Date: Dec 10, 2013 09:48 am Title: Chapter 1- Characters
I really HATE diana and I hope you don't let her come between what michael and annie have. :( she too destructive.
Author's Response:
I am just getting to the beginning reviews lol. But yea Diana seems to be getting more bold with her moves!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: Dec 10, 2013 08:11 am Title: Chapter 34- Takes a Bitch to Know a Bitch
Awww shiiidddd!!!! Annie should've put her in chokehold and punched her into next week. Diana is too freaking bold, she is crossing the line now?!
Author's Response:
Lol!!! You are a mess lol. Too funny with the chockhold. Maybe that should've happened. But now, this is started all kinds of drama. Well, Diana is a pretty bold person when she wants to be!
[Report This]Date: Dec 10, 2013 07:04 am Title: Chapter 33- Can You Handle My Snake?
Michael and Diana are slowly getting tempted. I am going to need Annie to calm down on a snake. She need to remember what one woman will not do, another woman will!!!! Great chapter!!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks girl! Yea, relationships are tough because there is always somebody trying one up you. In this case, it happens to be a woman named Diana who is one a crazy ass mission.
[Report This]Date: Dec 10, 2013 02:39 am Title: Chapter 34- Takes a Bitch to Know a Bitch
TEAM DIANA TEAM DIANA TEAM DIANA TEAM DIANA TEAM DIANA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Annie messed up with that slap my girl, Diana, showed her!I really know why I want her to win only because Diana's character is Adriana Lima and I hte good girls always winning. You made this more exciting!
Author's Response:
Yea, I know what you mean. Even in chick flicks they do that in the movies. I think a more realistic approach is what makes a movie and what I mean is not always doing that Disney and Tyler Perry ending. And I understand, why u think I love your penname lol. And thank you, I am glad you find it exciting!!!!
[Report This]Date: Dec 09, 2013 10:09 pm Title: Chapter 34- Takes a Bitch to Know a Bitch
This story is everything! I'm so happy I decided to check it out. I'll cry if you stop updating it. Please don't break my heart. I need this kind of excitement in my life.
Author's Response:
Hey there:) awww, I will not stop! Lol. I am all about excitement!!!!!! Thank you for the compliment! I am really glad that you like the story! Trust, this is going to be a rollarcoaster ride!
[Report This]Date: Dec 09, 2013 08:03 pm Title: Chapter 34- Takes a Bitch to Know a Bitch
Let me just say that I am really dissapointed in Annie right now Annie Noooo you suppose to beat that bitches head into the floor. Come on now Annie fight for your man.
Author's Response:
I agree. If I were watching this on a TV show I honestly would have thrown popcorn at the television and yelled at Annie for letting Diana do that. Some women fight with words, some fight with fist. Clearly Diana chose the latter. Annie is a person who seems sheltered and maybe somewhat overprotected, so to meet people like Diana, well, it is hard to handle without switching up your game!
Date: Dec 09, 2013 07:58 pm Title: Chapter 1- Characters
Silent reader here!
I had to comment on what I just read because I got so much life from watching Diana put Annie a couple notches. Good girls don't always finish last,especially if you only bring innocence to the table. I just love Diana like there aren't words to describe the love I have for her,I understand Michael and Annie are a devout Jehovah witnesses but how did Annie expect Michael to abstane from sex when women throw themselves at him 24/7?
Author's Response:
Hey there :) I love to hear from my readers! I am still shocked people like Diana lol. When I began to write this, I thought people would loath her, but somehow, I managed to make her likeable. And yes, this is not a conventional, ordinary story. I am making sure this is going to be all kinds of unorthodox lol. You right though, his psychologist even told him that ish is hard to do! lol. Annie and Diana come from two different worlds which can cause a clash. We will see how the battle between "good" and "evil" pans out! But always and truly, thank you for reading, I appreciate with all my heart!
Date: Dec 09, 2013 06:48 pm Title: Chapter 34- Takes a Bitch to Know a Bitch
That little bitch. AW HELL NAW! LEMMEE TAKE MEH EARRRINGS OFFF
Author's Response:
Hey there:) and lol. Is that directed towards Diana or Annie? lol. I am thinking Diana because she was extra bold in this chapter lol. Just take a moment a breathe, I can't have any of my characters injured!!!!! LOL. Thanks for reading:)
[Report This]Date: Dec 08, 2013 10:05 am Title: Chapter 32- This Time Won't You Save Me?
I'm loving this but man, my girl Diana (Adriana Lima) needs to try something like set up Annie so Michael thinks she's cheat (Because she's a bad girl/dangerous). Now I think you see I want Diana to win. Pleeeeaase! see since in all storie the good girl always wins (it totally gets old when the good side always win in stories/movies both) so to bring excitment I beg you to take my advice to let the bad girl win (Diana). Only cause I pesonally and really think people like Diana better. Only because she brings excitment and badness to the story. So, PLEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAASSSSE!!!! think about this. Let Diana win (like u say Diana always gets what she wants, it's like in the end she expresses a good side and show love for Michael). Michael can suddenly realize when Diana came it was a dangerous call, but then again telling him his five year relationship with Annie was not working like he saw/thought (he sees his attraction to Annie faded over years and a voice is trying to say Diana is a replacment sent to him for Annie)! So if take it mind and like it please try it. But, if you don't like it tell me what is wrong with it.
Author's Response:
Hey girl! I love feedback. I like to hear what the readers are thinking. I am surprised people like Diana like that lol. When I first wrote this, I thought people would all revolt against her, which some people do lol. But at the same time I am not surprised, Diana brings I agree, excitement and thrill to the story. That is why the story is about her! lol. Now I love to hear suggestions and truly appreciate your input. Well, I can tell you what is going to happen, but then there won't be a story, hun! lol. But we are just at the surface :)
P.S. I love your penname (go figure)
[Report This]Date: Dec 08, 2013 01:31 am Title: Chapter 32- This Time Won't You Save Me?
Troublemaker is really Diana's middle name. Update soon!!!!!
Author's Response:
lol thanks!!!!!! I will!!!!!
[Report This]Date: Dec 07, 2013 01:59 pm Title: Chapter 32- This Time Won't You Save Me?
Michael should listen to Dr.Phil...but he already trippin out seeing her image when he hugs Annie, smh. Diana must have that voodoo power lol...great chapter!!!! Update soon!!
Author's Response:
Lol @ the voodoo power. Amd thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: Dec 07, 2013 09:27 am Title: Chapter 32- This Time Won't You Save Me?
tsk tsk, Michael is still a naughty boy with nasty thoughts about Diana. I'm ready to see their moments at work! Love it!!!!!
Author's Response:
We will see the moments:)
Date: Dec 07, 2013 06:12 am Title: Chapter 18- Not a Chapter; Just a Thanks to Readers
OMG I LOVE POPCORN WITH CHOCOLATE IT'S MY FAVORITE TYPE!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Hey there:) I think I tried that and I used to eat that. It wasnt bad at all lol.
Date: Dec 07, 2013 01:33 am Title: Chapter 32- This Time Won't You Save Me?
The tittle of your story is "Dirty Diana" not "Sweet Annie". Team Diana. You can make Annie more sexy, little bit outrages, a little bit dirty, then I will switch teams, lol. Love that chapter the previous one gave me a dream, really. I was so angry when I woke up, lol, I wanted to dream some more.
Author's Response:
Girl, what was that dream about?! I havent got the luxury of dreamin that yet lol. Yes, you are right, it is called Dirty Diana. I made Annie the polar opposite. Sometimes, people just can't stand that, I can understand!! Diana pulls me sometimes lol!
[Report This]Date: Dec 07, 2013 12:15 am Title: Chapter 32- This Time Won't You Save Me?
Oh, Michael...he couldn't even listen to the damn advice!!! Ugh! Annie needs to take some Vaseline and clip on earrings because of that bitch, Diana! But I love this chapter!
Author's Response:
Lol, we will see if he does. Haaaa!!!! @ the vaseline and clip on earrings!!!!