[Report This]Date: Mar 11, 2016 07:46 am Title: BONUS: TJ2: The Lost Chapters - Valentines Day
i wish he did have someone it could have turned out differntlly.
[Report This]Date: Nov 24, 2015 07:30 pm Title: Chapter 90: TJ2: The Lost CHapters - This Is IT - Pt(2) - Unbreakable
Hey
You did a terrific wrap up of your story. I loved the flash backs to bring the story the full circle.
The new baby was such a nice surprise.
What I love the most is not only how Michaels life could have been so different but if he had not died in 2009 what you showed what could have been.
Great work!
[Report This]Date: Oct 31, 2015 07:34 pm Title: Chapter 88 - TJ2: The Lost Chapters - If I don't Have You Pt(2) - Free Fallin
Great chapter. Loved it.
So glad Randy And Tohme got theirs.
I think my favorite part of this chapter was when Michael got Janice to let go of all the stuff she had bottled up inside of her. They are so connected to each other.
One more chapter to go. I will say I'll miss theses two but it's time to move on.
I loved the "Lost Chapters" you added. They pulled so much together.
[Report This]Date: Oct 30, 2015 08:48 pm Title: Chapter 87 - TJ2: The Lost Chapters - If I don't Have You Pt(1) - Coming home
Great chapter.
I had tears in my eyes with the interaction of Janice and her mother.
Great part with Janice and her friends when talking about Janice being the one in control and needed to remained Michael.
[Report This]Date: Sep 16, 2015 04:14 pm Title: Chapter 86 - TJ2: The Lost Chapters - Pt (2) Touch and go
Jaquelin's connection with her grandmother is amazing. I'm glad Janice's mother is better.
Michael's 1997 accident was preventable if Sony had provided all Michael's requirements that were requested.
One down (Randy) and one to go (Tohme). He could cause a lot of trouble for Michael and his family.
[Report This]Date: Sep 16, 2015 03:18 pm Title: Chapter 85: TJ2: The Lost Chapters - Love Falls Over Me... More tour Stress, TLC (Pt - 1)
Those two Randy and Tohme sure never give up. They would stress anyone out. They are the type that push and push and push to break a person down to agree with them.
I loved the reaction of the kids when they found out Mchael had A snake ( boa constrictor).
Michael and Janice's relationship has gotten stronger and more in tuned to each other over the years.
Date: Aug 11, 2015 07:47 am Title: Prologue: Girls Night Out... I Can Feel You
hi,
because you didnt reply to my last message, I am letting you know I have removed your summary images and I have replaced them with the image URL. Please refine the sizes of them before you re-add them.
Please read the earlier review that I left for you 3+ days ago.
Kindly,
SW.
[Report This]Date: Aug 08, 2015 05:03 pm Title: Chapter 86
Only one word three letters. WOW!
Date: Aug 08, 2015 04:49 pm Title: Prologue: Girls Night Out... I Can Feel You
Hi there,
Please immediately review the new "news" item on the main page regarding story summaries and image sizes.
Please resize to meet the confines of 500x600px at maximum. At this stage the banner you are using is too large for design of this website. Please also review the size of your story summary, multiple use of images, shout outs and user reviews. The story summary is to be a description of your story. You'll need to do this within three days to avoid your images being deleted.
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Kindly,
SW.
[Report This]Date: Jul 27, 2015 09:22 am Title: Chapter 83: TJ2: The Lost Chapters - Glory.... Black Lives Matter
Excellent chapter, girl. Well written.
A little late a HAPPY BIRTHDAY🎂🎉🎈🎈
[Report This]Date: Jul 13, 2015 12:18 pm Title: Chapter 82 - TJ2 - The Lost Chapters - Ghost of the Past (pt2) Rain On Me
Antonio was a piece of work. If the only Janice had listened to Antonio's old girlfriend. The worst things were done to Janice, that no woman should ever go through. She kept it bottled up inside her and I think this helped make Janice the woman she became.
I agree with you, if Michael had of known what Antonio had done to Janice, in th alley, someone named Antonio would either be dead or worse. (I can think of so much worse).
Please up date this weekend again, prettyyyyyyyyy please.
[Report This]Date: Jul 11, 2015 11:47 am Title: Chapter 81 TJ2 - The Lost Chapters - Ghost of her Past (Pt1)
Janice's Aunt Beverly is a real piece of work. Janice sure shout her aunt's mouth up but by having to bring up her (Janice) past. Some people never know when to mind their own business.
I would like you to post the next chapter now.
Author's Response:
She is but it needed to be said as much as she needed to hear it it was being held onto for so long and it needed to come out the family and friends needed to know as well as she needed to deal with it she still is holding onto the pain it made her feel
Give me a second on the next chapter I was right in the middle of a scene 5 chapter's ahead and it HOOOOOTTTT!!!! don't wanna loose my momentum
[Report This]Date: Jun 28, 2015 08:20 pm Title: Chapter 80 TJ2 The Lost Chapters - Look back at HIStory
Another great chapter! I loved the part looking back when Janice went on the first tour with Michael. All the action.....terrific even the bit with Lisa Marie.
Author's Response:
Thought you would love it it was bugging me plus I was reading another story on here where they were dealing with Michael's tour life and made me want to seevhowvthese two managed
There are at least two more history tour moment I will be hitting on in just a few chapters stay tuned I felt we needed bro hit on them before we close this book for good more to come
And about the bumping I'm gonna just play nice you and I both bwould hate for this story to get locked before it was done so I'm gonna play nice with the admin see you soon
[Report This]Date: Jun 21, 2015 05:52 pm Title: Chapter 79: TJ2 - The Lost Chapters - Transioning... Grammys to Washiongtion D.C
WOW So much in this chapter.
You have to feel for Janice.msomeone who is so in control and can't be where her mother is concerned.
I love the way Michael and Janice are in such a good place in their relationship.
Janice's interactions with Beyoncé was super. I loved it when Sean mentioned Mchael's part in introducing Beyoncé to Sean and Janice was right there. The action between Michael and Sean and when Beyoncé came by at the end of the conversation was oh so good.
Oh yes Janice and Michael's talk after her heated talk with Beyoncé was good too.
Date: Jun 13, 2015 12:43 pm Title: Prologue: Girls Night Out... I Can Feel You
I have been with you since you first started writing tabloid junkie!:D
Author's Response:
I knew I recognized the name it had been so long sense I had seen you comment I couldn't remeber if I saw you comment here or in one of the other stories i write but nice to see you again stay connected ya'll more to come