[Report This]Date: Apr 22, 2014 08:53 am Title: Invincible's day: Break of Dawn
Hey there. I really like this story. I couldnt handle being around all those Michaels. Especially bad and thriller. Im surprised she contained herself around them. To me they seem like gentlemen. They only wanted kisses and bad even fought for her. Im team bad all the way. How old did you day she was?
Author's Response:
Thank you and 16
Date: Apr 21, 2014 08:08 pm Title: Invincible's day: Break of Dawn
Oh god. When history finds out about this, more shit will go down! Lovely chapter tho
[Report This]Date: Apr 21, 2014 07:08 pm Title: Invincible's day: Break of Dawn
Holy shit that was sexy! ;)
I wonder what his warning about Dangerous meant though...
[Report This]Date: Apr 21, 2014 06:54 pm Title: MJ's day part 4 & Invincible's day: Nightmare
Aww, poor Jen! Wtf with the nightmare...no more horror movies, J! LOL
[Report This]Date: Apr 21, 2014 04:52 pm Title: Invincible's day: Break of Dawn
oh no...she is jumping from one mj to another lol she starting trouble!!!
Date: Apr 21, 2014 04:50 pm Title: Invincible's day: Break of Dawn
Why am I jealous of a fictional character?.....smh
[Report This]Date: Apr 21, 2014 04:19 pm Title: Invincible's day: Break of Dawn
How in the hell can you say you're not good at sex scenes??? I'M not, YOU are!
You add some funny things in-between the scene, which makes it even better!
LOVIN' IT, and sooo sorry I missed a few updates! :DDD
Author's Response:
Compared to some of the authors on here. I don't consider myself good... And its totally fine!
Date: Apr 21, 2014 04:05 pm Title: Invincible's day: Break of Dawn
Yeah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Round 2!!!!!!!!!
Love Invincible era, girl! That's so hot!
Author's Response:
I told ya I had this all typed up!!! Edited it the best I can. I'm extremely lazy!!!
Date: Apr 21, 2014 03:10 pm Title: MJ's day part 4 & Invincible's day: Nightmare
Excellent!!!!! But I would love a sex scene with invincible...Oups! I said it!!
Author's Response:
Actually I already typed up a scene. And guess what its gonna be in the next chapter. Your wish was granted!!
Date: Apr 21, 2014 07:30 am Title: MJ's day part 3: Brotherly Love
can't wait!
[Report This]Date: Apr 21, 2014 07:00 am Title: MJ's day part 3: Brotherly Love
Brotherly Loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:):)))):):):):)):):)):):)
[Report This]Date: Apr 21, 2014 06:36 am Title: MJ's day part 3: Brotherly Love
The truth, huh? I hope Jen doesn't plan on kidding herself into still believing that they have a brother/sister relationship after that! Nu uh, girl. You got the hots for him, too! And so does he. ;)
Date: Apr 17, 2014 06:03 pm Title: Surprise!
Aww, yeah, I know a few. Oh, well....we can't ALL be awesome, eh? ;)
Author's Response:
Lol, right!
[Report This]Date: Apr 17, 2014 04:56 pm Title: MJ's day part 2: Cameron Thompson
Mia better cut that shit out real quick! I hope she takes her ass home and does some research. The fuck is that shit?! In case my annoyance with this girl is not clear...
Author's Response:
She is based on one of my, um, acquaintances that doesn't like MJ, so yeah that's where she came from!
[Report This]Date: Apr 17, 2014 04:14 pm Title: MJ's day part 2: Cameron Thompson
Damnn!!
TELL HER OFF, MJ! Do it like a boss :D
Mia's bein' a hater 3:| She's getting on my fuckin' nerves about that...
But she is just gon' have to-
But AWESOME chapter! Sorry I missed a few :3