[Report This]Date: May 06, 2011 11:58 pm Title: Dangerous
Haha how did i know the chris character was chris brown haha xD i love this story, i think its really well written. Great job :) cnt wait for the next part
[Report This]Date: Apr 24, 2011 12:12 am Title: Rehearsels
Holy crap! I loved this chapter!! Nice work. Tatiana has got everything wrong, she is SO not his girlfriend! Michael's gonna be furious when he finds out what she said. I hear a big word hitting her ears real soon and that word is FIRED! I hope Michael and Keisha can make it through this. Can't wait to hear more. :D
Date: Apr 17, 2011 09:31 pm Title: Rehearsels
Poor poor Keisha!!Between Frank and Tatianna I don't blame her for the way she feels.
But I hope she doesn't leave because of them, hope she talks to Michael first. He's gonna be a little upset if he finds out how she feels and why.
Good writing girl
[Report This]Date: Apr 17, 2011 07:23 pm Title: Rehearsels
Love it :) dang she must be a force to be reckon with if everyone finds her as a threat. Frank was rude but at least he made up for it & geez tatiana already claiming terriotry, sayings shes michaels girlfriend and stuff hahah she makes me laugh. I feel bad that keisha kind of believed tatiana. I hope she talks to michael first and straighten things out. Cnt wait for the next part :)
[Report This]Date: Apr 17, 2011 03:50 am Title: The Awaited Call
Ooo!! I loved this!! This was great! I think how nervous Michael gets is SO cute!! :) He really does have a heart of gold though. :) Getting personally invited to rehearsals by Michael Jackson? That truly never happens. :) I'd love to go to his rehearsals and watch and watch all the magic be created! Anyway, great chapter, I can't wait for more!! :)
[Report This]Date: Apr 11, 2011 01:37 pm Title: The Awaited Call
Wonderful chapter. Michael is such a flirt. So this is set in the Bad era but he has Prince and Paris.I like that you have written the kids into that era. I always wondered what it would have been like if he had kids back then. He is so smitten with Keisha.Cant wait to read the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: Apr 11, 2011 01:31 pm Title: Disney Magic
The story sounds interesting. I like the way Michael and Keisha met. Paris and Eliza are so adorable.
[Report This]Date: Apr 09, 2011 06:13 am Title: The Awaited Call
Awww they're so cute together, i was giggling during the whole chapter! Keisha doesnt seem to know MJ and his music that much but i think its even better like this than to have a crazy fan all over him. The children are also quite perceptive ;-) Nice story, keep it up!
[Report This]Date: Apr 08, 2011 11:23 pm Title: The Awaited Call
I love it! & hah i knew something happen with the other chapter because when I read it earlier like 2 minutes later it was deleted & i was like wtf? I could of swore there was a second chapter haha but Im happy you cleared things up :) i think this is a wonderful story and you are doing a great job :) cnt wait for the next part
[Report This]Date: Apr 02, 2011 04:16 am Title: Disney Magic
wow great start I love it please continue :)
Date: Apr 01, 2011 10:44 pm Title: Disney Magic
I already like this story very much....please continue!!!!
[Report This]Date: Apr 01, 2011 10:08 pm Title: Disney Magic
Haha I love it! Great job :)) thanks for a long first chapter! Usually the first chapter is usually uber short haha cnt wait for the next part
[Report This]Date: Apr 01, 2011 09:17 pm Title: Disney Magic
I love it! I this! :D you are really going somewhere. :) Please write more.
[Report This]Date: Apr 01, 2011 09:17 pm Title: Disney Magic
Daaaaaannnnnnnngggg!! That's all I gotta say! XD I loved this, I do hope you write more. I wanna see where this goes. Michael's so cute, bless his beautiful and innocent soul. I can't believe Keisha's never seen any Disney movies. I love Disney movies. :D I can't wait to read more, this is really great so far! :D