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Reviewer: SineMj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 05, 2014 09:16 am Title: Chapter 1

Well I guessed it would get to this point. Tegan should have gone with her. I'm sure plenty of women would betray their best friend/s for this man, so what made her think she was any different? I feel Michael should go with whom ever he really fell in love with. Although he likes the way Mya looks, he wants the woman he was talking to online. So that would be Tegan. I think Michael should be with Tegan. Looks come an fade but the personality she has will always be there. And if she betrays her friend for you, that shows she most likely can't be trusted in other ways. So I feel for Michael here because now he's the one who is clueless. lol

Now I'm curious of how Mya will pull off being Tegan. I mean I don't think she is as well read as Tegan. So in some way Tegan has some kind of leverage over Mya once Tegan finds out about Mya's betrayl. She can use that against her. But then it depends on if Michael doesn't fall for Mya before Tegan can figure anything out. But this is lesson learned never use someone else's picture for your profile knowing you were most likely going to meet them and expect them to be understanding. It's not nice and it's not honest either. 

I love the story and have to admit it's got me feeling suspense. I can't help but to feel bad for Tegan tho. A choice that she made and wasn't expecting to go so far will cause her pain in love and friendship.

 



Author's Response:

Hello SineMJ :D Yes, you were right :) Tegan trusts Mya and this is why she thought it wouldn't end up like this. But she was wrong :/ You're right again when you say that looks fade but maybe when Michael realize the woman he wants is Tegan, that would be too late. Tegan can't see it but she is beautiful and smart, tons of men would be dying to be with her.

Poor Michael! If he knew what was happening lol!

I'm glad you like the story! Thank you for the rate and the review, the new chapter is here :D

Reviewer: kaybelike Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 04, 2014 10:16 pm Title: Chapter 4

Ugh, I told you I'd love this already! I'd really love Michael to be with Mya but of course I don't think that will happen! I found it kind of selfish Tegan put Mya on the spot like that just to meet Michael, though but overall, I love this story already and can not wait for an update!



Author's Response:

HAHA! I'm glad you like the story :) Thank you for the rate and the review, the new chapter is online :)

Reviewer: Zedd_MJ Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Mar 04, 2014 07:13 pm Title: Chapter 1

Also I feel as If Tegan is more of a tomboy for some unknow reason and Mya just a girly girl! Man Things are gonna be so F-up in this story Annie! WHY DO YOU DO THIS To ME KNOWiNG IM GONNA CRY MY HEART OUT WITH TEGAN!



Author's Response:

Yes, it's going to be messy LOL! Thank you for the review :)

Reviewer: gottaluvrikki Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 04, 2014 06:47 pm Title: Chapter 4

Dang this bout to get messed up. Smh.



Author's Response:

Yup! LOL! The new chapter is here! :)

Reviewer: Zedd_MJ Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Mar 04, 2014 06:37 pm Title: Chapter 4

We only four chapters in and I feel just like Tegan like forreal forreal this is gonna be some BS! I cant I just want to beat Michael ass and slap Mya across the face and just fuck Tegan up! This gonna be like an artiffical love triangle!



Author's Response:

HAHA!It's already so messy but hey, Tegan started it! The new chapter is online :))!!!

Reviewer: purebutterflies Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 04, 2014 06:26 pm Title: Chapter 4

Oooh sneaky little Mya.



Author's Response:

ikr !! :/

Reviewer: AppleheadJax Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 02, 2014 10:33 am Title: Chapter 3

Okay what makes me laugh is that Tegan didn't realize her stupidity. Girl, if you're going to put Mya's picture up on that site instead of your own, OF COURSE he's going to go for Mya! He thinks Mya is Tegan. I don't blame him. But omg though, when he came all close to her... I thought for a split second maybe it IS her that he wanted and not Mya.

i feel sorry for Tegan too. She's pretty! She's not bad at all. Okay? Maybe Mya is a bit prettier? But she is pretty as well! Mya is different, Tegan is different. They're both pretty in their own way. I hope she stops thinking that she's not pretty -_-

She should tell Mya about this ASAP. Daaamn, I bet Mya will be happy Michael Jackson wants to meet her, but angry at Tegan too. awesome update, girl! <3



Author's Response:

Hey girl :)) LMAO! Tegan is silly! I agree when you say they are both pretty but differently. Tegan needs to be more confident about her looks! Yes, Mya is beautiful but Tegan is gorgeous too!

Reviewer: MJluvr12many Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 01, 2014 07:59 pm Title: Chapter 3

Ahhhh!!

Author's Response:

:)

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 01, 2014 07:04 pm Title: Chapter 3

Soooo wait, her silly ass is using her friends picture but is mad that Michael is attracted to her? Lmao that makes no sense! Chile Tegan is dumb! Why the hell would you do that? Confidence is one of the sexiest things a woman can have, and being a liar is one of the ugliest. She should've used her picture from the very beginning. So she really has no right to be mad that Mike is interested in her friend. Mya is very beautiful, and Tegan isn't ugly. But if she constantly puts herself down and compares herself to her friend, she's gonna stay losing. She needs to tel Mya the truth NOW. Going around catfishing. Girl bye. 



Author's Response:

Hey Kat! LMAO, yes kind of silly. Tegan doesn't have the right to be mad at Michael, he doesn't it's her he was talking to online. She needs to tell Mya!!I agree when you say confidence is sexy. Maybe Tegan needs to be more secure about her looks next time!

"Going around catfishing. Girl bye."

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I should have called this stry catfish lmao

Reviewer: April Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 26, 2014 07:39 am Title: Chapter 1

I love this book so far! Girl you are killing me with these XD I am humble to your writing abilities my dear. Chutos to you Annie <3



Author's Response:

Hey April :) Thank youuuu! I love writing stories so it's a pleasure for me :D

Reviewer: SineMj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 25, 2014 07:55 pm Title: Chapter 1

I think a part of why Michael was looking at Mya was not just because of her looks but because Tegan used Mya's picture when she was chatting with Michael. Tegan doesn't know the connection between the Michael online and Michael Jackson yet. But in Michael's mind he's getting ready to meet the woman he's been talking to all that time. He doesn't know it's really Tegan. Poor Mya has no clue what is going.



Author's Response:

Yes, you get it :) And yes LMAO! Mya is in the middle not aware of what is going on arounder her lool! Thank you for the review and the rate :D

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 25, 2014 08:00 am Title: Chapter 1

This is an interesting idea. 

The only thing I find a bit unbelievable is that Tegan is so much more attractive than Maya imo so why on earth wouldn't she use her own photo? Tegan's look is unique whereas Maya is kinda generic. Sure, both women are very pretty. But I have a hard time believing that Michael would stare at Mya over Tegan unless his attention was caught by her ridiculous outfit. Her look kind of screams 'golddigging ho' and I think Michael of all people would be wary of this. Unless he's just looking for fun for a night. 



Author's Response:

Hey Camille :D It's a shame Michael found her profile only after she changed her progile picture :/

"But I have a hard time believing that Michael would stare at Mya over Tegan unless his attention was caught by her ridiculous outfit. Her look kind of screams 'golddigging ho'"

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Michael was staring at Mya because in his mind, she is the woman he is talking to online. Poor Tegan :/ Thank you for the rate and the review :D

Reviewer: Zedd_MJ Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Feb 25, 2014 05:11 am Title: Chapter 1

NOOOOO! UH U SWEAR THIS IS GONNA BE A DISATER! MICHAEL LIKE TEGANS PERSONALITY! BUT HE LIKES MYA LOOKS. OMG I felt the pain in Tegan heart like that made so sad. If I was tegan Mya would not be alive right now.....



Author's Response:

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LOL! But Mya is Tegan's friend :/! She can't let a man get between them

Reviewer: Charlotte234 Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 25, 2014 12:15 am Title: Chapter 1

Ahhh, I already love your story, update soon! I'm dying to see what happens next, lol



Author's Response:

Thank you so much Charlotte, the new chapter is online :D

Reviewer: zzyxas Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 19, 2014 06:40 am Title: Chapter 1

This story is really, really good! I can't wait to read more already! As for the girls I think they're both perfect! Tegan has more of the girl next door, down to earth look and Mya is like what she is, a model. Update soon! 



Author's Response:

Thank you very much! I kept the same girl but I'm seriously thinking of changing the title lol! The new chapter is online, enjoy :D

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