Date: Apr 02, 2014 12:15 pm Title: Chapter 2: The First Rehearsal
Gawd you're writing is superb literally. I wasted my whole morning reading this story and I'm going back through all these chapters and commenting. Shit this is a good ass story.
Author's Response:
Awww thanks so much for the compliments!!! ^_^ I'm glad that you're enjoying it to the point that it calls you back. I love when stories do that for me, so you saying that really means a lot... <3
Date: Apr 02, 2014 12:14 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Audition
Why is it that I'm just now reading this?
Date: Apr 02, 2014 10:34 am Title: Chapter 12: Cruel Intentions
Joe is stunning, regal, everything! Gorgeous!!! I see why Eden's plain Jane, white bread ass is pressed. She is so fucking tired. She needs to find a damn life instead of trying to meddle in Joe's. She thinks creating drama with some psychopath bitch is gonna run Michael away from her? WRONG! And even more so, think it's gonna run him away from her and back to her wack ass? HELLA WRONG! If push comes to shove, Joe may need to beat that bitches ass. Face it, Mike doesn't want you ho. There are literally a million hers but only one Joe. There is nothing special about Eden and on top of that she's a bitch too? Nah son. I hope Michael sticks by Joe's side through whatever bullshit Eden is tryna kick start and I hope it backfires in her face. If anything, I hope it'll bring Mike and Joe even closer together. And gets Eden's punk ass fired. Pale, plain Jane bitch.
Date: Apr 02, 2014 04:32 am Title: Chapter 12: Cruel Intentions
well, I didn't expect another chapter BUT I'm really glad that you're finally update!
Thanks a lot! we all busy!
[Report This]Date: Jan 17, 2014 10:27 am Title: Chapter 11: Memory Lane
Oh wow what a hot chapter. I loved it. Cant wait to see what is next for these two
Date: Jan 17, 2014 09:26 am Title: Chapter 11: Memory Lane
OMG!! He had the speaker on?! Lmaooooo!!! That is hilarious!!! I love it. Him and Joe are definitely getting closer. They have a great connection and it's authentic. Her story about her father was so sad. She's a strong woman. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Date: Jan 17, 2014 08:36 am Title: Chapter 11: Memory Lane
That's soooooo embarassing..! God, she heard him!!!!!!!
Nice update girl!
Please, keep going!
Date: Jan 17, 2014 07:38 am Title: Chapter 11: Memory Lane
other people caught on and decided as revenge to fake relationships that never happened between joe and whomever else. to get joe into trouble i think.
Date: Jan 17, 2014 07:36 am Title: Chapter 11: Memory Lane
mj never told joe or gave joe permission to talk about there relatiosnhip. so she decided not to. thats why she doesnt. mj i dont think understands that. or didnt understand it. joe isnt ashamed but respects mjs privacy. so anytime anyone ever asks her she flat out denies it. but what that did though is make others fake shit. to make it look like joe is some slut.
[Report This]Date: Jan 17, 2014 05:57 am Title: Chapter 10: Zookeeper
I loved this chaper. So nice to see them bonding over similar interests.
One thing I have to say is that you need to separate the descrpitive content from the dialogue. Having it all together in long paragraphs does make it hard to read clearly
[Report This]Date: Jan 17, 2014 04:08 am Title: Chapter 9: "Love, Bonehead"
Wow they kissed. Thats a big twist to the story. I sure hope they dont avoid each other for long and his not was really sweet
[Report This]Date: Jan 17, 2014 03:56 am Title: Chapter 8: Explain Yourself
Aww Michael was lonely but at the same time he should be looking for love and not a fling. I sure hope he an Joe get together
[Report This]Date: Jan 17, 2014 03:51 am Title: Chapter 7: Poisoning the Well
Eden should back off and leave Michael alone but something tells me she will turn her attention to Joe.
Date: Jan 16, 2014 01:25 am Title: Chapter 10: Zookeeper
Oh My!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Michael seems to have difficulties to handle himself when he's near her...Love it!
Please, keep going. I wnat to read the next parts ....
Did I tell you that I was addictec to your story!! I love to read it until the end of it!!
Please, come back as soon as you can!
Date: Jan 15, 2014 08:07 pm Title: Chapter 10: Zookeeper
I think this is where I left off on MJEOL! Can't wait to see what happens next. Joe is completely gorgeous. Michael better do right by her and leave Eden's wack ass alone.