Date: Feb 09, 2014 02:09 pm Title: Chapter 9
WOAH!! I'M REALLY LIKEING THIS STORY>> INICENTLY, SEXY, AND FUNNY!! LOVE IT!! >>¥
Date: Feb 09, 2014 09:50 am Title: Chapter 10
ALRIGT!!! NOW YOUR ON THE RIGHT CATEGORY!! WELCOME HON!! LOVE THE CHAPTRR I'M GOING BACK!!>>¥
Author's Response:
Thanks for letting me know to put it under slash. I missed that catagory! Lol I am glad you are enjoying it
Author's Response:
Thanks for letting me know to put it under slash. I missed that catagory! Lol I am glad you are enjoying it
[Report This]Date: Feb 08, 2014 10:21 pm Title: Chapter 11
THIS IS GREAT HONEY AND YOU SHOUL PUT IT UNDER THE SLASH CATEGORY ALSO>> IT BELONGES THERE AN YOU MIGHT GET MORE REVIEWS!! I KNOW I WILL REVIEW IT FOR SURE!! ANYWAYS I'LL GO BACK TO YOUR OTHER CHAPTERS!! GREAT STORY I LOVE IT!!>>¥¥
[Report This]Date: Feb 07, 2014 06:14 pm Title: Chapter 9
Oh. My. GOD! Your writing skills...I swear to God! Amazing! I'm at a loss for words. I've always been skeptical about slash stories, don't know why, but this one...holy shiiaaatt!!! I love it, and I'm hooked. I can't believe you left it on a cliffhanger like this... ;) please update soon! xx
Author's Response:
Glad you are enjoying it! :-)
Author's Response:
Glad you are enjoying it! :-)
[Report This]Date: Feb 07, 2014 06:59 am Title: Chapter 10
amazing chap u should continue honey
Date: Feb 04, 2014 03:12 am Title: Chapter 9
poor, poor michael! he's sooooo confused! luckily, he's got kind, patient, loving Chris to help him through. i'm loving this! <3
[Report This]Date: Jan 24, 2014 08:42 am Title: Chapter 7
I was about to write an entire paragraph about how cute Chris was and always is with Michael when Jackie appeared. It didn't surprise she hit on him because duh, he is Michael Jackson! But what bothers me is how thristy Michael was with her.
Really Michael?
I think Michael is still confused about what's happening between him and Chris. See how he always compares it with how it is with women and how he used to say he wishes Chris would be a one? And now a woman is flirting with him and it reassures him he loves woman and still has an effect on them! I can't wait for the day Michael understands sexuality can be way more complicated than only liking men or women or that loving Chris doesn't make him less of a man. Chris cares for Michael and the least Michael can do is respect Chris and don't cheat on him. Even if Chris knows Michael is using him, I think it's still not an excuse for Michael to act like this.
Anyway, I can't wait to see what happens. I have the feeling Michael is going to be more and more confused and he might sleep with Jackie to feel "manly".
Date: Jan 23, 2014 06:14 pm Title: Chapter 7
Ooh, Mike's getting me angry! I love it though. Keep going!
If he takes Jackie out, it might be cool if you make HER aggressive. He obviously wants to submit to someone, but it seems as though he's never had a chance to submit to a woman before.
Can't wait to read more!
[Report This]Date: Jan 20, 2014 10:14 pm Title: Chapter 6
Such a sweet chapter! Michael is finally willing to give it a try and Chris didn't even insisted and forced him. I'm glad that's a choice Michael made on his own. And I cannot wait for the part when Michael can't help but love Chris back ;)!
I can't wait for the next chapter, I hope you update soon!! :D
Author's Response:
I'm glad you're enjoying it! :-) :-)
[Report This]Date: Jan 20, 2014 09:44 pm Title: Chapter 5
yyyyyyaaaasssss
that was a passionate kiss !!
[Report This]Date: Jan 20, 2014 09:06 pm Title: Chapter 4
Chris is very confident and I like that. I guess he is not expecting Michael to reciprocate his feelings anymore and he is cool with that. And it seems like Michael is a little bit more at ease with Chris and that is great.
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But I still hope Michael will change his mind
[Report This]Date: Jan 20, 2014 08:36 pm Title: Chapter 3
Michael... I don't like that. Michael knows he is taking advantage of Chris. So unless Michael falls in love with Chris, I don't support it. Chris have been through too much to just be used by the person he loves! I'm not happy with that... Chris is right, Michael is a jerk. But I hope the following chapters will make me change my mind!
[Report This]Date: Jan 20, 2014 08:16 pm Title: Chapter 2
LMAO @ Michael squealing when Chris said "If there is not an insanely attractive man on the other end of this line, I am hanging up.”!! Chris is so funny, I adore him. Michael needs to stop fronting! He can at least try to get to know him better! And LOL @ Michael saying Chris might rape him lol
I have the feeling Michael will be consenting ;-)))
your cliffhanger is killing me!!! on to the next chapter :)
[Report This]Date: Jan 20, 2014 08:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hello! I clicked on the story by accident but I don't regret it. The story is so funny and I adore Chris! I think it'cute aad and still hoped something could happened between them! Chris is so adorable, he got me grinning since his first line. I swear, when he said “Because you have a nice ass and a bad attitude. Turns me on.” I was like
Michael should go for it and stop thinking that because Chris is a man, it's impossible. He should at least give it a try and see how it goes! You never know with love! It simply hits you!
Date: Jan 19, 2014 08:47 pm Title: Chapter 5
Wonderful! Can't wait to read more!