[Report This]Date: Jul 22, 2015 10:37 pm Title: Here Comes Trouble
Wow... I hope that Michael will come to Lauren's rescue, and that Lauren will tell him about her being picked on by the students and the teachers. Also, I hope that Kevin gets his comeuppance, too...
Anyway, keep up your super-neat, very phenomenal and beautifully creative writing... :)
Date: Oct 25, 2014 07:14 pm Title: Here Comes Trouble
Hmm, I'm interested in seeing where this will go ^^ Lots of questions have been raised. I hope the next chapter will be released soon, and I wish you happy writing :)
Date: Sep 18, 2014 12:31 am Title: Here Comes Trouble
Why dont she jus take karate lessons so she can whoop Bados's ass over and over again... and what happened to Michael... and what did she do? Oh I have a lot of questions
Author's Response:
I decided to make a chapter with just Lauren in it so the readers could see more of her daily life because I felt that I did not do that enough :) and you shall find out soon! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing !
Date: Sep 18, 2014 12:06 am Title: Human Garbage
Carbon copy of seniour year.... awesome. I noticed the name "Angel Webber".... She's one of the characters in the book and movie "Twilight series"..are you a fan,because I am. Awesome job
Author's Response:
I actually have never heard of "Seniour Year" and I actually made up the character Angel Webber and everything else. It's all original! But Thank you :)
Date: Apr 26, 2014 09:30 pm Title: Human Garbage
I didn't know that, that's pretty neat. I was referring to the song The Bird And The Worm by The used. But hey, you learn something new everyday.lol
Author's Response:
Haha! Oh yeah, I know I definitely do haha.
Date: Apr 26, 2014 08:10 pm Title: Emulsify
Total blabber moment and has nothing to do with the chapter, but every time I read the title of this story it reminds of a song.
Great chapter by the way. Glad to see an update!
Author's Response:
Thank you very much! And it actually is a song, it's a song by Owl City. I usually hate seeing song titles as story titles but the whole meaning of the song fit the story line perfectly.
Date: Feb 24, 2014 11:51 pm Title: Human Garbage
Its very good so far!!!!! i like it :)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
Date: Feb 24, 2014 09:54 pm Title: Low Caliber
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue
this is a AMAZING story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you very much! Chapter 3 may be up tomorrow or Wednesday. I have a couple other stories I'm working on so I'm not sure. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: Feb 24, 2014 08:32 pm Title: Human Garbage
Its good
Author's Response:
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: Feb 24, 2014 07:18 pm Title: Human Garbage
'Dawwwww Michael!!! XD Please update soon!!! :)
Author's Response:
I'm actually working on chapter two right now! :)