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Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 19, 2013 10:25 pm Title: Chapter 15

Lmao funny!!! Eddie was totally into Michael, and yes I've seen that thread on LSA. That site is a mess. Lol. I wonder did one of them hit on Kalli for real or was she just tryna get caveman Michael all riled up. Anyway, this was a cute and fun chapter. Michael is so horny for his wife! I love the effect she has on him. Eddie wants some too, the Michael Jackson effect is real. No man, woman, or animal is immune. Don't get me started on Quincy Jones. Lmao. And Nicole is still slaying in her 40s and 5 kids later! 



Author's Response:

Hey Kat :) LMAO, you'll never know what you can find on that site. I've seen something about Quincy Jones too lol! You're right, nobody can resist to the Michael Jackson effect! Nicole looks good!!! And all her children ae beautiful! She makes beautiful babies

Reviewer: MyraJ25 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 17, 2013 08:44 pm Title: Chapter 14

on some serious stuff.they need to wake up jade.she been sleep for months.



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she's awake on the next chapter lol

Reviewer: missmj2013 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 17, 2013 08:19 pm Title: Chapter 1

Yay! you have another good story im looking foward to reading this! (: <3



Author's Response:

Hey girllllll! Thank you for the review and the rate :D Make sure you read The Sweetest Gift and Your Love is King before :)

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 17, 2013 06:17 pm Title: Chapter 14

Yasssss!!!! Smoochy is getting healthy again and they can fuck! Michael is in heaven right now! Lmao. He's so happy and in love and it's adorable. And OMG please tell me there will be a chapter where we can see Michael and Eddie talking. Whatzupwityou was a pure mess! I'm sorry to say but Eddie was all over Michael in that damn video. I think he wanted him chile. I'm just being honest. Lmaoooo anyway, can't wait to see Give InTo Me as well. Smoochy will be getting her fan girl on and I am here for it! Slash was sexy as hell throughout the 90s. I love his hair. 



Author's Response:

Hey Kat! HAHA, yes! They can finally get it on :) I'll make sure to add a scene between Eddie and Michael for you! You're not the only one to tell me that! Plenty of people are talking about it on LSA, someone also made a video about it LOL!

Tell me if you want the link, I think I can find it again :)

I cannot wait to write about Slash and Kalliope's meeting. He was sexy AF, and his hair was perfect :) I love me some Slash

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 16, 2013 08:15 am Title: Chapter 13

Uh oh. That nigga DID NOT just hand Kay his number right in front of Michael's face. I see two possibilities for Charles:

1) He's as innocent as a baby angel and truly means no harm. In this case I feel sorry for him because I have a feeling Michael is going to go ham on his ass at some point.

2) He doesn't give two shits about the fact that Kay is with Michael and is actively looking for a way back in to her vagina.

There can be no 'grey zone' with his intentions. I think this is usually how men are anyways....unlike women things are much more black and white for them LOL. Michael is not insane to be wary. I can't wait to see what he does once it escalates. Memories of Nathan spring to mind......or should I say Newton LOL. 

And I just love how Michael 'marks his territory.' As long as he doesn't pee on her leg......

 



Author's Response:

HEY CAMILLE :)! YES, he did lmao! Well, we can notice that he waited for Michael to get out of the room to give Kalli his number! Slick

I think Kalliope is thinking 1) and Michael is thinking 2)

Whatver happens, Michael will let him know at some point that he needs to stay away from his Smoochy! But Michael should get used to it since Kalli and Charles will work together after she gives birth to Egypt!

"Memories of Nathan spring to mind......or should I say Newton LOL. "

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LMAOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!! Michael stole Kay from Nathan and had the audacity to shade him everytime he saw him haha. A mess!

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 15, 2013 12:54 am Title: Chapter 13

 Lmaoooooooo!!!! Michael is a damn mess!!!! And I love it. I have to say though, Charles is gorgeous. Beautiful smile, ugh. I see why Michael is a lil pressed. That was Kalli's old boo thang/ex fiancĂ©e/ almost baby daddy. Lol. But seriously, I'm secretly glad he's a bit jealous of Charles because now he gets to feel what Kalli feels every time she's had to deal with a woman who was way outta line when dealing with him. This is a bit of karma right now. Skeletor, June Chandler and all the other thirsty ass women Kalli has had to shoo off from her man!!! Charles is just one guy. Michael's caveman self needs to chill a bit. Sheesh. Lol. I'm hoping Charles sticks around for awhile though. Eventually Kalli will have to work with him anyway. Michael is gonna have himself a time chile. Lmao let the possessive games begin! But on a serious note, Imma need for Kalli to start gettin her proper rest! She needs sleep just as much as Michael does, in fact more since she's pregnant. I'm glad baby Egypt is ok. Lastly, Dr. Augello is cute. Alicia Keys. Lol I'm glad she has some damn sense too! She shut Michael down immediately, and I'm glad she's not entertaining the idea. Good. About damn time! And Michael wouldn't do that to his Smoochy anyway. 



Author's Response:

Hey Kat :DD I know you love Michael when he acts like this haha :) Damn, Charles is fine! I understand why Michael is a little upset and he almost gave her a baby too... But he needs t get used to it. Once she gives birth to Egypt, she'll be with him most of the week!!! I hope Kalli gets better too for her baby! I think it'll get better :)

YAAAAYYY! Since I started The Sweetest Gift I was thinking of including AK! I'm happy you like it ;D

New chapter up :)

Reviewer: littlejen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 14, 2013 11:32 pm Title: Chapter 13

favorite moments: - when Blanket refused to have a shower. lol that was soooooo cute, i could picture it in my head and i laughed like an idiot.

- Charles. All of him. He's so hot i can't even handle it, look at that smile! sjkfvhsdjvbds lol 

I kind of miss Liu and Gideon!! You should bring them back sooooon :) xx

 



Author's Response:

HAHA! Blanket is so cute :)

Liu and Gideon will be back once they go on tour:)

Reviewer: littlejen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 14, 2013 11:14 pm Title: Chapter 12

i loved this chapter!! i said it one and I'll say it again: i fucking love michael and kalli's relationship <333333333333 love the story too, xx :)



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oops double review :)

Reviewer: littlejen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 14, 2013 11:13 pm Title: Chapter 12

i loved this chapter!! i said it one and I'll say it again: i fucking love michael and kalli's relationship <333333333333 love the story too, xx :)



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it :) I love them too :D

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 14, 2013 09:04 am Title: Chapter 12

LMAO The Los Angeles Boob Tour. I just adore Daddy Michael he's always such a perv! 

I laughed so hard at Kalli washing her hands after Joseph's kiss. I hate when people kiss your hand and leave their slobber all over it I can totally relate. You don't know where a stranger's mouth has been. Joseph could have come straight from sucking dicks on Sunset boulevard and then transferred the herpes to her skin.

I've had this hand molestation happen to me before and I always do the same thing as Kalli. One time it happened at work (I work at a hospital) so I immediately washed my hands with surgical scrub (4% chlorhexidine-it's that orange stuff) and then used Purrell hand sanitizer.

Hand kissing is so creepy. Perfect for Joseph. Glad that Michael told him off.



Author's Response:

LMAO! I get that if she could, Kalliope would have done the same thing you did! :) I am so proud Michael grew some balls and told Joseph off ! Thank you for the review and the rate :)

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 14, 2013 08:57 am Title: Chapter 11

Oh boy Kalli is playing with fire if she starts palling around with Charles too much. Working with him is one thing, and I actually think it will be good to make DM a bit jealous because he's so damn cute when he gets possessive. But chatting it up on the phone or hanging out outside of work is not OK. There is a certain line you don't cross with friends of the opposite sex if you are in a relationship, especially if he is an ex and if he is single and lonely. Kalli needs to remember if the shoe was on the other foot and DM was hanging with an ex, she would flip. And Lesbogail doesn't count because 1) DM divorced Lesbogail for Kalli and even before that, the relationship was beyond dead. With Charles there is no closure and he is likely to seek it, and 2) Kalli probably spends more one on one time with Abi than Michael does. I doubt she'd be so cool with Abi if Michael was always chatting on the phone with her or hanging out with her alone. 

I don't think Kalli would ever cheat on her Bambi but she's just asking for a whole lot of future trouble. I can just see Michael being arrested and hauled away in cuffs for murdering Charles now......

As for Joseph and his bulldog face, I'm sure he wants something. Michael should tell him to screw off. 



Author's Response:

IKR! I think Kalliope doesn't see how awkward it can be for Michael. And even if she is deeply in love with Michael, you'll never know if her getting closer to Charles could awake his feelings for her! She is playing with fire indeed! I know Kalli would be mad if Michael would think of doing the same thing!

"I can just see Michael being arrested and hauled away in cuffs for murdering Charles now......"

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Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 14, 2013 08:48 am Title: Chapter 10

Michael is so nasty lmao! "The twins are out" I inhaled coffee laughing at that one.



Author's Response:

HAHA! You know Michael is nasty

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 12, 2013 09:08 pm Title: Chapter 12

Caveman Michael for the win! God I love him! Lmao. Kalli was workin that dress too. I love Michael's perverted ass thoughts about his Smoochy. I know he is counting down til those two weeks are up so he can get some of that. Lol. And damn, that Joseph meeting was interesting. I'm glad Michael told him off, he needed to hear it! Maybe he will change his ways. And lol at Kalli goin to wash her hands. A mess. Michael's fans seem to like her as well so that's good. This little tour of the city should be good for them too. They need to get out of the house sometimes. 



Author's Response:

Hey Kat :) Yas, he is back haha! Michael is crazy about his Smoochy and we love it :) I agree, they need to go our more often:) Let's hope Kalliope won't be too afraid to do it

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 11, 2013 06:10 pm Title: Chapter 11

Oh lawd. Kalli doesn't need anymore stress! She needs to be getting proper rest so she can remain, happy, glowing and vibrant! The look of a pregnant wife is supposed to have. I know she won't hesitate to read Joseph's bull dog lookin ass if he gets outta line though. And can I say yet again how much I love Michael's possessive jealous ass!! I have to agree with him though, Kalli doesn't need to be hanging with Charles like that. He is an ex and they are at different places in their lives. It's just not appropriate. She knows she doesn't like it when women are around Michael, god forbid an ex. She needs to try seeing it from his point of view. Maybe when Charles gets a woman they can invite them over for dinner, but until then HELL NO. 



Author's Response:

Hey Kat! Yup, Joseph is no good news :/ Let's see if Joseph get inappropriate with her or not! HAHAHA! I know you love Daddy Michae. And it's even better to know what's in his head before he talks :)

Reviewer: littlejen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 11, 2013 01:59 am Title: Chapter 9

oh, how i love these two's relationship <3



Author's Response:

Me too :)

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