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Reviewer: KOP77 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 25, 2015 08:51 pm Title: Chapter 42

I'm most likely in the minority here and I do agree that Michael has some fault in what happened but so does Tegan, and of course Mya as well, but seeing that she's mostly likely not in the picture in anymore she doesn't matter. 

Now I get Michael did hurt her by sticking with Mya and all, but she was the one do pull a catfish like scenario on mike to begin with. And Mya... Well she took advantage of that and didn't come clean. 

I don't really see how Michael could know right away because neither of them told him. You see a picture of someone and that someone actually turns out to be real, I'm pretty sure you assume that the person you see with the same face on her profile is the person you're talking too. In total, mike was deceived. 

Now I'm not trying to paint mike as the innocent victim here cause he does have his ow issues and all, but really it was Tegans mistake that started the most of this giant cluster f@ck. 



Author's Response:

I think most of my readers agree that Michael has some fault but he is not the only one to be blamed. They wouldn't be in this situation if they all had been honest. But what is done, is done!

The new chapter is online, enjoy :)

Reviewer: 4theloveofMJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 25, 2015 08:25 am Title: Chapter 42

Hmm...I wonder if TJ's marriage proposal will wake up the "Tiger" in Tegan! lol! Love this story! 



Author's Response:

LOOOOL, maybe it will ;)

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 24, 2015 02:39 pm Title: Chapter 42

Yassssssss! Finally Tegan, yassss bitch yassss! About time she stood up for herself and told Michael what he NEEDS to hear and not wanna know or hear. I sincerely hope he takes heed to every damn word she said because it was the complete and honest truth. He's not in a position to question her, her decisions and damn sure not demand ultimatums! Tegan is entitled to still not be over that Mya shit cuz it was trifling. I still wanna cut that bitch smh. Anyway, I'm really happy Tegan is standing up for herself. She's been too damn timid for too damn long. Michael needs to sit and really think about what she said. How he is a spoiled brat and used to getting what he wants simply because of who he is. That surrogate shit should really hit home for his ass. And I hope Tegan and TJ do get engaged, to further stab Michael in the heart. He needs to truly GET IT! Because if it wasn't clear before, it damn sure needs to be now. Michael is NOT deserving of her, at least not yet. Nope. 



Author's Response:

Hey girl! LMAOO, I swear to God I read your 'Yas bitch yas' with SOulja Boy's voice in my head!

I hope Michael takes a look at the man in the mirror and ask him to make a change (see what I did there). Hopefully, he'll understand and be more mature thanks to this.

The new chapter is (finally) here, enjoy :))

Reviewer: nene147 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 24, 2015 01:51 pm Title: Chapter 42

And another review! Yo! Tj gettin a little too cocky about him and Tegan. Tegan can fuss at Michael all she wants but the feelings she has for him...you just can't brush that under the rug. Tegan trying to brush it under the rug. She's going to explode one day. Michael needs to stop acting young too! Gettin on my damn nerves lmao



Author's Response:

LOOOOL, The two of them need to work their ass off for Tegan. But I guess TJ is ahead since Tegan chose him :o

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 24, 2015 08:31 am Title: Chapter 42

Finally, FINALLY Tegan grew a spine. Girl this moment was like 20 chapters overdue. I'm proud of her! I hope she never goes back to her doormat ways. 

Moira, gtfo.

Michael also needed to be told. She should have done it a long time ago. You can't claim you love someone and then have a backup on speeddial for when the woman you "love" won't accept your ultimatums. And giving Tegan a poster of yourself as a gift?  Grow the fuck up man. 

I'm actually happy with this outcome because honestly,Michael really had not done anything this whole story to deserve her. Its bittersweet though because they could have had something great. So close yet so far......



Author's Response:

LMAO, sorry! But better late than never, right?

Michael has some serious lessons to learn if he wants a woman like Tegan. She is standing up for herself she won't be with a man who doesn't appreciate her for who she is. Michael better get his life!

Bittersweet but it's not the end of the story yet :)) (That would have been a beeautiful ending tho lmao)

Reviewer: nene147 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 24, 2015 06:56 am Title: Chapter 42

I'm very very proud of Tegan!!! She's finally growing up! To the confrontations to her sister! Her sister had some damn nerve! Tegan did her damn wedding! She didn't even say thank you! Spoke up to her boss! And Michael! Michael has to learn it's not all about him. He can't have everything he wants. He says he wants her but he got Debbie on the line. It doesn't work like that. You can't be having Tegan and your baby mama too. He trippin..hard! TJ cool he cares for what Tegan wants...but of course I wanna see her with Michael. Glitter glove needs to grow up. He talks about age difference but he's acting younger than her! Girl I can't! Lmaoo I like smashed cup scene 

I'm waiting for love struck, heart spoken Michael's POV lmao

<33333



Author's Response:

Hey Nene! I'm proud of Tegan for standing up for herself. It's about time! You're right about Michael, the world doesn't revolve around him and hopefully he realizes it.

Thank you for your review Nene <333333333333333

Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 24, 2015 06:14 am Title: Chapter 42

Your intro? gaga

Is it wrong that I want to slap TJ? He knows how his gf feels for MJ, but he's fine with it? Ugh. Being proud of being second string is not the way to enter a relationship. Don't try to force a girl to love you *most*

Same goes for Moira. Holy ego and self-centeredness. She could've left to get her tickets. SMFH.

This is selfish Michael, you are acting like a spoiled child who throws a temper tantrum when he doesn’t get what he wants”

I'm cracking up. Damn straight! And that analogy with the mug? perfection

LOL. I need to tease about the typos? Hmmm. Naw. I don't do it on command :P

jdfas; You and these damn cliffhangers. I need to know what happens!



Author's Response:

LMAO! You know how I am with the typos :/ TJ probably thinks that the better she gets to know him, the harder she will fall in love with him. Can't blame him for trying!

Moira deserved it! I wish Tegan would have have checked her attitude earlier. But happy to see that Tegan decided to not be used anymore!

Than you <333 and I totally saw that on Tumblr and it made sense for this story lol.

The new chapter is here enjoy ;)

Reviewer: MJSWIFEY Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 24, 2015 04:28 am Title: Chapter 42

Oh damn. I hate where this story went. Sorry but after so long, fighting against everything and everyone and they still aren't gonna be together? Very sad. :'(



Author's Response:

It's not the end of the story yet.

Reviewer: xMOONWALKERx Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 23, 2015 11:14 pm Title: Chapter 42

I'm so fucking heart broken right now. I can't even. So no Michael and Tiger :'( okay

It's what I wanted and asked for..... But it hurts lol



Author's Response:

Maybe it will get better? You have to keep reading to see :)

Reviewer: nellan Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 10, 2015 03:39 am Title: Chapter 41

Where are you, girl!

Would LOVE to read an update! I'm dying to read the next part since you wrote this new one with TJ demanding to Michael to quit and let them be...

I can't even think about Michael accept the deal. He's in love with her and he should tell her again. She's not sure also about her choice...

This is something she will regret.

And I would love to read Michael and "Tiger" live together a little bit...I' llbe waiting for thess hot love scenes together. They're in love!!!! NO...?



Author's Response:

I'm here, the new chapter is online :)

Reviewer: nellan Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 12, 2015 01:08 am Title: Chapter 41

Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!! I'm dying here, please!!

come back as soon as you can! don't give up on this story!!!



Author's Response:

I'm not giving up lool

Reviewer: 4theloveofMJ Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 11, 2015 09:24 pm Title: Chapter 41

I think Tegan just heard a halfass story from TJ concerning Michael. Of course TJ is going to paint the worst possible picture of MJ to steer Tegan's decision in his direction. I hope she's woman enough to at least hear Michael out concerning his situations with LMP and Debbie Rowe. I have faith in you Tegan! Don't fall for TJ's okie doke!!!! You're smarter than that!  UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! Please! LOL



Author's Response:

Okie doke loool

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 11, 2015 09:05 pm Title: Chapter 41

Lawd JESUS I am so... I don't even have words!!! What in the hell just haopened?! First off, why the fuck didn't Tegan tell that raggedy bitch Mya where to get off?! Newsflash ho: Michael NEVER loved her!!! She was an easy piece of ass attached to a nice looking outer shell, that's all. She had absolutely nothing to offer and clearly the pussy was whack because he dropped her ass with no fight at all. I really wanted Tegan to go in on this bitch but she didn't. But that's ok.. Cuz karma is still gonna kick her ass and the loss of Tegan's respect and friendship is gonna eat her ass alive for the rest of her life. Next, I am so glad that Tegan told TJ the truth, but I'm not liking the fact that TJ answered the phone. Tegan needs to deliver her message to Michael HERSELF. It needs to come from her. This is so crazy... Debbie is calling and I really hope Michael does not impregnate her. But because he's so fucking selfish and spoiled, I wouldn't be surprised. He needs to know that giving Tegan an ultimatum is what is gonna keep her in TJ's arms. He is NOWHERE in a position where he had the right to make any demands considering he's been on the wrong side of right damn near this entire story. SMH. Tegan finally is tryna grow some balls but to be frank, they're not big enough! She's still running from MICHAEL and really telling him what the hell needs to be said. I'm sick of the crying, the son stories, all of it. I'm pissed she didn't lay into mya the way she should have and im pissed that she didn't talk to MICHAEL herself as well. She still needs to lay into him over that bullshit with her ex friend as well as everything she's been feeling and what she now knows about his attitude and spoiledness. This is just too much chile.. Lol smh. I can't. I simply can't. 



Author's Response:

Hey girl :) Oww, you know Tegan. She is too nice and never want to hurt people too bad. She probably wanted to slap Mya into oblivion but chose the classy way, I guess.

It was about time Tegan told TJ the truth! That would have been bad if he heard it from someone else. And she needs to confronts Michael. Let's hope her balls are big enough when it happens lol :)

Thank you for your review, the new chapter is (finally) here. I can't promise I will update more often but I'll do my best :)

Reviewer: MJSWIFEY Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 11, 2015 08:38 pm Title: Chapter 1

@redone: I so hope your right, hopefully she left in a hurry and  forgot her phone. 



Author's Response:

Maybe yes... Maybe no ^^

Reviewer: Redone Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 11, 2015 08:22 pm Title: Chapter 41

yaas^ when I see this story pop up as updated.

Finally Tegan stands up to Mya. I laughed at Mya being too narcissistic to even look at her own actions without someone having to hold up a damn mirror. Yet Mya still tries to play the victim. SMH. Complaining about how Tegan made her feel inferior? Fine, feel inferior, but why try to purposefully hurt a friend because of that feeling? Friends don't do that shit.

I don't trust TJ. Hmm. I'm running through scenarios in my head. My hypothesis: she left her phone in her rush and TJ drank to get rid of his problems.

jdfksa; I love how this story avoids so many cliches. <3



Author's Response:

LOOOL! I love me some Neil Patrick Harris :D

LMAO, Mya is never going to get it. It's never her fault :/

Let's see if you were right or not, the new chapter is online :))

Thank you for all your sweet compliments <3 And everytime I see your name on the comment section, I can help but sings "Redone" just like Lady Gaga did back in the days lmao :)

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