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Reviewer: LouieLlama Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 16, 2016 01:05 pm Title: Chapter 77

Yes girl!!! I'm loving these updates!!! I'm glad Michael and Cherell are finally good again. I missed them. That camping trip was just what they needed. And Janet is so petty lol. Please continue soon!!!



Author's Response:

Yes! They've finally fixed what was broken between them. It's ashame all this had to happen so early in their marriage but they're a pretty strong couple. By the grace of God, there's nothing these two can't overcome :) And Janet really is being so immature. Maybe she'll grow out of that soon enough. More to come soon :)

Reviewer: Lorry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 16, 2016 12:33 am Title: Chapter 77

I agree with Marlon Tito is a bad actor smh lol. I loved the whole camping trip and I had a feeling Janet was going to use that song to use against Yasmine who knows she might because if her and Joe are just having a fling who knows still gives Janet a chance to get to know but I dunno the debrage like I said in previous comment might pop up but things will happen in due time.

 



Author's Response:

Lol yes! Tito is a terrible actor. And there's no telling what might just happen in Janet's future. We just have to wait and see. Sorry I didn't respond to you in the last chapter but your reviews always bring me joy and it's always a pleasure to hear from you, Lorry :)

Reviewer: skylord Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 14, 2016 09:29 am Title: Chapter 76

I'm so addicted to this story, I love them so much xx

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading! I'm so glad you've fallen in love with the characters. The next chapter is in production and will be up soon. I hope to get more feedback from you as the story progresses.

Reviewer: NerdandMichaelJackson Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 06, 2016 01:15 pm Title: Chapter 76

Wow Joseph that's cold.

Author's Response:

Joseph can really be a hard pill to swallow sometimes. Luckily, Michael is no longer fazed by him. Hopefully one day, Joseph will come around.

Reviewer: Kay Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 06, 2016 12:36 am Title: Chapter 76

They do have a lot to tackle. Janet was just being mean. Can't wait to read more!



Author's Response:

Janet was all up in her feelings. Hopefully she'll get it together soon though. Thanks. New update us underway.

Reviewer: Kay Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 05, 2016 11:52 pm Title: Chapter 75

I repeat that they may need some counseling and talk with other couples to get their thoughts clear and work to maintain their family unit.

Reviewer: BluJayWay Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 05, 2016 03:20 pm Title: Chapter 76

Props to Cherell for being selfless during her time of bereavement and to Michael for standing up to Joseph. Excellent as always; I'm looking forward to the two of them healing even further and getting back to the romance. 



Author's Response:

Seems like Michael and Cherell are the only ones not being selfish here. They're a pretty strong couple so I think they'll come out of this okay :)

Reviewer: BluJayWay Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 05, 2016 03:19 pm Title: Chapter 76

Props to Cherell for being selfless during her time of bereavement and to Michael for standing up to Joseph. Excellent as always; I'm looking forward to the two of them healing even further. 

Reviewer: LouieLlama Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 05, 2016 02:19 pm Title: Chapter 76

Your updates give me a reason to live. Lmao but seriously, I'm loving these updates girl! Thank God Michael and Cherell are getting better. Please continue soon!!!



Author's Response:

Lol thank you so much. I'm thrilled you're enjoying them so far. And yes, Michael and Cherell are definitely improving finally. Much more to come soon.

Reviewer: 94skyebabe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 05, 2016 08:39 am Title: Chapter 76

Great update and story!!! I hope all is well. Be blessed and thanks again

Author's Response:

You're so sweet. Thank you. Things are much better now. You be blessed as well. I'll be updating again soon :)

Reviewer: 94skyebabe Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 05, 2016 08:37 am Title: Chapter 75

😭 I hope they recover

Reviewer: 94skyebabe Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 05, 2016 08:37 am Title: Chapter 76

OMG SO MUCH DRAMA!!!!! Lol this story has so many layers. Oh and JANET I can't to see what she does next 😏.

Author's Response:

Lol you're right. There's way too much happening. And Hopefully Janet will start showing some maturity soon. She's just all up in her feelings at the moment. Next update is underway.

Reviewer: 94skyebabe Signed [Report This]
Date: Sep 05, 2016 08:34 am Title: Chapter 74

Awwwww poor Cherrel and Michael😢.

Reviewer: Lorry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 05, 2016 05:58 am Title: Chapter 76

oooh so much happened in one chapter! where do I begun? ugh seems like Janet is not over Joe by the comments she made to Jasmine i still understand she's not over him so its understable but she did go alittle far i really did hope janet and joe would be together but i have a little feeling the man she's with might be that 'Debarge' dude i heard about in the news who was trying to be relevant i don't keep up with the jacksons past or bother to im learning more from what you've written in this story lol.

also im glad mama O was involved trying to help cherell with the stage she and michael are as well her getting an appetite again. the love between the two of them will grow again in due time looks it will grow again.

 

Joseph can so damn selfish at times like damn! giving them six months to heal has he no compassion?! he lost a child too when marlon's twin died he should be the one to understand as well in this situation everything takes time! im proud of katherine for standing up to him and taking charge but im wondered as well about cherell agreeing to to michael for the tour she can't go with him how will this strain their relationship because touring takes alot out of people as well. so many issues so much time to find out in the next up coming chapters ugh.

 

A wonderful chapter darling <333

Reviewer: waterlily91 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 05, 2016 02:15 am Title: Chapter 76

Oh, I'm so glad you updated! This chapter has so much tension and drama! I'm not surprised Janet was mean to Yaz. A broken heart messes up teenagers heads. I'm glad Cherell is getting closer to Michael again. I loved it when Katherine yelled at Joseph and called him selfish! She doesn't know about his affair yet, huh? Will Michael spend the year doing the Thriller video? I can't wait to see more!

Author's Response:

Lol there was a lot going on here. Janet is having a hard time coping with her jealousy. She's loved Joe for a long time so this may take her a while to get over it. Michael and Cherell are definitely progressing. If they keep up the good work, they'll be coming together physically in no time :). And Joseph had it coming. Katherine usually keeps quiet about a lot of things but she knows how to take a stand when she strongly believes in something. As far as having an affair...too soon to know for sure. And this does make you wonder what MJ will be doing for the upcoming year. Guess we have to wait and see. More to come soon :)

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