




Date: Aug 30, 2014 02:44 am Title: Chapter 54: It's On Again PT (2)... You Can't Walk A Mile In These Shoes
Omg, that ending was genius. " Let’s get to work shall we” I was like 0o0
Author's Response:
Aw thank you Welcome to the story nice here from New people lets me know I'm touching people with what i write if you liked that your gonna love the new update





Date: Aug 30, 2014 02:19 am Title: Chapter 54: It's On Again PT (2)... You Can't Walk A Mile In These Shoes
The New Banner So Pretty.
I Hope Derek Stay In His Own Lane. He Know It A Be Tragic If He Didn't....I Understand Why He Can't; Be Her Friend Now But He Wouldn't Want To Risk Their Trust Over Something Stupid??????
Is Lisa Gone Come Out And Tell The Truth About Her And Michael's Marriage?????
What You Do For Michael's Birthday????
Author's Response:
Theank you i was inspired and we han't yet sen the whole cast together so I had to do it
you have to read and see how that goes... all i hae to say is some lessions must be learned
no Lisa is a pivital part to the way this goes down
for Michaels B-Day I worked on the Chapter i posted ALL day and kept up with my Mj facebook friends posts





Date: Aug 17, 2014 05:54 pm Title: Chapter 50: Babysitters, BackStabbers, awards shows Funerals
Yeeesss Cutting Derek Off Was The Best Thing For All Of Us LolI Know I'll Sleep Alot Better Tonite.
I Like The New Baby Sitter . .She My Type Person Lmao.
I Agree With Jon'Nee Priscilla Probably Sleeping With All Them Men. She A Hoe. Beyonce Crazy And Bold. . . Man If I Was Her And Michael Ain't Never Call Me Back I Wouldn't Never Wanna See His Ass Again. I Would Be Hiding At EVERY AwardShow Lol. I Hope The Twins Be Okay Though. But Naw Thoo I Don't Think That The Lady In The Picture Crying Cuz She Wouldn't Have Too Be Leaning Over The Railing Like .
Author's Response:
YESSSSS She DID THAT... Lolyes it was But Maybe psossibly Michael may have few words for derek before All is said and done Hmm maybe
Yes, she just Felt Right... yes shes about her job and doing the best job for the client she worls for and isn't about getting in peoples business and trying to get inbetween people business
You will find out if Jon'Nee is right, LOL beyonce couldn't get time of day... LOL yiur saying you would leave the guy be or Stalk them... LOL
Read the new chapter to Find out about the Twins
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OH GOD the lady in the picture... thaty picture is begging for caption, because if you look at Michael he looks like I'm just trying to stand here but he has this expression that he looks to be trying to cover his face... he just looks SO awkward... but can you imagen being him when your trying to observe what is happening and end up stuck behind a lady throwing her guys up then in the other Photo he's like damn near standing right next to her
and oh god... she must have been mortified if she was just a regualer family member of friend, you meet the king of POP and what is he going to rember you for... the fact that you had your head over the boat the whole time... but she can look at the bright side He may never rember her face because he never saw it..... because she was to busy herling or trying not.... BAD situation all around





Date: Aug 12, 2014 09:00 pm Title: Chapter 49: Gary Last Days... Your Mine Camaflogue Pt (3)
Omqqeee Im So Happy They Talked. Like Yaassss Work Out All Them Problems Lol.
But I Dont Talk About Irrelvent Females So Thats Why I Didnt Say Nothing About Beyonce Thotting Ass. Man Mike Wasnt Never Gone Give Her The D. She Cant Handle With Her Hoe Ass Espically If She Cant Be Faithful Lmao.
I Cant Wait To See Whats Gone Happen To Antonio Thoo.
I Just Gotta Ask This. . . Where You Get This Idea That It Take Two Hours To Get From Gary To Chicago Or Vice Versa. .Cuz It Only Take 45 Mintues.
Author's Response:
YES they did talk we are aon our route to a resolution it seems
LOL beyonce inferiorness... Faithful, um she and jay aren't seeing each other YET... stay tuned
I have something interesting planned for Antonio close out of his storyline... but the rath of Hell will be coming to his HEAD
on the Gary tip, it was stricaly a last minute improvise, I didn't take the time to look it up in time just visual distance... should have know it was a bit shorter then that... it was guess.... but thanks for the correction I'll fix it, whe I remember to
New Chapter up





Date: Aug 08, 2014 10:37 pm Title: Chapter 46: Take it Back (to Dinner) and a Rescue
I'm baaack! Had to handle a lil business..Priscilla's lil confession surprised me a bit and her cockiness was a bit irritating but she's gonna get hers (hopefully)...Trish's death was suprising but not really. She knew the consequences of her lifestyle...I'm glad Mike showed his you got me fucked up side, Antonio deserved it. I know there's gonna be more drama and I can't wait! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
Author's Response:
HEY GLad your Back
Hope your Business went Welll
Well Pricilla holds Grudges and she has the power and means to do it just for the hell of it and we know she HATED Michael, and the way the marriage feell out Lisa was on the cover of every magazine looking like a Whore, because of Janice, and this is Pricilla's pay back because "You don't FUCKS with a PRESLEY"
Yeah I planned when i brought her in that she was only ment to tempt Jon'Nee she was planned to come to a demise, Only there to help move the story along
Glad Michael shoed his You Got Me FUCKED UP side
CRACKED UP... but come on now you had to Know him and Antonio gonnna have some words Antonio was lucky he held his composure and din't beat his ASS in the ally and leave him there... but he was thinking about the consequence of that but he roughed him up enough to Know try me and next time... NO HOLDING BACK
Yes it is Now Chapters up Glad your back... can't wait to hear what you think of the new chapter





Date: Aug 08, 2014 03:45 pm Title: Chapter 46: Take it Back (to Dinner) and a Rescue
Omqqee Trish Dead. . .On The Low I Shead A Few Tears. .
And LIsa Momma, She A Hoe But I Must Admit I Didnt See That Bitch Being The RingLeader I Thought It Was Gone Be Tommy. . .Smh Shit Crazy .
But Michael And Janice Though. . . &&And When My Nigga Mike Went Hood On Antonio. :)
Author's Response:
Yes... sad but she had to go.... her job was done, she went out strong though protecting her girl... that what it was about
Of course what bet better bitch to be the Ring leader then the major bitch herself, HELLO, see I don't know if you remember, but in the previosu story we never really dealt with that Clique, Pricilla, Tom, DIane and Bobbies Borther, this story that must be handled
Don't make me give it away just atay tuned
I know... didn't see the hand cuffs scene hmm... they got it IN... he tamed her... but there is more to that.... I'm suprised you didn't say anything about Queen B flirting with our Boy...but you know he know better he left her RIGHT QUICK when janice called
Yes he totally went hood... but you gotta know... Him and Michael confrontation was going to be heated, I didn't want him to go IN on him it made more impact for him Not to but he tested the waters showing him, you try me... and next time I will beat your ass within a inch of your life... he pulled a swave move on him
New Chapters up More to come with family gatherings and drama... stay tooned check it out





Date: Aug 07, 2014 02:17 pm Title: Chapter 42"Next Time (I'ma Lock the bedroom door)... She...
Omqqee I Thought About Her Testimony Too Though. . But Grace Was Always Creepy Anyways. . Jon'Nee Good She Got Bobby She Aint Even Trying To Sweat Trish.
Author's Response:
Yeah, I had the Idea to add that scene in for a while but I just never knew where it had to be right... it couldn't just be thrown in there and as per all the est of the the story it worked it self out... some times those spontanious unplanned scene come to you and they suprise you when your righting it exactly where they go but it fit perfectly
Date: Aug 07, 2014 12:40 pm Title: Chapter 41:Mission Impossible.... On The Run
Awwee, You Love Me ???? I Love You Too Lil Shawty.I Dont Think That Debbie Was That Bad. . I Mean Besides Getting On Tv And Saying That Her Kids Were A "Gift"Too Me She Look Way Better Than Grace But Beauty Is In The Eye Of The Beholder. .
Author's Response:
YES GIRL... I Love you... Hell your Like one of the only ones that comments on this story... I have hundreds of reads per Chapter but YOU my lovely are the only one that says anything Consistantly... so i must show my commenter some love,
the next one is Lew... I can't rember her name completly but shes second to you... on comments
Debbie... Hmm Well look at it this way, I think Debbie was never suspose to be known as those kids Mom and her friend convinced her to make it public and Michael had to marry her... and in the divorce she got a HOUSE and when she ran out of money she $8mill I might add... she came to michael asking for more money he said "HELL NO"
and for the life style debbie has 8 mill if budgeted like regular money could have lasted her for a LONG time.... her ass was spending it like she was married to him and could get more when ever she wanted it and he said NO so she aint all that good
so true... I think Michael loved her as a friend but everyone that was close to him like debbie and grace screwed him over to a degree





Date: Jul 31, 2014 12:17 am Title: Chapter 41:Mission Impossible.... On The Run
I'm Sorry NoOne Remembers. . .I Hope You Had A Good Time Though. .
Man I Don't Think Michael Slept With Her. It Just Don't Sound Right, He Ain't Stupid. He Not Gone Drop A Diamond To Pick Up Coal. Besides He Know Better Than To Insult Janice I Mean Grace Ain't Got Nothing On Her. I Mean If He Was Gone Cheat It Seem Like He Would Go Find An Attractive Female At Least. Cuz Grace Ain't It. . And She Seemed A Little Thirsty The Way She Wanted To Gossip About A Divorce.
But If He Did Sleep With He Ain't Man I Thought He Was Lol.
Author's Response:
Yeah... I don't celebrate it any more so it's nice when people say something and i won't celebrate it again till I'm around people that care enough about me to make feel like celebrating it again
I LOVE YOU GIRL
you so smart... and YOU REMBERED the fact that grace was talking behind there back.... good girl
HA... Drop a diamond for a piece of CHAR COAL... I was dying
Now come on in Michael defense look at who he maried in real life Debbie, I think Grace would have been a step up from THAT... a friend of mine once said when I showed her debbie that she looked like she would have given him crabs she had a whole skit for it had me on the floor laughing.
Your right if Michael wanted revenge on Janice he would have called any of them other hoes he use to frequent, Shana would HAPPILY have been the hoe just to get anoter night with him, but Michael not Dumb he love his woman he not like that.
But check out the Fall out... more to come in the two newst chapters I just posted
Date: Jul 28, 2014 02:04 am Title: Chapter 40 Broken a cry for help... September 11th Part 2
Happy Belated Birthday Sorry I Didnt Notice.
Author's Response:
your one of the only people that said it without me really need to tell them or remind them... everyone forgets :(
Date: Jul 28, 2014 01:59 am Title: Chapter 40 Broken a cry for help... September 11th Part 2
Okay Forgive My ShortHand . My Phones Keyboard Is Acting Up.And I Thought That I Wasnt Going To Fix It. .
But Anyways I Cant Wait For Janice And Michael Too Just Get InTune With Each Other. I MeanHe Said He Still Was In Love With Her So That Mean She Can Stop The Divorce Process Right???? Then Her And Michael Can Make Up And Be Cool Again. .
Lbvfs I Am Such A Child In Soo Many Ways. This Imagination I Got For All Types Of Happy Endings Is So Hetic. .
Ayeee But What Have Jon'Nee Gotten Herself Into She The Only In That Secanrio. . And Its Hella For All Them But She A Straight Boss . .Cuz She Wasnt Acring Very Scared.
Author's Response:
Yeah It's coming you can tell when they think about each other when they aren't togethere they are just as much in love with each other as they ever were. YES he did say he still lloves her if that not a sign thenshes just plane stupid
to Quote a tyrese song Nothing on You "If I wanted her I would get her... but I don't want to put that on us"
and about the divorce thing... I have something spical planned... but see you forget something.. a divrce can't legally go under way till both parties have signed the papers and they get turned in and filed... Michael has yet to sign anything. and even sto that only half the step he would have to send the papers back to be filed... so techniqually they are still as Much married to one another as they ever were
the quuestion is Will they or won't they get FILED
Will Michael and janice be cool again... you have to wait and see... but you have to trust the author on that one hmm
Who Knows you just may get your happy ending.(I saw the New Trailer for 50 shades of grey, I'm get inspired) Wait and see wait and see
Ah Jon'Nee All I have to say is keep reading, I told you i slowed down Michael and Janices story line for a reason and you get to see a bit of it in the Newest chapter, it's a Nail biter
Hey Jon'Nee is janices sister Janice is a Boss so you better Know jon"Nee ain't no Punk either looking at her big sister cut down the bad guys and eat them for luchStay tuned MORE TO COME CAN"T WAIT TO HEAR YOUR OPINION





Date: Jul 22, 2014 08:54 pm Title: Chapter 38: Elevators, Suitcases and September 11th... Oh My
WOW!!! I wonder why they want him at that meeting so bad myself? I hope they can iron out their difference and quit being so pigheaded
Author's Response:
Isn't That a good ass Question... WHen i heard about it I wondered that too espcially the way that it went down seemed shady as shit... Oh Janice and Michael... at the end of the day they reallly just need to remove themselves from the situation agree to let ALL of there insecurities go and and give eachother a REALLY good Love making session and All will be back to normal
but as the saying goes... it's always darkest before dawn
Date: Jul 09, 2014 10:02 pm Title: Chapter 35: Telling (The Truth) - Converstaions secrets Reveiled
Actually I Feel The Same Way. I Can't Believe The Way That Some His Fans Try Make Him Out To Be Gay. I Don't Understand It.
Author's Response:
Yeah it's very sad to see fans or suposid fans disrepecting Michael in that way if your going to write about such a horific experience do it in a way of respect not just in a way to make him gay so the other gays can have a sotry line with Michael... thats sad sick and Wrong... when this is happeing to people out ther in real life every day they don't become gay but are tramatized by it
and if god forbid this evere happen to Michael... and sad to say I actually have heard a story or two from some reputable sources that it may have happened, if it did and lord knows I don't want to believe it... it's sick it's being twisted like this just for a gay sex play if your going to write it tell the hard sad truth about it and it don't have to be sick beatiality... it is sick how these peopl write this type of thing for FUN
in NO way is CHildmosatation or rape a Topic to be played with... and if this ever happened to Michael in real life May god rest his soul and those fans be put to shame for there blasphamy
NEW CHAPTERS UP CAN"T WAIT TO HEAR WHAT YOU THINK





Date: Jul 09, 2014 09:59 pm Title: Chapter 37: Tell Him The Truth... Or Rumor Has it (Pt )2
I'm So Conflicted I Don't Know Whose Side To Be On.
I Wanna Side With Janice But Kissing Is Technically Considered Cheating. But Michael Ain't Got No Room To Speak Cuz He Slept With Lisa Alot I Don't Care If That Before They Got Married I'm Still Hurt About It.But I Must Admit I Feel Like Michael Likes To Play The Victim So I Guess.
But Bottom At The End Of The Day I Feel Like Janice Should Most Definitely Dismiss Derek And Let Him Gone On About His Way. And Michael Who Basically Started All Of This Mess Should Either Talk To Janice(cuz Communication Is Key) About His Problems (She His Whole Wife It Ain't Like She Gone Judge Him)Or Get On HisEnd Knees And Talk To God. No More Of This"Let Me Talk To Lisa "Mess That He Been Doing.
Derek Need To Learn How To Stay Out Of People Relationships.
Author's Response:
YES my pretty you fell into my emotional trap... you don't know whoes side to be on... and i designed it that way on purpose
the bottom line is Janice is wrong and Michael is wrong... and two wrongs don't make a right... you can't play mind fucking games with your spose when you you both play the same games...as the story goes "you can't beat someone at there own game"
these two are soidentical in traits they even manipulate each other the same and know how to because they are the same... two halves of the same whole... there soul mates no matter WHAT they come at each othe with, fear anger lust, diceit... manipulation they both do the same things to one another... the only diference is how they react to each other games
ALL caused by... ANTONIO... as SOFIA wll tell them they need to heal each other and place the blame where the blame is due on Antonio's ass
Serek was created as a pleaent but manipualtive cause to add more Drama Derek ain't got a shot in hell but we give him his 15minutes make him feel special don't worry all will be sorted out before all is said and done.





Date: Jul 02, 2014 10:10 pm Title: Chapter 35: Telling (The Truth) - Converstaions secrets Reveiled
I'm Not Sure How I Feel About The Direction You Took With Michael's Secret Or The Reason Why Lisa Was The Person He Told. But I Still Liked The Chapter, It Made For Great Drama.
Author's Response:
Well believe it or Not Chapter was Planned before the story even started it wasn't on a whim to make the story line shocking, I wanted to do something diferent and everything was ment to trnspire this way
I just felt that if Lisa went thought it then he would feel better talking to her about it and he didn't want to put that burden on his wife which he explained
I wanted to do that because It actually a topic matter that has been played around with on this site but I wanted to come ate it from a difernt point of view a Much more serious one... and I'm going to say it nd don't get Mad but I have heard scctual accounts with in the Industry saying that it may have ACTUALLY haappened... I NEVER want to believe it did and if it DID happen I feel really disposinted in the fans that write this topic matter as a joke on these story just so they can have michael turn gay or have gay sex with a man
If michael ever DId go through this god rest his soul becuase that would have been awful and if anyone should write about it it need to be written about with care and seriousness... THAT is why I debated so much on that chapter because I wasn't sure how it would be taken but it was always ment to be there
but that is the last it will be discussed openly in the story but do stay tuned for more... the new chapters are a doozey