Reviewer: HeleneJacksonxx Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 12, 2014 07:51 am Title: Chapter 15

I love this fanfiction! I can't wait until he comes clean, and hopfully, tells her he's in loooooovveee with her :) Hehe...

Author's Response:

Thank you !!

I'm glad you liked this update.

Reviewer: Itshumannature03 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 25, 2014 02:57 am Title: Chapter 14

Ooooooh, I wonder what she was meant to say!!! Hope you update soon :)

Reviewer: Dreamgirl4Michael Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 24, 2014 01:28 pm Title: Chapter 4

Wow, what leana has to do to support her kids by working as a whore in a club. This club is completely not good, but at the same time it's very appealing.
I know not every girl in the club has sex, but I think that's the main thing, isn't it?

Author's Response:

It's kinda 50/50. One side is really raunchy with, sex, drugs, strippers. But then the other side deals with weird the fetish's people get. You'll see more of Len's wing the more you read.

Reviewer: Dreamgirl4Michael Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 24, 2014 01:02 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh god, this is reeeeeally sad!!! It's a real shame how their dad would go from really wanting to be there, to just up and walking away. That's just not good at all.

Reviewer: HeleneJacksonxx Signed [Report This]
Date: May 20, 2014 03:02 am Title: Chapter 13

Oooh that was amazing! I can'twait for the next chapter, and I thought it was cute how much Michael knew about all that stuff. It seemed real :) <3

Author's Response:

That make me happy, I spent hours researching the 7 sisters, so I'm glad it came out right :)

Reviewer: TifftayluvsMJ Signed [Report This]
Date: May 19, 2014 09:56 pm Title: Chapter 13

Hey, hey, hey! Ok so I am all caught up with this lovely story.

May I just say that this is soooo gooood. I enjoy your writing style!

Lena is such a strong woman, I give her props. She is raising two beautiful kids on her own while still managing school and work. She is doing what she's gotta do, and I admire that. I am sooo anxious to find out where the hell Jay is though and what excuse he has for up and leaving them like that! I suspect he has another chick perhaps with a baby or...hmm he's just plain dumb. I'm excited to find out though! Michael is simply adorable in this :) And nooooo he didn't seem too nerdy lol I envision Michael to have been nerdy, bashful, and a sweetheart. I feel you got really close to how the life version of Michael was, based off his personality. 

Aww my heart melted when baby boy asked Michael if he would be his daddy :*( I love the close connection he has with the twins. They would be such a beautiful family. I'm ready for Michael and Lena to become exclusive but I think Lena needs time. She still hasn't fully dealt with the whole Jay situation...it still hurts her I know because he was still her first love. 

Great story and I can't wait for more!!! You are awesome. Girl, I'm scratching my head a little puzzled that you don't have more views...you are so good :) 

Author's Response:

I'm so glad you enjoy it.

I love how strong she's become, in such a short time. Not everybody can handle being a single parent. She's not in school just yet. Right now it's just talk between her and Michael. I can't wait for you and all the other readers find out where Jay's been, I'm so tempted to tell but I know it would ruin a huge chunk of the story.

You know, you're the second person to tell me that about the way I've written Michael. I know in some stories Michael is like a sex god, which is cool. No judgement here cuz I'm guilty of writing him that way, but I just wanted him to the Michael that you hear about in the truthful stories that people who knew him told. That's why I made him nerdy, I love nerdy Mike, and very encouraging when it come to Lena's future and dreams.

Kameron just adores Michael which is a big deal. I haven't really mentioned it much, but he's not too open with new people. And Lena's got a lot of work to do on herself before she can properly entertain the idea of her and Michael in a relationship.

The funny thing is that this fic has more reviews than my other one, Burn, and I started this one six months after I started that one lol but I think it's cuz I'm new to this site or because I don't start conversations with others on her. But that's due to my weirdness. I know I have alot of silent readers, i just don't like asking them to review. Although I would love to read their reactions to the chapters.

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I really appreciate it.

Reviewer: DanieWritesLove Signed [Report This]
Date: May 12, 2014 06:02 pm Title: Characters

Hi! Just wanted to say I love your banners. Kunda, told me about ya. I wanted to know if you would be willing to tell me why photo editing site you use? I'm trying to make better banners for my stories and your banners look insanely good, like they were done by a pro! Kunda, also said you were an amazing author so I am definitely going to have to start reading your work! :) xoxo

Author's Response:

Well thank you. I actually don't use a photo editing site. I use photoshop cs6. But Kuda is an excelent writer too, I'm envious of her word play.