[Report This]Date: Feb 18, 2014 11:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
I already love this! I can already predict what's going to happen! I think this story is going to be on my favorites list next to Shades Of Truth and Poetic Justice! I think you should keep the current girls you have now because they're both beautiful!
Author's Response:
Hello :) Yay! Thank you very much! Well, that would be bring if you already knew how it ends and this is why I will try my best to be unpredictable ;-)) Thank you for your advice, I'll keep the same girl :D
[Report This]Date: Feb 18, 2014 10:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
Heya :)
Oh, girl, you are just too good at writing. As a first chapter, I think it's really good because you just pulled me in to the story, and I'm very eager to read the upcoming chapters. I agree with Tegan; people do only care about pretty faces and good looks. People are just ignorant though. Tegan is beautiful too, just like Mya.
I think you should write it in third person pov. That's just my opinion :)
Author's Response:
Hey girl :D
Thank you so much! I had this idea in my head for a long time and I'm happy to write it now :) Thank you for your advice, I'll continue to write in the 3rd person POV :)
Date: Feb 18, 2014 10:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
excellent!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you :) The new chapter is online :D