




Date: Jan 21, 2014 09:47 pm Title: Part One
Neat so far. I like it. And I also like the Panther Dance sequence of the short film of Black Or White, too, as I find it to be very inspiring and intriguing. :)





Date: Nov 25, 2013 03:13 pm Title: Part One
How... Just.... Why???? WHY MUST YOU TORTURE ME?!?! Woman you got me cryin! THIS. STORY. IS. AWESOME. More please! :))))))





Date: Nov 25, 2013 08:36 am Title: Part One
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oh my fucking shit ahhhh my fucking ovaries just fucking died omg. OMG. OMG. Are you fucking kiddng me.
i feel..: strange. Omg that was so FRICKING sexy!!!! That was amazing!!! Oh my lord. I'm dying. I need more!!! Gimme more!!!
my ovaries literally died.. And I need a cold shower. How could you even do that to me, I think I'm gonna cry. That was amazing!!!!
Author's Response:
OMG THAAAAANKS YOUUUUUUUUUUUUZ
You're the best Appleheadjax XD I really appreciate it girly :)
AGAIN THANK YOU SO MUCH!! <3 <3 <3 More today or tomorrow, pinkie promise <3
~Miranda





Date: Nov 25, 2013 05:47 am Title: Part One
Excellent! Really sexy and sensual, plus the MG teasing Mike was awesome. Great job!!! Continue soob pleaaaaaaaase!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, hun! I really appreciate the review!! I just LOVE teasing MJ in my fics, and even though this ones my first, there will most definitely be moooreee ;) New chapter hopefully today or tomorrow. Stay tuned! :)
Date: Nov 25, 2013 05:21 am Title: Part One
wow i need him now too
that wsas soooooo gooooooooood
Author's Response: Gosh thank you so much :) I know the feeling haha ;)





Date: Nov 25, 2013 05:03 am Title: Part One
I don't know how this hasn't had any reviews yet! I'm really glad I read it, it's excellent! Keep up the good work Hun, this was well written and very entertaining!
Author's Response: Oh my gosh, thank you so much, hun!! I really appreciate reviews ^_^