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Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 11, 2013 12:27 pm Title: Chapter 27

Another adorable chapter!! Mike and his subtle bragging on his peen, the sweet potato pie, everything was so cute! I loved that poem too and I'm glad Kalli used that moment to reiterate that he doesn't own her, she's not property to be owned. She's his partner, his wife, his soulmate. And yes, he can own her in the bedroom cuz that's a lil different. Lol but overall, this was a cute update. And uh oh at inducing the thirst!!! Mike finna go through the drought! He better prepare himself. So when they finally do have sex he will appreciate it that much more and realize what he has and what it would do to him to have that taken away. Let the thirst begin. I hope Kalli will wear cute outfits that show off her amazing rack and growing booty. Lmao Mike is finna feel the burn! 



Author's Response:

Hey Kat :D I'm glad you liked this chapter ;))

Michael still hasn't learn his lesson, Kay should remind him she is not his property everytime he crosses the line! This is why she'll wait more before having sex with him lol. You're right He needs to know what he can lose if he continues to let Daddy Michael out in public!

"I hope Kalli will wear cute outfits that show off her amazing rack and growing booty. Lmao Mike is finna feel the burn! " I KNOW SHE WILL :D

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 07, 2013 11:42 pm Title: Chapter 26

Lmao at Kalli always being asleep when Michael says something crazy or asks something! That is so funny. And he is anxious for more babies when she hasn't even had this one yet. Bless Kalli's vagina and uterus cuz chile she is gonna need it! Lol Michael is a man with a plan. And that plan is to sex her up and keep her knocked up with his apple headed babies. Anyway, Abi and Jackie had their babies! How cute and they're named after Kalli and Mike. And lol at Mike's inner thoughts about what Jackie said. I think he meant that if it weren't for Mike, he would've never met Abigail..? Idk. It's not important anyway. And I see these two are still fighting the temptation cuz we all know they wanna have sex sooo bad. Lmao 



Author's Response:

Hey Kat :) LMAO! Indeed, Kalli needs to get ready for more babies with Michael! He is cute but he needs to give Kalli a break after Egypt! It's already hard for her to de bragged from a country to another during his tour!

You're right lol, the most important is their happiness :D Thank you for the review

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 06, 2013 06:13 pm Title: Chapter 25

Lawwdddd Liu is marrying that man whore Gideon?? Lmao I guess he cooch has tamed him huh? I guess we'll see. Kalli and Liu will be sisters now, that's so cute! Lol. Anyway, Michael is doing pretty well for being sexually deprived. I know he can't wait to get some though. He'll be going through severe withdrawals soon enough. That man needs his Kalli crack pipe. Lmao. Her hormones are a mess. Michael can be a lil stupid at times but he wouldn't be that damn dumb. Of course he's gonna be there for her when she has the baby!!!! A tour will be the furthest thing from his mind when Kalli and him bring their first bio child into the world. Gosh that baby is gonna be so gorgeous!! And of course, when he's done touring, he can get her pregnant again. Lol 



Author's Response:

Yes, another wedding lol! That's cute! Liu and Kalli always dreamt to be sisters and now it's happening :) HAHA! Michael needs his fix and maybe it wouldn't hurt Kalliope too! She is crazy if she thinks Michael would put his career before his child. Never. LMAO! If Michael gets her pregnant just after the tour, her cooch will never catch a break lol! Thank you for the review :)

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 03, 2013 10:56 am Title: Chapter 24

LMAO at Michael talking to his penis "Calm down not now" I am DEAD! I wonder if they usually have telepathic conversations........I can only imagine the depravity.

Don't tell me Kalli has a crush on Prince I don't think Michael would be able to handle that one. I'm still waiting for slash to make his appearance in this story.

When are you updating Poetic Justice? You can't just leave it hanging like it is..........



Author's Response:

Hey girl ! :D HAHA! That would be total mess! It already is when Michael thinks about Kalliope! I think she should hide her crush for Prince, poor Mike is recovering from the news of her love for Slash lol.

Thank you for the review and the rate :D

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 01, 2013 08:58 pm Title: Chapter 24

DEEEAAADDDDD!!!!! OMG yes! This is the couple I love! So many funny things in this chapter. The nerve of Nathan to talk to Mike like that and still call him bro? Lmao a mess! And Michael constantly taking showers with his horny ass. Kay will reward him with some booty at some point, he just needs to keep being a good boy. The Latoya and Prince story is cute. Latoya was really a mess during the time period she was married to that Jack Gordon. She's already ditzy and add that with a crazy ass controlling man, and you don't even have the same person anymore. Idk who she was and she doesn't either. Sad. Smh. Anyway, I'm glad Michael isn't letting that bother him. He has his Smoochy to make everything all better. And lmao at him saying they should do their selves! He's such a horn ball. Best part of this chapter: "Smoochy, are you attracted to Prince too? I'm asleep. Bye". DEAD. OMG. That girl is a mess!!! They are the funniest couple ever. But I'm proud of Michael being a big boy and apologizing to everyone. One thing I will say is that he will not let Kalliope leave him, which means he will do everything in his power to make things right. He is madly in love with that woman, as he should be. He should never think he doesn't deserve her because she loves him too and is very much in one with him. They're gonna have a nice lil makeup session when the time is right I bet. 



Author's Response:

Hey Kat! YEESS, I'm glad Smoochy and Bambi are back! LMAO, you know Nathan is still mad Michael stole his girl  The Latoya story is real! OMG, I can't believe she brought Michael and Janet lmao!! I don't want to spoil the story but Latoya will make apparitions in the story ;) Michael needs a make a real change because I don't think Kalliope will forgive him anymore if he does it again! LMAO, indeed, Kalliope will reward him in due time :)

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 31, 2013 09:23 pm Title: Chapter 23

Michael is such a troll. Does he realize that he could lose Kalli if he doesn't turn down his jealousy and possessiveness? While a little bit of it is ok, he went way too damn far this time. It's starting to affect her. He needs to really realize the error of his ways. I think Kalli should withhold the crack pipe from him for a few days. He needs to go through withdrawals. And she needs to make him apologize to Charles as well. And did he actually say sorry to Kalli? If not, he needs to. Over and over and over! She should make him get down on his knees. He thinks he's off the hook now and she shouldn't let him off so easily yet. The photo album and the song are precious though. He's such a sweetheart when he's not being an ass. Lol 



Author's Response:

Hey Kat! I think Michael realized it and will try to change. He needs to apologize to all the people he hurt in the process, show Kalliope he is trying! I agree, he is so cute when he is acting like this ;)

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 31, 2013 08:29 am Title: Chapter 22

"I want to fuck you until you remember who you belong to."

I'm thinking that the last shreds of Kalli's calm and restraint will go flying out the window with that statement and she's going to lay into him. They do not live in Afghanistan. He can't make her wear a burkha and stone her to death for talking to another man. DM needs to take a step back and realize how ridiculous he sounds. He crossed the line in this chapter from cute to cray cray.

Irregardless of whether he was right or wrong for canceling their plans to go out with Brooke there's no excuse for him to yell at her in public and then think he can fuck her into submission. Just NO.

Though I did laugh a bit at "Nice for what? Knowing his fucking place!"

At least Charles didn't call him bro.



Author's Response:

There will be blood! I think once Kalli told him how she really feels, with no filter, he will take it back. If he doesn't change now, he might lose Kalliope and this is not what he wants! They are married, they have children and she is pregnant. If he is waiting for a sign to change, this is it!

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 31, 2013 12:16 am Title: Chapter 22

Lawd I wanna hop through this story and slap the curls from Michael's apple shaped ass head!!!! Kalli doesn't need to fuck him right now. He needs to understand his attitude and way he's going about this is all wrong. Kalliope needs to READ dammit! Enough is enough. She needs to read his ass because he's not understanding. He's not a child. She shouldn't need to prompt him on what to say and how to act! She doesn't need to tell his crazy ass that he should've canceled his date with Brooke!!!! That's some shit he should've known himself! This is insane chile. He's being way too demanding and he was disrespectful as hell in that restaurant. That I do not like at all because he was talking like how a father would reprimand their teenage daughter and her boyfriend for sneaking out on a school night. I commend Kalli for keeping her cool at the restaurant and being calm. But FUCK THAT. She needs to throw calm out the window and tell MicHael's ass about himself. That was embarrassing and ridiculous. He didn't have to treat Charles that way. Especially since he wasn't doing anything inappropriate with Kalli at all. Michael is fucking WRONG. Period. Kalli is not his child and she's not his property or slave. 



Author's Response:

Once again...

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Michael needs to change now because Kalliope is through. She is pregnant, she doesn't need this right now. He is very controlling right now and he shouldn't have to, Kalliope would never cheat on him or hurt him intentionally. And nothing would have happened if he did have put his woman first like he should!

Reviewer: littlejen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 30, 2013 10:11 pm Title: Chapter 20

uh oh i smell dramaaaaaaaaaa lol 



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Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 30, 2013 12:37 pm Title: Chapter 21

OMG the return of Daddy Michael's psychotic rage-fueled jealous ass. I love it! 

I loved reading how he worked himself up into a lather from his point of view....the thought process that initiates the transformation into Super Daddy Michael was hilarious. First thinking about Charles putting his arm around her followed by a rapid escalation of paranoia, a litany of cursing and storming out of the restaurant leaving Brooke in the dust. LMAO! That man is a MESS.

And I can't freaking believe he showed up at their dinner. Does he seriously think Charles would try anything with Miko there, one of the bodyguards on HIS payroll? I'm sure he already gave Miko a standing order to beat the shit out of anyone who tries it with his Smoochy. I'm still not sure of Charles' intentions but he can't be that stupid!

I hope he doesn't lose it like with Newton.

Kalli sure taught Michael a lesson for ditching her for Brooke. The best part of the whole thing is that he has no ground to stand on. He has no right to get mad. All she has to say is "Well then you shouldn't have canceled our date!" Though Kalli may have one upped him in that she was at one point engaged and pregnant by Charles. I don't believe Brooke and Michael were ever anything but friends. At least, that's what I think in real life not sure what you're planning for the story. But seriously there is NO chemistry between those two at all. Even in that picture where he was holding her hand he looked super uncomfortable. And she always looks like she's posing n a really fake way because she's probably using him for PR.

Also LMAO at the fact he kept his stalker photos from South Africa. Not surprised at all.....next he's going to put a tail on Charles.



Author's Response:

I know you like Super Daddy Michael and he is back with a vengence :)! HAHA! IKR! It's interesting to know how Michael turn from jealous to daddy Michael lol. Now we know ;) Michael doesn't trsut anybody around his smoochy so I am not surprised that he showed up lol. But I know our Kalli will have something to say about it!

"Also LMAO at the fact he kept his stalker photos from South Africa. Not surprised at all...."

LMAO! Michael might look at those pictures and think "Oh good old times when I could make her followed!"

Thank you for the review :D

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 29, 2013 10:00 pm Title: Chapter 21

Forgot to add that Michael is a hypocritical mess and I hope Kalli tells him that. Read him Kalli girl cuz he needs it. Lol he needs to see the damn light 



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Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 29, 2013 09:55 pm Title: Chapter 21

OMG I'm DEAD!!! This chapter was everything! And Charles is gorgeous, I have to admit. I am secretly hoping Kalli will be working with him when she goes back to work. They actually have a very cute friendship. He doesn't want Kalli in that way anymore. I think he'll always have love for her or an attraction to her just because she's gorgeous, and it's probably the same feelings for her. They have history but that doesn't mean they have to be complete strangers now. And Michael thought he was slick! He shoulda known not to go out with giraffe ass and canceling on his wife! That's his fault. And then on top of it, tried to persuade her with sex? How childish. Michael, chile bye with this mess. Lmaoooo and I am DEAD at him leaving Brooke high and dry at that restaurant. Shoot he was holding her hand, kalli isn't tripping that hard over any of it. She's actually having a good time with Charles. Now here he comes barging in on their time together!! A hot ass mess!! OMG lmaooooooo. He better not embarrass Kalli! And I know she better read his ass for doing this caveman ass shit again. I wish he would come in there and try to demand that she leaves with him. She better tell him to take his ass home! Michael is hilarious when he's possessive but he really does seem insecure when it comes to Charles. He has no reason to feel threatened because Kalli is his wife and carrying his big headed ass baby! Lol seriously. He needs to chill. He's not Kalliope's owner, he's her husband. And he will not tell her what she can and can't do. I smell an argument coming on followed by hot makeup sex. I really hope Kalli will tell him about himself though. He cannot get mad at her for being out with Charles when he left her high and dry for giraffe ass! No no no! Michael better get his damn life. 



Author's Response:

Hey Kat! I'm glad you like this chapter! Quite eventful, right ? : I do want Kalli to go back to work and preferably with Charles. At least Michael knows Charles and once he realizes he doesn't want Kalli like this, he might calm down. Michael was wrong and Kalli will make him pay for it! Let's see how ;))

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 28, 2013 10:08 pm Title: Chapter 20

Oh hell no. Kalli I'm sorry, but girl bye! You're being too damn nice and lenient! If that's the damn case and ex's can be friends and are oh so damn important, why doesn't she give Charles a call and go hang out with him while Michael is out with that flat assed, flat chested ass Brooke? Her giraffe ass only is interested in the publicity anyway, she doesn't give a fuck about Michael. Is this the time period where she was dating Andre Agassi? I don't care. Michael shouldn't be canceling his date with his fuckin WIFE to hang with another bitch. Period. I am not pleased. Michael is an idiot and this will bite him in the ass. Where the hell is Charles when you need him??!!! This is just dumb on his behalf. Kalli is so gonna make him pay for this. She needs to call Charles. Somebody needs to be taught a damn lesson. 



Author's Response:

Hey Kat :) HAHA! I knew you would think Kalli is being too soft with Michael.

"Michael is out with that flat assed, flat chested ass Brooke? Her giraffe ass only is interested in the publicity anyway"

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LMAOOO

It's a little bit before she got married to Andre Agassi :) But you're right. It doesn't matter because Michael shuld be with his wife :/

Let's see if Kalliope decide to teach him a lesson ^^

Reviewer: camilleianPYT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 28, 2013 08:11 pm Title: Chapter 20

While I'm sure Michael has good intentions. if I were Kalli there is NO WAY IN HELL I would allow my husband to cancel plans he already made with me to spend time with some other woman, platonic friend or not. She needs to tell him to march his ass back to that phone and reschedule. That heffer can wait. And if she can't, too bad for her. There is no reason for Kalli to feel jealous because that man is beyond whipped but his wife should never take a backseat to a fairweather friend. Especially a female one. She needs to nip that shit in the bud and if he argues all she needs to do is tell him she's going to go spend time with Charles.



Author's Response:

Hello Camille :) LMAO! Michael is so cute and clueless :) If Kalli really wanted Michael to reschedule his plans with Brooke, she should have told him right away. But at the same time, Michael should have known better than cancelling plans with his wfe for Brooke. Let's see if Daddy Michael makes a come back :D

Reviewer: BestOfJoy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Oct 28, 2013 07:43 pm Title: Chapter 14

OMG you put Eddie in that mofo. Kalli was kinda piss. I dont blame her but at the same time she should know that Michael is still a star and still have his fans to entertain.



Author's Response:

Of course, I did haha :) You're right! This is her new life, she needs to get used to this :/

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