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Reviewer: purebutterflies Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 25, 2016 05:45 pm Title: Chapter 75

They need counseling. This is a very traumatic experience for them they both are feeling this difficult tumultuous pain so they should definitely because maybe that could help them get back on track to where they used to be. This was a really great chapter it was sad though the song part had me in tears.



Author's Response:

Counseling may be a good idea. They definitely need something to help them feel the void in there relationship. The song was a little heartbreaking but that's how Michael expresses himself the best. Thanks for the awesome feedback, as always.

Reviewer: Lorry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 25, 2016 02:09 pm Title: Chapter 75

awww the feels when mj sang out 'Gone too Soon' is it going to be on the album later on in the dangerous era? they both need a little push to stop this weird wall thats resurfaced between them which is really sad poor things something has to be done i knew someone of her family or bestie would come out to support her as they all do lol. still waiting for this milestone in their lives to go on i want the cuteness to return! you better update soon i have my eye on you missy lol >.>~



Author's Response:

Lol thanks Lorry! There will be much more to come. And as far as Gone Too Soon being on his dangerous album, we'll see ;)

Reviewer: fletcher Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 25, 2016 01:21 pm Title: Chapter 75

This is a really good story



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I hope you stick around for more :)

Reviewer: xclayresamanthax Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 24, 2016 08:33 pm Title: Chapter 74

Oh god poor Cheryl. Poor Michael. An amazing chapter as always it had me in tears. Looking forward to the next update.

Author's Response:

This has been pretty hard on them. Hopefully this will make them stronger though. Thank you so much for the kind words. Your readership is appreciated.

 

Reviewer: Kay Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 24, 2016 06:20 pm Title: Chapter 74

When a miscarriage occurs it can tear a family apart. The couple has to be careful that they don't blame each other. Michael and Cherell appear to be on the right track to keeping their family together. Some people may need counseling to get passed the loss. Its important for the couple to reaffirm their love for each other.



Author's Response:

You are absolutely right! Times are hard for them right now but our couple is strong. I'm confident that they'll bounce back soon enough. I love all of your beautiful reviews. Thanks again for your loyalty :)

Reviewer: Kay Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 24, 2016 05:41 pm Title: Chapter 73

Michael should always be protective of Cherell.

Reviewer: Kay Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 24, 2016 05:35 pm Title: Chapter 72

I am so sorry for your loss.

Reviewer: Kay Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 24, 2016 04:45 pm Title: Chapter 71

I am happy that they got married! Can't wait for them to start their family! I hope that they will have a happy life together!

Reviewer: Kay Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 24, 2016 03:37 pm Title: Chapter 65

The gift is beautiful!

Reviewer: Kay Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 24, 2016 03:20 pm Title: Chapter 62

I enjoy reading and re-reading your story!

Reviewer: Kay Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 24, 2016 03:11 pm Title: Chapter 61

It would take me awhile to get use to Muscles, too!

Reviewer: NerdandMichaelJackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 24, 2016 02:55 pm Title: Chapter 49

Awwwwwwe 😍❤️

Reviewer: Kay Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 24, 2016 02:52 pm Title: Chapter 59

Wow! There may be a strong possibility that Cherell is pregnant...

Reviewer: NerdandMichaelJackson Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 24, 2016 11:58 am Title: Chapter 38

Bubbles is so adorable ❤️

Reviewer: purebutterflies Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 24, 2016 08:24 am Title: Chapter 74

Aww this was so sad... but sweet at the end.



Author's Response:

Yeah, they need each other in order to get through this. Hopefully they can heal rather quickly.

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