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Reviewer: brandyandMJ Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 24, 2014 07:13 pm Title: Chapter 11

Uggghh! I despise Mya I do.

TEAMMARCE (Marc & Grace combined) there the only ones that im liking right now. Of course Tiger but i wish she would just tell the truth and not let Michael get too wrapped up with Mya. I love this Annie. Continue!



Author's Response:

LOOL! I love Grace and Marc too! ! :)

Reviewer: LouieLlama Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 24, 2014 07:03 pm Title: Chapter 11

Fuck that!!! Tegan needs to tell Michael the truth very soon!!! And if she tells Marc first, his ass needs to tell Michael!!!



Author's Response:

You know Tegan will never. Even if she is upset, she still doesn't want to break them up

Reviewer: DaizyfreeMJJ Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 23, 2014 07:41 pm Title: Chapter 2

I REALLY LIKE THIS STORY SO FAR. I TRULY DO.

Author's Response:

OMG THANK YOU SO MUCHHHH 💕 💕

Reviewer: DajahMykal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 23, 2014 10:12 am Title: Chapter 10

Grace and Tegan??? I wold have never thought! Lol at Grace not wanting Mya to take her man! I see Michael getting on Tegans good side. Where he should stay. Mya needs to stop being a spoiled rotten brat! She's already got the man!! Enjoy it and stop being bitchy! But we all know that it is karma slowly but surely coming around. Yes Michaels album is more important than you!! Just because an important person in your life walked away because of YOU doesn't mean that Michael should drop everything to be with you. She's basically lost everything because she put a man before her friends. Her fault, and if she didn't realize it yet than she is so blind and oblivious to everyone but herself.

Author's Response:

Yes, Grace and Tegan lol! Who would've known! I love their friendship 😊. The closer Michael is to Tegan, the quicker he will realise Tegan is the one he wanted but maybe it would be too late :/ Mya needs to get lost LOOL. THANK YOU FOR THE REVIEW

Reviewer: MJSWIFEY Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 23, 2014 05:46 am Title: Chapter 10

Omg, Mya is such a brat.. I'm really starting to hate her. Come on Grace and Marc, get drunk and spill your guts, tell Michael the truth about Mya. Tegan keep it classy girl.. Being your wonderful self, Michael will eventually see the real woman he fell for. Please update soon... PLEASE!!



Author's Response:

LMAO! That would be so funny if Grace drank too much and tell Marc everything! Michael will understand but will it be too late 😏?

Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 23, 2014 12:17 am Title: Chapter 10

Another update, already? yessssss

Okay, so, I guess I can't die until this story is over? pffft. Says the girl who puts up all of these cliffhangers.

This chapter reminds me why I love your stories, and this one in particular. Your chapters touch on so many different perspectives that it feels like I, as the reader, get a more comprehensive view of what is going on. Oh, and the random references to comical moments in pop culture at that time....and I'll forgive you for the random Spice Girls song that is now stuck in my head.

I'm cringing like crazy at just about any sentence with Mya in it. Forget Team Tegan or Team Mya. I'm Team Marc.



Author's Response:

YES! you can't die until the end of the story lol! Thank you so much for this cute review! You're so sweet <3 the Spice Girl are the best, I had to loool.

Reviewer: KOP77 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 22, 2014 11:33 pm Title: Chapter 10

Perfection!!! Loved this chapter. Had me laughing a few times.lol need more, need my fix.lol Update soon please! :D



Author's Response:

Thank you :) the new chapter is here :D

Reviewer: MJluvr12many Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 22, 2014 10:49 pm Title: Chapter 10

Aww, MJ looks so cute in that pic.

Author's Response:

He does :)!!

Reviewer: Zedd_MJ Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Apr 21, 2014 06:38 pm Title: Chapter 1

Annie I'm gonna stay just for you!



Author's Response:

Stay for the story!

Reviewer: DajahMykal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 21, 2014 01:10 pm Title: Chapter 9

Why the hell is Mya crying!!! Like it's everything but the obvious as to why Tegan is moving out. Mya let this man that she shouldn't even have In the first place come between her and Tegan. Mya barely even hangs or talks to Mya anymore unless Michael planned something and Tegan has to contact Mya. Boo fucking hoo girl!!! Be with the man that you basically stole from Tegan and live your lie of a life. Mya's character really upsets and frustrates me! Karma needs to come back ten-fold and bite her In the ass.

As for Tegan, I am proud of you girl!! Be your own woman and be as selfish as you want!! You deserve it after Mya has used and abused you all these years. She obviously doesn't need you anymore.

Author's Response:

Mya is either oblivious or she doesn't want to see why Tegan has a problem with Michael always being in their house.

YYYAAASS! Tegan is a grown woman and like beyonce sang, she can whatever she wants! Thank you for the review and the rate ;D

Reviewer: MJSWIFEY Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 21, 2014 07:27 am Title: Chapter 9

OMGGGGGGGGG. I love this story, please Update ASAP.. It's getting so interesting... 



Author's Response:

Thank you! The new chapter is here :D

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 21, 2014 07:14 am Title: Chapter 9

Yay Teagen, it's about time she moves on with her life! Even if Mya was a good friend, Tegan didn't have feelings for Michael, and Mya hadn't stolen him, it would still be weird. I can imagine that even under ideal circumstances Tegan would feel like a third wheel so right now it must be hell for her. I'm a bit disappointed she didn't read Mya the truth but honestly I doubt Mya would even care. She doesn't deserve honesty at this point, but I think it would have been good for Tegan to get it off her chest.

Now it's time for Tegan to realize how much she has to offer (which is a hell of a lot more than Mya), gain some confidence, and start dating, And when Michael learns the truth about Mya and sees her for who she really is, Tegan will hopefully be happy with someone else and over him.

I feel bad for Michael but I kind of don't at the same time. He's so stupid in some ways. Everyone can see that him and Mya are not going to last, that she isn't good for him. I feel bad because once he finds out she's dishonest he is going to be hurt, but it sounds like this is a pattern for him. Lisa, Camille, and now Mya. If you are too dumb to change the pattern you can't expect a different outcome. He needs to stop thinking with his dick and start using his mind. Which is ironically what attracted him to 'Tegan' in the first place. He keeps getting hurt because he keeps going for trashy women and basing his relationships on a physical connection. Not to mention, not having to put in any effort to get a woman. Mya just kind of fell into his lap, sure he thought she was deeper initially but it doesn't take a rocket scientist to know that isn't the case within a few minutes of meeting the chick. If he stopped to think for  a moment, he would realize something was amiss. Fuck, he should have realized something was amiss with her story that she borrowed Teagen's name, sounded intelligent online, and then showed up looking like a trashy ho. But of course he was lonely and just listened to his penis. His lack of standards is actually really sad. But it also makes me want to slap him. He isn't 21 years old anymore, time to grow the fuck up already. 

I don't know if he's emotionally mature enough for Tegan, to be honest. At this point I think she may be better off and happier with someone that uses their brain on a regular basis. But I do know that he is too good for Mya and doesn't deserve what she's doing to him either.



Author's Response:

Hey Camille :D

Tegan finally left! Wow, I thought it would never happen too! She put up with a lot lately and she needs her space now. You're right, Tegan should have told him the truth but Tegan still doesn't want to come between her and Michael.

You're right! Now Tegan needs to find herself a fine man and I have a little surprise coming, I hope you will like it but I won't say more ;))

Michael is so... clueless. He is still with Mya because she is attractive and he likes her personality. But when Tegan will open herself to Michael, he will realize the mistake he made. Yes, Mya is cute but she is not the girl he fell for online! He needs to open his eyes before he ends up in another Camille situation. Or maybe she should come back and tell him? DONT YOU THINK??

Even if Michael realizes Tegan is the girl he fell for online, she wouldn't want him. It still hurts her that he hasn't seen the difference yet. She can do better!

Reviewer: xMOONWALKERx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 21, 2014 07:11 am Title: Chapter 9

Good for Teg!! This is what she needs. I am so happy she is taking a big step to move out away from them. So happy!



Author's Response:

Yes, Tegan is grown and independent! Good for her ;D

Reviewer: Itshumannature03 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 21, 2014 07:02 am Title: Chapter 9

This is seriously one of my favourite stories! Hope you can update soon :)



Author's Response:

Thank you very much :')))! The new chapter is online :D

Reviewer: xMOONWALKERx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 21, 2014 12:42 am Title: Chapter 8

I so love Marc. He is on point. Michael should be more like him hahaha I really liked the online Michael better he was sweeter more idk he seemed less of the typical men. But the real Michael seem more like a hound dog, get his freak on, bang bang guy lol The way that he is staying over the girls house not respecting that that's Tegans house too. He noticed how she seems to feel about him, so he should of not stayed there at all. IMO

But Yesssssss this is what he needs. For Tegan to tell him what's good. Maya is a backstabbing bitch I don't like her one bit. Idk how Teg is still cool with her.

Mike needs to fall for Teg but with out Teg telling him that she was the girl online. ;)



Author's Response:

Yes, thank God for Marc. Maybe if he finds out the truth and tell Michael, he will understands! It's great that Tegan left, and Michael should have felt some type of way about it. Let's hope he has regrets!

I guess Tegan is still cool with Mya because she is a very forgiving person :/ Thank you for the review and the rate :D

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