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Reviewer: SineMj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 09, 2014 06:23 pm Title: Chapter 1

I knew Mya was full of it, she wasn't going to tell the truth. Marc needs to be the one to spill it. He nearly killed Grace twice, and it would be wrong to put all that hard work to shame, by not telling him. After how Michael has been behaving I feel it's a waste to expect him not to guilted by Mya, she is still selfish even after losing Tegan. That is where your friends come in. Marc hurry up and tell him!!! Don't wait for Tegan she will take too long.



Author's Response:

Mya genuiely wanted to protect Tegan and make it seem like she had nothing to do with it but at the end, Michael still doesn't know who is the woman he talked to online :/ Once again, she is making it all about her!

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 09, 2014 11:10 am Title: Chapter 17

OK I've reached the same point as I did in your other story "Waiting to Exhale" where Michael was still with Lisa's ass well after the point he should have been. I just can't anymore with Mya. I think I need to take a break for a chapter or two so that my eyeballs don't explode from high blood pressure. The fact that Mya was and still is so well aware of Tegan's past issues and abuse, and still stole Michael and still won't tell him the truth is reprehensible. Yet again, she is thinking only of herself and playing it up to make herself look better I have no sympathy for her at all. She is a phoney ass and the reason men keep treating her like an idiot is because she ain't shit and they can all see it. 

Annie you had better promise me that she will get what she deserves. Which at this point is to be waterboarded while having to listen to Michael have sex with someone else.

Don't even get me started on Michael for letting Mya guilt him into staying with her. I'm so sick of his character in this story too. When I thought that Michael cheated on Mya in the last chapter I was starting to like him better, which is so twisted, but now he is on my shit list for being a spineless sniveling pussy yet again. DUMP THE BITCH ALREADY!

Someone really does need to tell him the truth. Enough is enough!

So in conclusion, Michael and Mya are both idiots and I hate them both for different reasons.



Author's Response:

NOOOOO COME BACK!

 

Reviewer: April Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 09, 2014 09:54 am Title: Chapter 17

That's not coming clean! Even though it is sad with what happens to mya but she crushed tegans heart just because she found someone who didn't judge her. She knew her best friend longer than any man. I still don't like that she is lying to Michael about the truth.



Author's Response:

Mya wanted to protect Tegan! But she should have said the entire truth :/

Reviewer: nellan Signed [Report This]
Date: May 09, 2014 06:16 am Title: Chapter 17

can't wait for more!!!!!!!!!!!!!



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thank youuu :)

Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 08, 2014 09:17 pm Title: Chapter 17

First you try erasing my memories with the metal penis...I mean neuralyzer..... from MIB.  Then you call out Camille? Girl, if you weren't in control over what Michael says and does in this story, you might be in trouble hehe

:D

I save my best gifs for you. What can I say? Your stories and responses inspire them!

"You" he says absentmindedly  swoon

Ugh. Mya was SO close to stating the truth, but NO, she had to spin it to make herself endearing. C'mon Michael. Open your eyes, you fool!

 



Author's Response:

I LOVE YOUR GIFS! THANK YOU FOR SAVING THE BEST FOR ME :DD

I know!! I almost wanted Tegan to answer "I want you too" and for them to make passionate love lol! I love this gif of Liz Lemon :D

Thank you for the review :D

Reviewer: Jasminelovesmichael Signed [Report This]
Date: May 08, 2014 09:13 pm Title: Chapter 17

mya only told half the truth, she need to come clean to michael and tell him that she wasnt the one talking to him online teagan was. 



Author's Response:

She did it on purpose to protect Tegan but more for Michael to pity her :/

Reviewer: LouieLlama Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 08, 2014 07:30 pm Title: Chapter 17

When in the FUCKING HELL is someone gonna tell Michael that it wasn't Mya he met on the website!?!?!? It was Tegan!!!!! And Mya be all like woe is me and shit when she basically stole Michael from Tegan!!! Get away from her, Michael!!!! She's a no good lying BITCH!!!!

Author's Response:

SOMEONE NEEDS TO TELL HIM, YOUR RIGHT!

Reviewer: SineMj Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 06, 2014 01:46 pm Title: Chapter 1

Great updates. I'm loving Marc in this story and I agree with him Camille being there was great. The way Michael handled his temptation with Camille wasn't the best, but he did fight her. So I'm somewhat satisfied with that. Now I'm curious to know if he gave into her, which I hope he didn't. I'm not happy with Mya, she was just as passive as Michael was. That is where my girl Tegan out shines. Mya spent so much time trying to teach Tegan how to be assertive but she couldn't do it herself. So far I want what Marc wants. I want Michael's attention to shift, and Mya did most of it herself, but Camille being there helped it along. As far as Michael only saying no to Camille because he was thinking of Tegan and not Mya, that is not a good thing but when you think about it. How is someone who is dense and passive like Michael going to wake up unless he starts opening his eyes and seeing Tegan for who she is? Now that he's noticing her I look at this as a step leading to him most likely waking up and seeing what he's been missing. Unfortunately Mya will probably end up hurt, so I feel bad for her in that sense but we all have consequences.



Author's Response:

Hi! Marc and Camille are great and even if they don't know everything about the situation, they give good advice. Michael and Tegan should listen to them!

Michael should have kicked Camille out of his suit and run after Mya! And Mya shouldn't be so passive, I agree. They are both wrong. Thank God Tegan has guts and said something!

That would be great if they could all be happy but one of them is going to be hurt! :/

Thank you for the review :))

Reviewer: xMOONWALKERx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 04, 2014 04:53 pm Title: Chapter 16

Did michael really sleep with crazy Cam? :( Hopefully with this he'll see that Mya is not the one for him. Now what Cam said to him about his perfect girl, my damn she was right. I did not expect that from her but I loved that she told him how it was.. Glad mike got to hear that.

I love Teg, I love how strong and classy she is. No matter her feelings for him. When she saw the situation at hand, she was still professional and did what she came to do. Love her!



Author's Response:

Camille is always right and Michael should learn to listen to her advice and try to not sleep with her lol!

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 04, 2014 12:58 pm Title: Chapter 16

Wow it just keeps getting crazier!

1) LMAO @ TJ calling Rihanna 'Romula" WTF kind of name is that? Hahahaha that's what I would name my kid if I hated her.

2) This is for Tegan in regards to TJ:

WAKE THE FUCK UP BITCH! 

wake the fuck up photo: Wake the fuck up Wakethefuckup.gif

Don't end up like Michael-on a steady diet of dog food grade beef all while a fine cut of prime rib is staring you in the face.

3) And this one is for Mya:

cry me a river photo: cry me a river cry_me_a_river.jpg

When you are a man-stealing whore, eventually another whore is going to come and steal your man. You lose them like you get them. 

5) Now onto Camille. Well she is obviously a sex addict, but in a twisted way I think she cares for Michael. Everything Camille said about Mya was the stone cold truth. Michael knows it too, which is just sad and pathetic. I get the impression that Camille won't back down until she knows she's left him in capable hands, meaning with a woman who will take good care of him, is strong and actually loves him for who he is. Or maybe I'm just hoping that's what she'll do because she has my name :)

6) Despite their rude first encounter I get the impression that Camille and Tegan will end up getting along. Because neither of them puts up with bullshit.

7) Nevertheless, I think that seeing Michael waking up in bed with Camille may be the final nail in the coffin of Tegan's feelings for him. Why would she want to keep wading through sluts to get his attention? Especially seeing as she has men lined up ready to appreciate her. I think he may have permanently blown it, or at least for a long time, and I wouldn't blame Tegan one bit. 

7) Finally, this one is for Michael:

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Author's Response:

HELLO CAMILLE :)

1), LMAOOOOO! You see, TJ is so smitten with Tegan that he couldn't even care about leaning Rihanna's name. He only wanted to see if he could get a girl in the club and practice his punch lines lol!

2) Tegan will only realize TJ exists when she'll be done with her dates lol. Trust me ;)

3) "You lose them like you get them"

4) Camille cares for Michael and she wants him to be happy.... while still giving her an orgasm when she is in town lol.

5) Who knows? ^^

6) I think every women would be disgusted if they were in Tegan's shoes. I wouldn't blame her for her crush to disappear after that!

7) He is a hot mess, indeed but I'm sure it won't last ;-)

Thank you for the revieww!

Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 04, 2014 10:09 am Title: Chapter 16

Mya - Boo hoo. She is finally getting a taste of her own medicine.

Camille - Who was your inspiration for her personality? I ask, because Sheldon

The Date: I think I snorted. The best date was with the gay guy.

Michael: Why?! I mean, is she really that good? I get that the d wants some, but she's so..... Fatal Attraction.He totally deserved that awkward awakening.

Tegan: She earns a fist bumpfor her handling of Camille.


Thank you for the longer chapter!<3



Author's Response:

LOOOOOVE YOUR GIFS LMAOO!

For the name, it's inspired by the user CamilleianPYT and for the personality... IDk LOOL! I guess I read too many fanfics with crazy exs ;)

 

Reviewer: Mooreasia14 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 04, 2014 10:03 am Title: Chapter 16

Can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

thank youuu!

Reviewer: KOP77 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 04, 2014 07:38 am Title: Chapter 16

Wow! All I can say is wow! Lol update please!!!



Author's Response:

The new chapter is here :DD

Reviewer: Jasminelovesmichael Signed [Report This]
Date: May 03, 2014 11:33 pm Title: Chapter 16

wow! this story is getting better and better. update soon :)



Author's Response:

Thank youvery much :) The new chapter is online ;D

Reviewer: neece Signed [Report This]
Date: May 03, 2014 11:20 pm Title: Chapter 16

Oh Michael, he doesn't deserve Tegan after the way he's been acting with Mya and Camille. Tegan doesn't need that in her life.

I was so happy when Tegan called out Camille!!!!!!! Tegan didn't let that crazy bitch get to her. Makes me love Tegan more and more.

Poor Tegan, she can never find the right dude, if only she wasn't so blind to TJ making moves on her. But what TJ did at the club, was kinda fucked up. He didn't have to be a asshole to Ri Ri.

Great Chapter Annie, can't wait for the next one. 



Author's Response:

You're right, Tegan needs someone who thinks with his head and cares about personality more than he cares about looks! Tegan is strong, just the way she handled Camille shows it!

LOOL, TJ was just trying to see if the way he hits on girl is problematic or not! Seems like Tegan just don't get it lool!

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