Date: Apr 04, 2014 11:56 pm Title: Chapter 14: Who Knew?
Damn I knew the sex would be FIRE!!!! Joe is gorgeous and Michael is definitely falling for her. They make a really good couple. I love it.
Date: Apr 04, 2014 04:26 pm Title: Chapter 14: Who Knew?
This chapter was magnificent. I loved it. Update soon.
Date: Apr 04, 2014 03:54 pm Title: Chapter 14: Who Knew?
That was absolutely beautiful.
[Report This]Date: Apr 03, 2014 05:17 am Title: Chapter 12: Cruel Intentions
I just read everything today and Lord knows I cant wait til Mike and Joe are official and Eden is put in her place! Love it so far and I cant wait for more!
Date: Apr 02, 2014 12:42 pm Title: Chapter 12: Cruel Intentions
I just wanna punch Eden in her pretty little face. Seriously. What reason does she have to even hate on Joe so much. I her haterade doesn't even have a solid rational foundation. Golly I hate punk ass bitches like her.
Note to Author:
Hey I think I love you. If I can judge you at all by your work, you're the most bomb ass person ever. This is by far the most captivating most intriguing story I've read in a LONG while. I hope you don't mind that I just threw my two cents into every chapter. But I don't understand how you don't have more comments or more reads. This story is a GREAT read. I literally could not put down my phone. My moms probably gonna beat the shit out of me for not doing anything around the house, I was so deeply immersed in this story. At every turn I was hooting and hollering, I'm pretty sure I even cried at that part about her dad. Poor girl.
You have a new #1 fan. I love this. And I love you ;) please update soon.
XOXO - Kunda
Author's Response:
Awww preciousness!!! lol <3 Thank you so so much again for all of the compliments. I'm glad that you're enjoying it, and I'll try to keep things interesting lol. ^_^
Date: Apr 02, 2014 12:33 pm Title: Chapter 11: Memory Lane
O.O *clears throat* I'm gonna go and uh, I'm gonna and take a quick cold shower. Thanks,
Date: Apr 02, 2014 12:32 pm Title: Chapter 10: Zookeeper
No he didn't. This beautiful nigga did not just jerk off to her voice. Watch I bet he didn't even really mute hisself bwahhahaha
Date: Apr 02, 2014 12:31 pm Title: Chapter 9: "Love, Bonehead"
I loved that tidbit in this chapter about Diana and how he longed for her. It was very insightful into his past. And I love how you make his relationships and way that he relates to women so true to the character or at least the portrayed character that MJ gave us of himself.
XO
Date: Apr 02, 2014 12:31 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Audition
This is phenomenal. I'm angry that I'm just now reading it. Keep up the good work you got yourself a new reader. (;
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!!! I'm trying my best to give you all something good.... <3
Date: Apr 02, 2014 12:26 pm Title: Chapter 8: Explain Yourself
Jesus LAWD. Joe is a girl after my own heart. She's so sweet and thoughtful and considerate and all sorts of good stuff. I've read plenty of stories where the heroine is so full of shit ya know. And they just overdramatize a bit so complicated situation. I love this girl and how she approaches things so sober minded. And she don't be playing no games. That's my shit. I love it.
Date: Apr 02, 2014 12:24 pm Title: Chapter 7: Poisoning the Well
Oh God, I'm on pins and needles. I like how rational Joe is. How she thinks things through so well and doesn't let a moment completely possess her.
Date: Apr 02, 2014 12:23 pm Title: Chapter 6: A Tense Encounter
And this trank ass ho WOULD ruin a perfectly good moment.
Date: Apr 02, 2014 12:22 pm Title: Chapter 5: The Truth Revealed
Show?!?!
SHOW?!?!?
SHOW?!?!
I see you Michael. Gone witcha bad self. Asking her to "show you" ;D
Date: Apr 02, 2014 12:19 pm Title: Chapter 4: New York
This chapter was sooooo sexy. *fans myself* him savoring that pineapple in his mouth was sooo hawt. Wow. And te tension! WAOOOAW :D you sure know how to make a Sven atmospheric. Their relationship is going to be mind blowing I can just feel it.
Date: Apr 02, 2014 12:17 pm Title: Chapter 3: Getting Under Way
Firstly, let mme just say I love how perfectly defined all your characters are. Michael seems so true to the real MJ and he just flows so well. I liked how he was so easily captured by Joes genuine openness towards him.