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Reviewer: kingofpoplover4ever10 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 22, 2014 05:52 pm Title: Chapter 115 their little angel

Wow...I'm so speechless right now. I almost started crying! Please continue!



Author's Response:

Thanks,  I tried to make it real and put myself in their shoes.  I hoped it was a good representation of what could happen.

 

thanks for your review.

Reviewer: KerenOlivero Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 22, 2014 05:46 pm Title: Chapter 115 their little angel

so tragic..but beautifully written..would love to hug both Michael and Cassie right now..maybe you can have them adopt or something..and as far as reviewing goes as a fellow author (for over half a decade altogether) I can relate..but I keep going and remain optimistic that people will review sooner or later..would like to thank you for reviewing my This is It related fic..just continue to do your best and remember there are fans of your work..



Author's Response:

Thanks.  I had a hard time writing that because I wanted to make it as real as possible but not too disturbing.  I know it could be a delicate subject to write about well.  Thanks for the continued support

Reviewer: MJ_s K1ss and Tell Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 21, 2014 08:41 pm Title: Chapter 114 tragedy

Nooo! Don't end it! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: KerenOlivero Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 21, 2014 06:59 pm Title: Chapter 114 tragedy

Oh no I was not offended in the least although it sucks that Michael had hurt himself..but i've been there and done that years ago so I understand..although it wasn't critical..

Was so sad that Cassie lost the baby too..

you're welcome about the support..it was a roller coaster ride for me but not enough for me to give up. 



Author's Response:

I feel that stories can't be all fluff.  There needs to be some drama or in my opinion it gets boring.  You can only have so many water balloon fights..lol:)

thanks though

Reviewer: Mjlover378 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 21, 2014 06:04 pm Title: Chapter 1 CALIFORNIA VISTAS

You're welcome. I'm gonna promote this story on my blog and hopefully you'll get more reads! :)



Author's Response:

Thanks, promote the need for people to review if they are reading.  It's been the common complaint by writers lately.  Where do you blog?

Reviewer: KerenOlivero Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 04, 2014 07:46 pm Title: Chapter 113

*gasps* oh noo poor Michael..ouch..

Reviewer: MJ_s K1ss and Tell Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 04, 2014 06:35 pm Title: Chapter 113

The second he decided to do that, I knew there would be an accident!

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 01, 2014 03:04 pm Title: Chapter 112 returning home

I haven't read this story for a while (sorry!) but caught up today. I am glad to see these two finally got their shit together.

 



Author's Response:

Welcome back and thanks for the words

Reviewer: MJ_s K1ss and Tell Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 28, 2014 07:34 pm Title: Chapter 111 the last night

Hahahahaha Michael Jackson incapable of boners? Woman-kind would die!!!



Author's Response:

His worst nightmare

Reviewer: KerenOlivero Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Apr 28, 2014 06:30 pm Title: Chapter 111 the last night

Of course I want you to continue..even if I don't always have a comment to make about a certain chapter..I will say I really like the "make love" scenes a lot you write them very well



Author's Response:

Thanks for your loyalty.  You begin to wonder when you pop out chapters and no one says anything.  Thanks for your reviews.

Reviewer: MJ_s K1ss and Tell Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 20, 2014 01:09 am Title: Chapter 109

Oh. Well that was depressing. Poor girl. That's so sad!

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 20, 2014 12:08 am Title: Chapter 109

Sad news about the little girl. And lawd Mike's ego is outta control with all the penis talk. Lol. And no worries, even tho Mandy's Mike has his issues, I still like him better than this one. I like Mandy more than Cassie too. She's tough and has balls. Cassie doesn't. Lol 

Reviewer: MJ_s K1ss and Tell Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 18, 2014 08:59 pm Title: Chapter 108 a trip to Florence

Awww!!! That's so sad! Michael is a good- no, great man!

Reviewer: KerenOlivero Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Apr 18, 2014 08:06 pm Title: Chapter 108 a trip to Florence

I agree with Cassie Michael was overreacting about the statue I mean it cannot talk it's a random object after all so it has no feelings..

The part with Briana (the ten year old) was really touching I love how similar it is to Michael's bond with Abby from my fic.

Reviewer: KerenOlivero Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Apr 18, 2014 07:13 am Title: Chapter 107. The birthday cake adventures

Whew I was sure Cassie was gonna blow up on him



Author's Response:

They are working on their relationship 

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