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Reviewer: Lovely One Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 18, 2014 02:06 am Title: Chapter 33

Oh My God. Tegan I love you girl, but if the man you're obviously still inlove with is rubbing his crotch on your girl friend's behind doesn't even make you frown, I'm at a loss with you lol I'm glad you sort of came to your senses a bit after. 

OMG Michael's jealous little behind is beyond adorable! I bet it's gonna go up a few notches once TJ arrives tho, Michael best be ready to bite that tongue HARD lmao



Author's Response:

LOOOOL! Tegan is jealous over a man who isn't his. How bad it is :((

I cant' wait to see how Michael react once TJ gets here. Thank you for the review Lovely One :D

Reviewer: nene147 Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 17, 2014 11:46 pm Title: Chapter 33

"He didn’t choose this state for TJ to show up unexpectedly.Darn it!" Omg lmaoooo I can't with Michael he is so adorable. "Not with my tiger" OMG I can't with him and his jealousy it's beyond cute. And of course michael is goin to forever have blue balls. Yeah!!! Nothin new lmaoo 



Author's Response:

Michael loves him some Tiger lool :)

Reviewer: MJSWIFEY Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 17, 2014 10:44 pm Title: Chapter 33

Ohhhh come on Tegan wake up girl. If you say so you can have that beautiful man. Please update ASAP



Author's Response:

But she doesn't know who she wants :'( She is confused as hell ;(

Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 17, 2014 08:02 pm Title: Chapter 33

Ok. I have it worked out. TJ needs to come back, become immediately distracted by Kishaya. Then Michael needs to quickly wine and dine Tegan....because it is chapter 33 and I want them together now. lol.

On a more serious note, I love the maturity and patience Michael is demonstrating. Sadly, I lack said maturity and patience.



Author's Response:

LOOOOOOOL! TJ is crazy about Tegan so I doubt he is going to be attracted to an ass who doesn't belond to Tegan loool. But you're right, Michael needs to wine and dine Tegan sometimes... Maybe not now ^^

Well, you're going to need some patience since I update this story once a month loool. I gotta do better! Thank you for the review and the rate Redone! I really appreaciate it! Love you <333

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 17, 2014 06:57 pm Title: Chapter 33

Tegan.. Girl bye. I am over her meekness, insecurity, and obliviousness. She's like a 12 year old with this mess. It's time to step up and step OUT. There is no reason why she should be as attractive and smart as she is, and not have some confidence in herself. All I could do was roll my eyes and shake my head as she was speaking about Kishaya'a confidence and how she wish she could have a little bit of it. Bish boo bye, you CAN! It starts with you. You need to be like Rihanna and walk up in this bitch like you own a HEAUX! For real. I am so ready for Marc to give her a damm makeover, and I want her stop acting like a scared ass church mouse. She's getting on my damn nerves. All these fine men around and you wanna be oblivious and then get caught drooling or staring. Girl bye. If she had the confidence she was supposed to have, no way in hell would the thought of Kishaya and Michael even cross her mind or make her feel some kinda way. Luckily Kishaya don't want Michael, but still. Tegan makes it too damn easy for people to just walk all over her. It's annoying as hell. She's passive with every damm thing and it's really wearing me thin. Now TJ's tiger stripe eyebrow having ass is about to come see her and I'm sure she's just gonna grin and bear it like Everything is cool. Idris Hunter is FINE! If Tegan wasn't such a punk, she could be flirting with him for the hell of it, just because she can. But NOPE. Too much of a punk. She needs confidence, a new wardrobe, the whole nine NOW. Michael needs to realize he ain't the only one to have folks swoon. Tegan can have the same effect on people too. She needs to stop viewing herself as second rate! Enough dammit! 



Author's Response:

LMAOOOO! Everybody is telling Tegan to put her big girl panties on and be confident, let's hope she will finally understand and make it happen! GIRLLL, You know this is my favorite Rihanna song lol. This is exactly what Tegans needs to do. Walk like you won it, Mariah Carey style in 'It's Like That'. Dem chicken is ash and she's lotion. Maybe it will get better once Marc dresses her like the 27 years old woman she is! I'm pretty sure clothes can make a difference!

"Now TJ's tiger stripe eyebrow having ass is about to come see her and I'm sure she's just gonna grin and bear it like Everything is cool"

WHY WOULD YOU SAY THAT

http://media.tumblr.com/03bef24672b7ea2934304558e1906c1e/tumblr_inline_mos0y1EgmB1qz4rgp.gif

I am so done! Leave TJ and his eyebrows alone LMAOOOOO

Yas! Idris is fine! Too bad he wants Kishaya! But Tegan should flirt with him anyways just because she can lol!

Thank you for the review and the laugh LOOOL! Love you girl <3

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 14, 2014 03:45 pm Title: Chapter 32

Michael waiting outside her door was adorable. He needs to stay in this track and show her he cares. Tegan is damaged from her past and afraid of being hurt. After Mya I can see why she doesn't take him seriously. 

Can't wait to see the drama with TJ and with Mya. Mya's comeuppance is long overdue.



Author's Response:

IKR! He really cares about her and he wants her to know it :)

LOOOL, don't worry. I'm starting to have more ideas about Mya ;-)

Reviewer: Lovely One Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 13, 2014 04:28 pm Title: Chapter 32

his story is so amazing, cannot wait for moaar!


LMAO at Michael apologizing profusely for misinterpreting the girls little 'fight' only to shout it through a megaphone 2 min later xD


and AAAAWWW! Cannot believe he waited outside her room all night to see if she's ok <3 This is what you need to be doing Michael, don't push her but she needs to know the depth of your feelings. And if you even think about hooking up with Kishaya so help me God... *squints eyes*


I sorta feel Tegan needs to remind herself of her wrongdoings too tho... I get that she's hurt by Michael's dumb ass being so LUDICROUSLY NAIVE throughout the whole Mya thing, but I can understand clinging on to what you feel might be your last shot at love. He was in love with the girl online. He knew her face .. or so he thought. Of course he'd be taken by seeing her in real life and I can't even blame him for trying to work things out with Mya for so long. Especially since he started having feelings for Tegan way before he found out the truth. He's always been completely truthful which I can't say about Tegan. Then again she was hurt, and was keeping quiet to give them a shot at happiness. Wether it was out of the kindness of her heart or her fear of loving Michael - or any man for that matter - it matters very little now. She is right to want hapiness herself, and I would have gone for TJ too had I been in her shoes. BUT. Willing yourself into loving someone will never last and we all know she needs not look far to see how such a relationship ends.


Sigh. I can almost see Michael breaking down whilst grazing his fingertips of those scars she hides so well.


I AM HOOKED. 



Author's Response:

Hello Lovely One! Thank you so much for the lovely review and the rate! It's so nice :))

Michael is adorable! And you're right, Tegan shouldn't forget that she is part of the reason why they are in this situation!

The new chapter is here, enjoy :)

Reviewer: 4theloveofMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 11, 2014 08:46 pm Title: Chapter 32

Too cute! Can't wait to see how Tegan will explain this to Kishaya! 



Author's Response:

LOOOL! I'm eager to know too ;)

Reviewer: nene147 Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 11, 2014 10:26 am Title: Chapter 32

OMG I laughed out loud! He charged over to that girl lmaoo put everything on pause. It's soooo adorable. And he cupped her face and kissed her face? He is beyond cute omg!! Kishaya was sooo starstruck and I knew she was not gunna let go that Michael kissed "tiger" I can't with them! Too cute for me lls



Author's Response:

LMAO! He is adorable! Nobody is allowed to touch his Tiger! the new chapter is here ;)

Reviewer: MommaE Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 11, 2014 09:49 am Title: Chapter 32

Update soon



Author's Response:

The new chapter is here.

Reviewer: KekeJackson Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 11, 2014 12:30 am Title: Chapter 32

hahahahahahahhahahahshhHahahahahhahahah oh my gosh I so saw that coming  when she started doing that. Michael does not take tiger harm lightly at all!!



Author's Response:

Yes lmaooo! Thank you for the review ;)

Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 10, 2014 10:24 pm Title: Chapter 32

Yessss this story is back in action! It's my favorite :)

I'm glad she made Michael wait and I love how he is being so sweet and romantic with her. The big question is how will it go over with the wedding and when they are around TJ?

 



Author's Response:

Hello Redone ;) I'm glad I found time to write another chapter of this story too! Michael is showing her he cares and deserving of her love. But she is still with TJ... She needs to make a choice a now and she'll lose both. Thank you for the review and the rate :)

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 10, 2014 07:32 pm Title: Chapter 32

Lmao well at least we know Michael's dumb ass has learned his lesson to not mess with any of Tegan's friends. Safe to say he won't be hittin on her or trying to date her. all I will say is, Tegan needs to stop being so mesmerized by him. Or shit at least play it off. Don't let him know he has an effect on you. Shit if anything, she should have an effect on him! Tegan makes her self so obvious sometimes. Michael still needs to work a LOT for her, so she doesn't need to do anything to make it easy for him. He's aware of the effect he has on her and I don't like that. Tegan needs to have a lil mystique going on. Keep him on his toes. And lmao at Marc saying their first child should be named Marc. A mess!!! 



Author's Response:

Hey girl ;) LMAOO! Michael knows better! And you're right, Tegan needs to stop acting like this, she needs to let Michael work for it!

Marc has enough of them and he wants them to get together and have their baby Marc already lol ;)

Thank you for the review :$

Reviewer: MJSWIFEY Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 27, 2014 01:29 am Title: Chapter 31

Oh hell yes. Say "yes!" Michael. Wow. Michael without his shirt on, her touching his body with oil? OOoh too much. Someones temperature is gonna rise bigtime.I don't know who's gonna enjoy this more. Michael or Tegan. I would go mad if I had him infront of me, maybe forget where I am and start  kissing his back while I'm at it. Please Update ASAP!!



Author's Response:

I know! They are going to make fire loool!

" I would go mad if I had him infront of me, maybe forget where I am and start  kissing his back while I'm at it"

Reviewer: xMOONWALKERx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 22, 2014 12:31 am Title: Chapter 31

No it is not too much. He should say yesssss!!!! 



Author's Response:

Me too lool! Thank you for the review :D

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