[Report This]Date: Dec 08, 2014 06:44 pm Title: Chapter 81
EGGGGGYYYYYPPPTTTT is here! Aww those pictures are ADORABLE. I love it girl. This chapter was so funny. Kay and her screaming but at least Michael stuck around and stayed strong. I am very so proud. Lol at him fainting. I knew it was coming though. Gaaahhhhh, so cute! I love it girl. Sorry I haven't been reviewing lately. usually when you update I'm either at school, work, or somewhere where i'm in capable of leaving a review and i HATE leaving them on my phone but today you updated at the right time. Loving it girly! Update soon!
Author's Response:
Hello Brandy :) Yes, Egypt is here! And he is so cute :) Thank you for the review and the rate girl :D
Date: Nov 22, 2014 11:24 pm Title: Chapter 80
Omg!!!!! This chapter was hilarious and yasssss to Kalli the matchmaker! Charles and Alicia gettin x rated at Neverland! Lmao that is hilarious! I died a thousand times at the relationship goal of laid eyebrows, the penis talk, and Michael about to have a conniption over her inviting Charles. This was a hilarious hot mess! And for goodness sakes Michael, you wife masturbates, get over it already!!! Smh. But yassssss Egypt is coming! Omg! I'm so happy Michael came home when he did.
Author's Response:
Hey girl :)) LOOOL! I'm happy you liked it! LMFAO @ "the relationship goal of laid eyebrows" <3! I'm so happy Egypt will be here soon! The new chapter is here, enjoy! ;)
[Report This]Date: Nov 22, 2014 10:42 pm Title: Chapter 80
wth. You ended on that. I'm so 
at you right now. Gah. I love your stories so much, that I went on a reading bender and read this whole story. I'm in love....except for cliffhangers like this one.
Author's Response:
LOOOOOOLLL! Well, you've been following me enough to know that I love cliffhanger lool! But don't worry the new chapter is here, enjoy!
And sorry for all the typos you must have seen while re-reading this story =S
Date: Nov 22, 2014 10:09 pm Title: Chapter 80
Michael came just in time!!!! Egypt is coming!!! Yaaay for Charles and Alicia. Lmaoooo "fuckpad" and YAAAAAAASSS Michael and Janet's eyebrows slay. Both of em. Somethin Abt those jackson features.. They just slay period..nothin new. Hair always laid. Love them. slaybrows
Author's Response:
Hello Nene! Yup! Michael was here in time for Egypt's arrival lol :)
IKR! The Jacksons has the most perfect faces! Thank you for the review :)
Date: Nov 03, 2014 02:52 pm Title: Chapter 79
Ladies night! Yassss! I know the convos will be hilarious. And I'm glad Egypt is waiting a little longer. Almost time for his cute self to make his appearance into the world. I can't wait to see Michael and his new baby bonding. So precious. And lmao at Kalli talking about Eddie's list. Chile no lies told!!! Add Quincy Jones to that list too but I'm sleep! Lmao
Author's Response:
Hey girl! LOOOOL, you know they always end up talking about sex anyways lmaoo. I can't wait to see Egypt too. They are such a cute family and it's going to get even cuter with baby Egypt around :)
LMAOOOOO! Quincy wanted Michael. Always talking his doe eyes and shit lmaoo
Date: Nov 02, 2014 07:30 pm Title: Chapter 79
YAAAAAAASSSS LADIES NIGHT O WHAT A NIGHT! Lls
Lmaooo at Michael goin back and forth in the room when Kalli was on the phone with Charles.
“You look great” I say eyeing him “Nice butt. Your boyfriend Eddie Murphy will love it”
^^^cant get enough of the Eddie jokes. Keep them coming Annie“You sure it’s the dancing?” he says raising a brow “You sure it’s not dancing... with your fiance... in your bedroom” The crowd giggles but all I can do is hide my face behind my purse!
^^do u have room Kalliope girl! Cause that turned my face red, and I'm not even in the story!
Awwww Michael missed her contractions :((((((( so glad Egypt didn't come without him being there. Michael is an outstanding father already! Everybody we'll be fine
update as soon as u can :)))
Author's Response:
YESSS! The ladies' night is here :))
Michael shouldn't worry because the best is coming ;-) Thank you for the review, Nene! And enjoy the new chapter :D
[Report This]Date: Oct 04, 2014 08:51 am Title: Chapter 78
Lol @: " it doesn't bother me.......if it did I could just call a friend and have him fired." OK you keep convincing yourself. Cause I sure as hell don't believe a word!
It sounds like he already has a whole plan formed to get rid of Charles. All Daddy Michael needs to do pick up the phone......DM is too funny. He had better be glad that Kay can't read his mind.
Charles had better stay in his lane. Or Else!
Author's Response:
LMAOO! Michael is trying to be less jealous but in case he can't overcome it, he still has connections lol
Thank you for the review Camille ;D
Date: Oct 03, 2014 10:05 pm Title: Chapter 78
Michael is so pressed over Charles, I just roll my eyes and WANNA smack him upside his round Apple ass head! Negro get over it! Kay doesn't have to tell him everything they talk about. Her friendship with Charles is just that.. HERS! For michael to always be secretive and hide things, he sure is nosey! I'm glad Kay doesn't tell him anything about what her and Charles discuss Cuz it ain't his damn business. And he better get used to him being around Cuz I can't wait Til Kay starts working with him. Michael can stay pressed! Lol. Anyway, good to know the baby is doing well and it's getting closer to delivery time. 2 more months Til baby Egypt! And awww at Mike being worried about the baby inheriting his diseases. Egypt will be fine.
Author's Response:
Hey girl! LOOOL, Michael needs to work on his jealousy. Especially over Charles? He loves Kalli like a brother, nothing to worry about! I cannot wait til Kay gets back to work too! It's going to be so funny loool. Thank you for the review girl :D
Date: Oct 03, 2014 08:26 pm Title: Chapter 78
Awwwwwwww! Michael needs to stop stressing! They are having a beautiful baby. And baby Jade is so cute and sassy like her mommy lol
p.s. Eggs with syrup is good but I think I like eggs with hot sauce better. That isn't weird is it :) o_O lmaoooo
Author's Response:
loool! I love Jade, she is adorable :)
Date: Sep 21, 2014 08:55 pm Title: Chapter 77
Lmao! Bye michael! A jealous possessive mess! But yasssssss at the lovemaking! Even though I'm not a Beyonce fan at all, that song is very sexy and Kay has the perfect man to reenact it with. They have definitely made up I see. So michael better keep it together or else! Lol. He don't wanna miss out on the goodness between Kay's legs so he's gonna act right.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you like the make up sex lol. I liked this song too and I thought it was perfect for them ;-) Still side eyeing Beyonce for this Bow Dow bitches followed by a feminist mess she is doing but whatever!
Michael knows he never wants to go an entire week without some good lovin. He may have learnt this lessn ;-)
Date: Sep 21, 2014 08:09 pm Title: Chapter 77
Omfg first off I would like to say I love you for using one of my favorite songs by Beyonce. U know I had to play it while reading the story lmaoooo it's only right!
Now let's talk about the sex. This had to by far the nastiest with them.. Well idk about that.. Let's review lls
Do you, do you wanna touch it, baby
“Oh, I’m gonna touch it” Michael chuckles hovering her “Touch it”
*dies*I know I'm right
Hell yeah you the shit
That's why you're my equivalen
So sexy
“Tell me I’m the shit, Kay” Michael moans “Tell me!
“You’re the shit! You’re the shit Daddy” she screams
sooo intense lmaoo
“Thank you for this gift” Michael says looking up “But love? How many men heard your singing this song?” he asks “How many men were they in the studio where you were moaning on the song? How many men should I punch until they forget a sound that me only should hear?”
Lmaoooo well damn that escalated fast lmaooo typical Michael
girl this chapter was the shit!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
You're welcome lol :) They deserved their sexy making up sex lol :)
[Report This]Date: Sep 21, 2014 07:53 pm Title: Chapter 77
YES Daddy Michael is back in force!
I laughed so hard at the lyrics to the song, especially the constant repetition of the word Daddy. Lmao. It was perfect.
Author's Response:
LOOOL! It was perfect for them, wasn't it? :)
Date: Sep 21, 2014 07:52 pm Title: Chapter 76
So glad these two made up, I hate when they fight!
Author's Response:
Same :)
Date: Sep 17, 2014 03:28 pm Title: Chapter 76
"Show you how I feel" YAAASSS that's my song!!!! Girl u gotta make the next chapter soon with the song and his reaction Annie! Lmaoo but awww michaels gift to Kalliope was soooo sweet.
Author's Response:
YAAAS! I love this song too ;)! The new chapter is here girl :D Enjoy :)
Date: Sep 15, 2014 04:20 am Title: Chapter 75
Awwwwww. And I'm glad they talked!!! Michael can't be doin stuff like that with so many people counting for him. Poor baby. Can't wait until you update again. Missed you Annie lls
Author's Response:
I'm glad they made up too :) The new chapter is here :D