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Reviewer: Karoll84 Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 28, 2013 10:14 am Title: Chapter 3: Unexpected

please continue this this so good

Reviewer: nene147 Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 27, 2013 01:39 pm Title: Chapter 3: Unexpected

More?

Reviewer: Southern_cutie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 13, 2013 02:33 pm Title: Chapter 3: Unexpected

 I really like where this story is headed!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: mjloverforever Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 16, 2012 05:14 pm Title: Chapter 3: Unexpected

Continue

Reviewer: Browneyedbeauty Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 02, 2011 06:22 am Title: Chapter 3: Unexpected

That was amazing good Update please.

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Date: Nov 02, 2011 06:03 am Title: Chapter 1- Rude Awakening

Aww that was sad that happen to michaels girlfriend.

Reviewer: Mjjprincess Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 09, 2011 06:59 am Title: Chapter 3: Unexpected

Cnt wait for the next part :) your doing a great job with this story!

Reviewer: Mjjprincess Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 09, 2011 06:55 am Title: Chapter 2- Don't Embarrass Me

Dang michael sure is a crazy mofo sheesh! I like this stoey though. Keep it up :)

Reviewer: Mjjprincess Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 09, 2011 06:46 am Title: Chapter 1- Rude Awakening

Im likin this, good job

Reviewer: AtMJsHouse Signed [Report This]
Date: May 09, 2011 05:38 am Title: Chapter 3: Unexpected

This is really good i like it alot when Michael is kind of a jerk.

Reviewer: fatfat Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 09, 2011 01:47 am Title: Chapter 3: Unexpected

I loved it! II can't wait for more. Now in my favorites! :D

Reviewer: briarae92 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 08, 2011 12:22 pm Title: Chapter 1- Rude Awakening

Well, I just I'm the first review:) (heyyy lol). I love this chapter, not lying either, you made Mr. Jackson as the devil wear prada well in the case, devil wears penny loafers Lol. It saddens me what happened to his girlfriend and unborn baby, but good job on your first chapter:) keep up the good work!

Author's Response:

lol thanks!!! :D and i was scared to write because im new here, kinda, and im not sure what people like to read, you know. but thank you so much! muah!

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