[Report This]Date: Sep 19, 2011 03:28 pm Title: Jealous Eyes
hey good luck with the house move! i totally love your story, i remember reading the first couple of chapters you wrote sometime ago, i always hoped i'd get to read more of it! keisha is so sweet and her and michael seem well suited but i hope she realises that chris is not the guy for her before something happens between them. michael, show her how you feel and get over being so shy! can't wait for you to update again soon, hope it all goes smoothly! juls xoxox
Date: Sep 18, 2011 02:23 am Title: Jealous Eyes
it's ok if you won't update...no problem....do your stuff first....I really enjoyed your story,it's interesting and I hope both of them know what they are doing......because they're doing WRONG,very WRONG!....LOVE YOU!
[Report This]Date: Sep 18, 2011 12:47 am Title: Jealous Eyes
Awwww, darn you Tatiana, darn you Chris! Man, they need to get some time to talk again. :/ I enjoyed this jealousy, honestly. Lol, it was cute and interesting. :D Mike has fallen hard so soon, wonder if he'll get the girl. ;) Keisha could always cancel the cinema night. Lol, that'd hurt his ego. :P I'm with Mike there, I too don't want Keisha getting involved with a man like that and I don't want her involved with anyone but Michael. Lolz, maybe I'm biased or maybe I just know Michael is a wonderful man (with his own set of flaws of course, no one's perfect) Or maybe I just know Keisha won't really enjoy being with Chris over Michael. Who knows. All I do know is that I really enjoyed that chapter and I can't wait for your next update! Keep up the great work! I can't wait till your internet returns. :D
[Report This]Date: Sep 18, 2011 12:15 am Title: Jealous Eyes
Lol i love this :)! Its sad that they are both making eachother jealous lol
[Report This]Date: Sep 13, 2011 07:13 pm Title: Childhood
I was curious about her childhood and why she was in America. :D Thank you for explaining! I felt this chapter was really sweet. Oh Michael! Always the flirt! Lol He cracks me up. I'm sure he will get that kiss one day. ;) I can't wait for that to happen. I enjoyed this chapter so much and I was happy to see an update. I like the way you're writing this and the different unfolding events. :D Keep up the great work! I look forward to your next update! :D
Date: Sep 10, 2011 09:27 pm Title: Childhood
great chapter please continue love
[Report This]Date: Sep 10, 2011 07:15 pm Title: Childhood
Love itt :)! Amazing as always lol i love the playful nature they have it just melts my heart. Cnt wait for more
[Report This]Date: Sep 10, 2011 06:39 pm Title: Childhood
I got to read about my Michael and Keisha! Yes! This chapter was so cute! I love flirty Mike! Haha I love this dear heart <3
[Report This]Date: Sep 03, 2011 03:32 am Title: Neverland
ZOMG!!!!!!!!! I loved that!!!! Finally Keisha knows Michael is single!! Yay! :D I sense things happening in the near future...>.> Michael cheats so much! XD Typical Michael move right there!!! Him and that ride. 30 minutes!? Holy shit Mike! O.O I'm with Keisha on that one, I'd never get on that ride...EVER....XD That ride scares the crap out of me. Lol. I loved this, I was so excited to see this update and with PICTURES!!! :D Nat cracks me up too, I love her! This was a really cute chapter! I can't wait for more!! I'm so excited for it!!! :D Keep up the amazing work!!! :D
[Report This]Date: Sep 03, 2011 12:11 am Title: Neverland
Awww i love the way they act towards one another its super cute :) cnt wait for more
Date: Sep 02, 2011 01:15 am Title: Neverland
NEXT NEXT NEXT!!!! OMG!!!! PLEASEEEE!!!! lolz
L.o.v.e.
Author's Response:
I'm working on it! lol.
It should be up later on, or tomorrow.
Hopefully later...
[Report This]Date: Sep 01, 2011 03:21 pm Title: Neverland
XD Oh I missed Michael and Keisha! I had that Kool-Aid man smile when I saw your update. This story is cute dear heart <3
Author's Response:
"I had that Kool-Aid man smile when I saw your update. " < That made me laugh so much! Thank you, your comment means a lot. :) <3
[Report This]Date: May 30, 2011 12:08 am Title: Invitation
Ooo!!! I can't wait till this is updated! I love this! I wanna have dinner with Michael Jackson! Lol! I think that part will be really cute, I just hope that Keisha finds out soon that Michael isn't dating Tatiana, when they almost kissed last chapter I was on the edge of my seat! Damn it! I can't wait to read more! I loved Nat too! She's so funny! :D Keep up the great work, I can't wait till your next update!!
[Report This]Date: May 28, 2011 04:43 am Title: Invitation
Ooooooooooo update!!! I wanna read more!!! Do it quickly!
Author's Response:
I will try to, I just have loads of exams. It's just finding the time to type it up.
[Report This]Date: May 27, 2011 04:08 pm Title: Invitation
Aww they are just too cute :P!
Tatiana needs to back off shesh i just more and more annoyed with her when i read stories and shes always trying to ruin things lol. Cnt wait for the next part