




Date: Dec 14, 2013 02:23 am Title: CHAPTER 3
X'D See, I knew there'd be a dark side to him....man I hate how the press started treatin him soon as he became #1
How do these people sleep at nigth? smh. well anyway, Michael didn't take it very well XD Poor baby,,and poor Jael for what he did to her,, though I LOVE me some angry,sexy Michael lol
Ohh I just love your writin girl, keep going!! I kinda hooked on this story already! Thnx,
Ash ;^)





Date: Dec 08, 2013 03:03 pm Title: CHAPTER 2
I love this sooo much!!!!! Please post more soon!!!! Like right now! Haha :)
Date: Dec 08, 2013 08:36 am Title: CHAPTER 2
Brilliant. I love your stories.





Date: Dec 08, 2013 12:48 am Title: CHAPTER 2
Ooooh I can see Michael has a dark, mysterious side to him already !! YAY!! lol I love me some mystery with a sexy Mikey leading the way haha
I like how you describe Jael's thoughts and when Michael confronted her like that nd evrything,, heck I loving this story already
Can't wait to see it continue!! Thnx,
Ash ;^)





Date: Dec 01, 2013 05:52 pm Title: CHAPTER 1
I like this start! Please contine:)
Date: Dec 01, 2013 03:50 pm Title: CHAPTER 1
This is fantastic. I love this. Your writing is amazing, so flowy and well done, and I think this is great. A lot of stories I've read on here lately haven't been that impressive to me, and this one is fantastic. I honestly think I'm a crappy writer but I really love this. Keep up the great work!
Author's Response:
Aw, honey, I'm sure you're not a crappy writer at all! Though I can't tell you how many times I've thought the same thing about my writing. It's best to not think too much about it and just write whatever's in your heart and on your mind, imo. But thank you so much for your kind words! x
Date: Dec 01, 2013 12:58 pm Title: CHAPTER 1
i love that story already please continue
Date: Dec 01, 2013 02:28 am Title: CHAPTER 1
Loving it so far :)





Date: Dec 01, 2013 01:38 am Title: CHAPTER 1
Girl I can't tell you enough how much i looove your writing
This sounds like my kinda story already ;D
Thnx,
Ash ;^)
Date: Nov 30, 2013 03:44 pm Title: CHAPTER 1
Interesting I like it.