
Author's Response:
Yeah lol and well you see, the way Michael knows her real name is a secret. It's not because they met before. And well he did kill and bomb those things but he didn't, he's not a criminal. It might be a little confusing to understand, but just read to know ;D
Thanks!! :D
[Report This]Date: May 11, 2011 04:16 am Title: Chapter 3
Good thing she got rid of ray, hes a loser anyways haha
Author's Response:
Yup, he always was :D
[Report This]Date: May 11, 2011 04:12 am Title: Chapter 2
Thats so kind of her to just take some girl off the street & Rays a punk! I knew he would be cheating
Author's Response:
Yeah, I don't like Ray either :P and yeah, I wanted her to seem like a good person even though she swears a bunch :D
[Report This]Date: May 11, 2011 04:09 am Title: Chapter 1
Haha i like the interaction between her & ray. I think your doing a good job with this :)
Author's Response:
Thank You :D
[Report This]Date: May 10, 2011 10:39 pm Title: Chapter 1
I LOVE IT!!! MORE PLEASE!!
Author's Response:
Thanks dude haha :) I just posted a new chapter so yeah lol. It might be a little boring but don't worry. I'm about to introduce Michael maybe in the next two chapters or sooner so just wait ;)
[Report This]Date: May 10, 2011 05:04 am Title: Chapter 1
I love it hun please continue :)
Author's Response:
Haha thanks :D I'll try to if my computer doesn't act like a douche again :P
[Report This]Date: May 10, 2011 04:51 am Title: Chapter 1
That was good so far. Keep going
Author's Response:
Thanks :D I'll post another one after school :)