I'm still stunned you updated twice in such a short time...then I wake up and am all A present for me, before work?! What a great way to start the day!

I vote Tegan pulls out of her promise to Moira. She was asked last last minute and she deserves more warning. It isn't like her life revolves around Moira's...Moira's certainly doesn't revolve around Tegan's! Michael gives her opinion/thoughts higher priority and even when he was with Mya, showed her special consideration. Plus, his head was on her shoulder and hands on her hips. That trumps blood, right?! ---> ?uestlove agrees, and we know he is picky

I get that Camille and her big boobs are trying to help, but she has a history of doing the opposite. I don't trust her. It's too big of a personality change, to quick. If this were reality, the change would be unlikely to stick around.

On another note: things are starting to come together and I'm

*crosses fingers for another amazing chapter, soon*

Please, continue! I can't wait to read what he's gonna "plan" for all the week end :)

I'm dying for the next part!!!!!

Michael please, do something, quick!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This story is so incredible. Please continue and update real soon. I'm in love woth this story and I hope Tegan and Mike get together. FAST! Sorry TJ but I don't want you with Tegan. Lol

"You're the one, damn."

I'm standing off to the side slow-clapping at Michael. It only took him 21 chapters to figure it out! Extra gold stars for him today. 

Now it's Tegan's turn to be oblivious. Michael is a sexual harrassment lawsuit waiting to happen. Touching her thigh, making her listen to Break of Dawn, erotically licking a spoon then offering it to her......he could not be more obvious. Lmao! Next he's going to pull out his penis and ask her to suck it and she still won't get it.

That man is a hot ass mess.

I still think she should date TJ and make Michael squirm for a good long while. He needs to work for it. Plus TJ is sexy.

Hmph. le sigh. Okay, I'll deal w/TJ and Camille. I suppose the Kim Kardashian thing has me biased against TJ. Even in the land of fan fiction lol. I'll deal as long as there is some MJ/Tegan action. With an Annie-spin, of course :D

Holy hallway (?) scene! That ish was so awkward, I swore I saw Jay Z come out of his studio only to

“Hi” she clears her throat “Lunch” she says putting the bad on the table “Bye”

Freudian slip?

And for the MJ/Tegan scene? <-- hmm. Not sure if that'll make you want to write more of those scenes or not. Hope so!

I think you need to reread it.  YOu might have included some parts in there twice its kinda mixed up...

Glad that Camille spilled ALL the beans to Michael, he needed to know. I'm interested to see what he's going to do now. All the other reviews are like "he should run after her." Um, how about no? I would be surprised at this point if he talked to Tegan about it. I mean, what's he supposed to say "Sorry I was too busy buried inside Mya's vagina to notice you?"  There really is nothing to say as far as I'm concerned. If I were Tegan I would be done with him. Well, at least that's what I would tell myself.....I'm sure her feelings won't just go away. But I know she is too proud to just go jumping into Michael's arms at this point, nor should she. They need to start over again from scratch.

I'm curious to see if Tegan takes Marc's advice and tells Michael the truth. I think she should, they need to talk about it, but I still think she should date TJ. At least give him a chance. Camille is right, Michael blew it. I feel bad for him because he was lied to, but this is what he needed in order to learn to raise his standards and actually take the time to get to know a woman before hopping into bed with her. If he'd taken it slower with Mya and focused more on her personality, none of this would have happened.

God I really hope he doesn't rent out Debbie's uterus to have his kids. I cringed when I read that part. I mean no disrespect to his actual children, who seem lovely, but I think it's really sad that he had to do that in real life. I would hate to see him have to do it in FF too! I read these things so I can see him get the happy ending he deserved but was denied in his life.