[Report This]Date: Oct 14, 2013 07:34 am Title: Chapter 1
I'm really excited to read :) I think this is gonna be a really great story!! d84;d84;
Author's Response:
Thank you sweetheart! I really appreciate your review... Glad you like it! Much L.O.V.E.
Date: Oct 13, 2013 09:32 am Title: Chapter 1
Really feeling this story!!!!
Author's Response:
Tee hee hee, I'm glad you like it sweetie. Thanks for the review. Much L.O.V.E.
Date: Oct 13, 2013 09:08 am Title: Chapter 1
"“Please don’t tell me that this is how you answer the door to the postman…” he said."
LMAO!!!!!!!! This had me rolling on the floor laughing XDDD
Too bad she didn't take it very well! :P I would have laughed along if he said that to me hahahah
This short story sounds REALLY good! I'm loving it so far, as every other story you have written of course.
How many chapters do you think you're going to write? :)
Author's Response:
Maggie!!! Your reviews are the ones I look forward to the most! Call me biased but hey, I can't help it that I love you. This girl has some temper issues. Ha ha ha, you know what I mean. This would be longer than You Keep Me Waiting but not too long. Thank you for your review. Much L.O.V.E. from my heart to yours!
Date: Oct 12, 2013 11:42 am Title: Chapter 1
Great job. I love it. I miss the Sweet Deception and 3 Words Unspoken.....A LOT....
Author's Response:
Hello my dear Ania, I thank you for this review. I know you miss my stories but SD and TWU needs a lot of focus just to be through with one chapter. That's why I'm focusing more on short stories. Med school is just too much work. I miss writing. I will update them soon. Much L.O.V.E.
Date: Oct 12, 2013 10:22 am Title: Chapter 1
woaw!!! great start! Please, continue!
Author's Response:
Oh nellan I missed you! Yes, I would continue this! Really soon! Thanks for the review. Much L.O.V.E.
[Report This]Date: Oct 12, 2013 09:08 am Title: Chapter 1
A lovely start. I really like this. The illustrations are perfectly detailed and I can picture each(scene) as well as what each character is doing. I see the main character gets testy at times and she likes to give Michael alittle strife, but that makes her all the more lovable. She's in love with a man who she doesn't get to see very often. I get it. I guess I would be the same way if I were in her shoes. But, I noticed that he said, “You know it isn’t too hard to change things if you’d only say yes…”
Is that referring to a previous marriage proposal? Just a thought. But anyway, great job. Hope you update soon.
Author's Response:
Oh you like this one too! Now I'm really happy! Thank you so much for the review. I really enjoy reading all that you've got to say! I want to reveal more details about the girl and her relationship with Michael later. But for now, I hope enjoy her narration of her sweet lovemaking to Michael. I promise I wouldn't keep you guys waiting too long for an update. Much L.O.V.E. from my heart to yours!
[Report This]Date: Oct 12, 2013 06:17 am Title: Chapter 1
Excellent!!! Your amount of detail is fantastic, perfectly descriptive that really allows us to put ourself in the main girls place. (At least that's what I did!XD) But it was romantic amd sexy at the same time which is Awesome!!! Great chapter and Michael deserves some hardcore teasing after this. I mean hardcore he's gonna beg teasingXD. More please!
(And also, your absence is completely fine! Everybody's busy during the fall, so its alright! :-))))
Author's Response:
Awww.... Thank you so much... Yeah, just because a story goes along these lines, I don't want to compromise the romance in it. The next chapter would be up soon. Much L.O.V.E. Let's see who gets a tease... Tee hee hee hee...